tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post66172701984858893..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The ClownFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74032864759301383122011-09-24T20:21:45.554-04:002011-09-24T20:21:45.554-04:00"like an exploding clown..." I love that..."like an exploding clown..." I love that comparison!!! Perfection!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45185795710999335112011-09-21T03:20:42.495-04:002011-09-21T03:20:42.495-04:00clowns scare me.
you though, ms rebel without a p...clowns scare me.<br /><br />you though, ms rebel without a prompt, inspire and delight! ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81638144417122842312011-09-20T06:34:47.857-04:002011-09-20T06:34:47.857-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63745887633159899262011-09-19T14:32:06.322-04:002011-09-19T14:32:06.322-04:00That image .. oh that image! That second stanza ....That image .. oh that image! That second stanza .. how deliciously written. I love clowns!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42778551480275153232011-09-19T13:30:45.899-04:002011-09-19T13:30:45.899-04:00Correction: 'altruistic', 'mask'
a...Correction: 'altruistic', 'mask'<br />and the usage of 'selfless' and 'altruistic' in the same sentence was somewhat redundant, sorry.Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58655688368176862152011-09-19T13:23:34.654-04:002011-09-19T13:23:34.654-04:00Most times, because of so much sadness within me d...Most times, because of so much sadness within me due to my sensitivity to Life's cruelties and it's human component contributers to such, I spontaneously choose to say things just to make people laugh. Spontaneous humor toward human conditions and foibles just for the sake of making someone laugh or smile. My intentions are selfless and alruistic yet sometimes in retrospect may have been cruel in their mention. Eventually Life will avail a fairness and balance of intended consequences.<br /><br />Wonderful creation Fireblossom. The clown maske does not fit my face.Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48956842900402880752011-09-19T12:09:08.701-04:002011-09-19T12:09:08.701-04:00fascinating as ever shay, your creative fingerprin...fascinating as ever shay, your creative fingerprints all over it are a delight...but so isthe truth that our mouthes are WMDs and should be treated as such...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6559033491187672612011-09-19T11:05:53.687-04:002011-09-19T11:05:53.687-04:00"where innocents stand their eyes as unwary a..."where innocents stand their eyes as unwary as marshmallows" is one of the most imaginative and original descriptions I have ever read. You are famous for original! I love the advice to have a dentist examine a remark before it is uttered. Love every line, last stanza is perfect. You rock, Fireblossom!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45173364502339860242011-09-19T10:58:01.090-04:002011-09-19T10:58:01.090-04:00Excellent poem--and commentary. One can only hope ...Excellent poem--and commentary. One can only hope those for whom it's intended take heed--but then , clowns are not known for their sensitivity to others--just for dressing funny and making asses of themselves.<br />'frightening portal' really nails it.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74778126249571049532011-09-19T10:13:50.557-04:002011-09-19T10:13:50.557-04:00My niece Amanda is frightened of clowns and I can ...My niece Amanda is frightened of clowns and I can kind of see her point! Cool poem. :)Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56336597685455581442011-09-19T10:13:00.131-04:002011-09-19T10:13:00.131-04:00With eyes as unwary as marshmallows. they'd be...<i>With eyes as unwary as marshmallows.</i> they'd better be wary of acrobats with flaming sticks!Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61255022137635416552011-09-19T09:07:01.654-04:002011-09-19T09:07:01.654-04:00I love every word of this. And, I hate clowns.I love every word of this. And, I hate clowns.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com