tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post703606889530624148..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Whee, or How I Learned To Stop Worrying And Love The G'sFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34378267649586599022018-04-19T12:12:57.800-04:002018-04-19T12:12:57.800-04:00"He's got cupboards full of Waterford,
an..."He's got cupboards full of Waterford,<br />and we'll be launched again<br />like space monkeys."<br /><br />That is so original and creative! I am too vested in my "learning" I suppose to ever think of Him as Her but I enjoy reading others thinking and beliefs. I really enjoyed reading this.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38362592701286975892018-04-19T09:02:57.632-04:002018-04-19T09:02:57.632-04:00A favorite song, very ecocative of its time, now g...A favorite song, very ecocative of its time, now gone forever and replaced with plastic that is not fantastic or any kind of lover...I love how you have made us all glass, and I love 'God's crib..' This piece revolves around such a unique metaphor, and is followed through to a divine perfection that is expansive and endearing.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3275564157879043462018-04-19T05:02:55.038-04:002018-04-19T05:02:55.038-04:00That we are growing (if we are) is some comfort.That we are growing (if we are) is some comfort.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60230484289540486462018-04-18T20:23:41.604-04:002018-04-18T20:23:41.604-04:00God's crib is huge.
oh, now that's underh...<b>God's crib is huge.</b><br /><br />oh, now that's underhanded, but brilliant. en pointe. (dance woman, dance - shake your money maker)<br /><br />just let the vessel rock you like a cradle you can trust<b><br />but won't remember<br />from this time when you are dinky, but growing. </b><br /><br />I'm feeling a low growl eruption for the dogs of war in the back of da throat ...<br /><br />oh yeah, goose alright, take it right up the goose and give back with a slap, dropped from On High. <br /><br /><i>Waterford crystal, be damned. Yeah, this is all (not the poem) probably about some other- worldly cosmic fight, over, naturally, some woman-female issue</i><br /><br />and sorry, but I ain't feeling much like dancing around the campfire sparking Cumbayah unless it's like this sistah:<br /><br />http://www.famousfix.com/topic/sweet-honey-in-the-rock-cumbayah<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24941509756405217432018-04-18T15:54:56.868-04:002018-04-18T15:54:56.868-04:00There's oodles I could say but the crap comic ...There's oodles I could say but the crap comic in me just wants to say 'smashing' I'll get my coat ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2289651062027733392018-04-18T14:45:38.388-04:002018-04-18T14:45:38.388-04:00Oh, my goodness. Your mind continues to captivate ...Oh, my goodness. Your mind continues to captivate us with wonders beyond mortal imagination. I dont know how you do it. I am just happy that you do. You amaze us anew with each new poem. I'm not sure why you arent world famous. But you are famous to us.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1638854044880020042018-04-18T14:28:27.066-04:002018-04-18T14:28:27.066-04:00We all know the end of the journey... but not the ...We all know the end of the journey... but not the path it takes... Is it possible to call it stellar if it leads to the stars?brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61250395347371637462018-04-18T12:44:06.107-04:002018-04-18T12:44:06.107-04:00I'm going to try to hold on to this today.I'm going to try to hold on to this today.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67496589750583796592018-04-18T12:37:28.739-04:002018-04-18T12:37:28.739-04:00Well said and done.Well said and done.Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83649525701650134592018-04-18T12:30:54.737-04:002018-04-18T12:30:54.737-04:00Only a he would have plenty of Waterford to drop o...Only a he would have plenty of Waterford to drop on the floor...no apologies necessary. <br />"For now, though, there's this weird fleeting instant<br />while we're in flight,<br />very importantly sweating which way we slosh<br />inside our little temporary capsule"<br /><br />bags of water inside a crystal glass and we worry...An incredible write Shay. In my mind I see Albert, the first monkey launched into space. We all worry too much about our sloshing, I think. We worry too much. Let loose the Divine Dogs...let them bark and prance as they will.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57104175327364010592018-04-18T11:25:38.074-04:002018-04-18T11:25:38.074-04:00You are defying physics staying on fire for this l...You are defying physics staying on fire for this long. What kind a fuel's in the tank? It took me the whole poem to get my jaw back up after reading the first stanza. We're all space monkeys on this bus ... Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54352771557138974412018-04-18T11:22:30.188-04:002018-04-18T11:22:30.188-04:00As Kerry, I like
"Very soon we'll be rele...As Kerry, I like<br />"Very soon we'll be released, set free to flow in the Cosmic Spill." Enjoyed this so much, I felt I was floating along in my cosmic bubble with all of you :-)Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35818629566129282822018-04-18T10:53:49.851-04:002018-04-18T10:53:49.851-04:00I enjoyed reading your write! No worry he has ple...I enjoyed reading your write! No worry he has plenty of waterford.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71161868837443100622018-04-18T10:40:45.501-04:002018-04-18T10:40:45.501-04:00Very soon we'll be released,
set free to flow ...Very soon we'll be released,<br />set free to flow in the Cosmic Spill.<br /><br />I am strangely at peace with this thought.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com