tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7357547153655940308..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The PartyFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13065161838311952672012-01-21T02:13:02.573-05:002012-01-21T02:13:02.573-05:00damn, girl!
♥damn, girl!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43118333019667889302012-01-18T11:00:57.984-05:002012-01-18T11:00:57.984-05:00Feels 'Cuckoo's Nest-like' and I love ...Feels 'Cuckoo's Nest-like' and I love it!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25644047422305172042012-01-13T21:53:59.473-05:002012-01-13T21:53:59.473-05:00I wrote a letter to 'Poetry' magazine and ...I wrote a letter to 'Poetry' magazine and told those highbrow ass-wipes that their hoity-toity, bullshit poetry sucks and that they're out of touch with real people who want real poetry (like yours here). <br /><br />Seriously, Shay. You should have an entire library of your poems published and in my poetry collection. <br /><br />You seriously ROCKED this and kicked that fucking alphabet into total, spike-heeled wearing, begging-for-more SUBMISSION. The poet bitch in me bows with envy to the poet bitch in you. xoxoMarionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21217028382373598512012-01-13T15:27:10.136-05:002012-01-13T15:27:10.136-05:00Shay, you are the Mistress of the Totally Unexpect...Shay, you are the Mistress of the Totally Unexpected!<br /><br />"Prison."Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42120409272719038442012-01-13T13:07:29.485-05:002012-01-13T13:07:29.485-05:00Ah!
I don't remember you interviewing me for s...Ah!<br />I don't remember you interviewing me for stanza one!<br />Classic Shay!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36613029419543882042012-01-13T13:06:15.329-05:002012-01-13T13:06:15.329-05:00Wow, and Hedgewitch said it all. Fantastic writing...Wow, and Hedgewitch said it all. Fantastic writing, the edginess sharp enough it hurts the reader. You are powerful, girl.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65575669802788190912012-01-13T11:58:41.031-05:002012-01-13T11:58:41.031-05:00Very edgy.Very edgy.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82132770663221027242012-01-13T10:34:28.704-05:002012-01-13T10:34:28.704-05:00Gah. This is a torrid tango with madness, love'...Gah. This is a torrid tango with madness, love's and life's--that second stanza, where the poem first appears to be going in a tender direction, then twists in your hand and starts cutting, is so rich you welcome the sharp blade; the machine simile and the blood at the end, cleansing or binding, or simply bleeding out--lock the cellar door and turn out the light.Fine work here, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84556495493703846722012-01-13T10:31:02.375-05:002012-01-13T10:31:02.375-05:00simpler times: prison....
you make them words dan...simpler times: prison....<br /><br />you make them words dance...rather surreal and with heat...maybe i am just weird...<br /><br />burn babyBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58802296184056176072012-01-13T10:21:58.385-05:002012-01-13T10:21:58.385-05:00I am sure at this moment I have no real words .. I...I am sure at this moment I have no real words .. I am shivering .. 'Bleed, girl. Bleed hard.'Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78078733503101469782012-01-13T09:42:30.985-05:002012-01-13T09:42:30.985-05:00Now, you see, if I could just figure out how you r...Now, you see, if I could just figure out how you rip these images out of the ether and pin them so nonchalantly to a line, I would be onto your secret!<br /><br />"I'm a pilot light tucked in among these gas bags."Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com