tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6742170243108274240..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): SuccubusFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49086223638650523042017-03-08T12:30:55.726-05:002017-03-08T12:30:55.726-05:00That must have been quite a dream!That must have been quite a dream!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78283392899162870042017-03-05T00:00:54.320-05:002017-03-05T00:00:54.320-05:00"Honeyfire"...that is cool...but it'..."Honeyfire"...that is cool...but it's just a drop in the bucket of how incredibly amazing this poem is.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76402481622947339092017-03-02T13:13:11.886-05:002017-03-02T13:13:11.886-05:00This is so, so good, Shay. I particularly like &q...This is so, so good, Shay. I particularly like "put a band-aid on the fault line of an earthquake . . ." I wish that I wrote like this. Hell, I wish I dreamed like this.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49857637509600460952017-03-02T01:15:55.037-05:002017-03-02T01:15:55.037-05:00and I so rarely remember my dreams.
skillfully, c...and I so rarely remember my dreams.<br /><br />skillfully, chillingly written ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73660196061671301452017-03-01T13:24:33.520-05:002017-03-01T13:24:33.520-05:00Your dreams reflect your amazing creative talent S...Your dreams reflect your amazing creative talent Shay. Each stanza is rich with wisdom and imagery that blows me away. Love this!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87021525093986371242017-03-01T11:03:12.127-05:002017-03-01T11:03:12.127-05:00My goodness this is perhaps the most powerful poem...My goodness this is perhaps the most powerful poem I have ever read!! Kudos to you Shay!❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73114482933008215392017-03-01T09:29:26.134-05:002017-03-01T09:29:26.134-05:00This is an incredible poem, Shay. So layered with ...This is an incredible poem, Shay. So layered with emotion, notion and the surreal. It is one which needs to be read several times for the full impact to be felt.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74785136618594212672017-03-01T09:15:17.162-05:002017-03-01T09:15:17.162-05:00Keep dreaming Shay!Keep dreaming Shay!Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35727246223950231362017-03-01T06:06:36.535-05:002017-03-01T06:06:36.535-05:00As I was reading this, I was thinking and she has ...As I was reading this, I was thinking and she has to wake up screaming... and then you woke. Very jarring & profoundMarianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76213976007842838922017-03-01T02:53:55.961-05:002017-03-01T02:53:55.961-05:00I know... and most of us always fall for her... ma...I know... and most of us always fall for her... male strength flushed down the drain.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36467714937837424772017-02-28T23:42:04.105-05:002017-02-28T23:42:04.105-05:00A dream? What a whopper of a dream it must have be...A dream? What a whopper of a dream it must have been.<br /><br />There are too many lines to cut and paste--a gem at every corner, with way more than 4 corners--but I especially loved the last line.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15185518989129615902017-02-28T22:10:21.087-05:002017-02-28T22:10:21.087-05:00Very evocative images!! Well written! Very evocative images!! Well written! SuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19853178954168000682017-02-28T18:35:20.280-05:002017-02-28T18:35:20.280-05:00Yes, that last stanza especially. I love "sti...Yes, that last stanza especially. I love "still a little vessel", as are you when you emerge to slay us with a new poem.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75907932886412445302017-02-28T18:16:16.488-05:002017-02-28T18:16:16.488-05:00I love the way you've worked the male figure i...I love the way you've worked the male figure in the background into something more controlling and evil than the creature of pure desire who does his bidding--tho she is frightening enough in all her hunger, manipulation, glory and power--at least she can feel you. The last stanza is just out of the park.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64832509984953198502017-02-28T17:59:59.800-05:002017-02-28T17:59:59.800-05:00This is so true.
It works for you --- this hiding...This is so true.<br /><br />It works for you --- this hiding out, only coming up/down to bite every once in a while.<br /><br />Each of your pieces is richer and more delicious than the last.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com