tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7364177005507813432..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): NatalieFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89268925278059737702010-09-09T18:51:21.710-04:002010-09-09T18:51:21.710-04:00I love that this poem is strong but also funny. I ...I love that this poem is strong but also funny. I felt many different emotions. I laughed about the pigeons mocking. and the line 'she had hair like an approaching storm' made me go WHOA. it also made me a little jealous. p.s. do write more about fall if it suits you. I'm without fall for the first time in my life. I love reading all these posts about fall! long hair :)Dayana Stockdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03732725838165251900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57170411001155226522010-09-09T15:52:15.928-04:002010-09-09T15:52:15.928-04:00That's love - or infatuation!!!
I'm gonna...That's love - or infatuation!!!<br /><br />I'm gonna have to try the phone book - Ha<br /><br />Love your writing Shay<br /><br />Gr8 One Shot<br /><br />Moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28768615793083708862010-09-09T14:39:58.245-04:002010-09-09T14:39:58.245-04:00there was so much imagery in this that i liked...t...there was so much imagery in this that i liked...the r's, the pick pockets, the order...it goes on and on...once again you have written a great piece..thanks for sharing..peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79522873780682305332010-09-09T09:33:24.650-04:002010-09-09T09:33:24.650-04:00I love the line about watching bad art films!I love the line about watching bad art films!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40053538455540705632010-09-09T09:10:33.096-04:002010-09-09T09:10:33.096-04:00Shay you brilliance with words is amazing...you pa...Shay you brilliance with words is amazing...you paint a picture with your own colors of paint that no one else can buy! I think this one is another favorite for me. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50423438924010912042010-09-09T08:15:43.716-04:002010-09-09T08:15:43.716-04:00your style is as unique as awesome shay! this east...your style is as unique as awesome shay! this eastern Europe hint made me feel more..love this atmosphere..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7626173752899629982010-09-08T20:56:44.089-04:002010-09-08T20:56:44.089-04:00This totally describes a roommate I had once (a pl...This totally describes a roommate I had once (a platonic one albeit ;)Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54155884597412471392010-09-08T19:15:59.439-04:002010-09-08T19:15:59.439-04:00I didn't expect your hand to drift THERE, Chic...I didn't expect your hand to drift THERE, Chica...you naughty, naughty poet. ;)<br /><br />Love the name Natalie and this was wonderfully written, btw.Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50610152334393242252010-09-08T18:28:46.576-04:002010-09-08T18:28:46.576-04:00Gotta love an accent :)Gotta love an accent :)KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1390918927277275362010-09-08T17:27:22.589-04:002010-09-08T17:27:22.589-04:00Wonderful post!Wonderful post!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35822710494305555722010-09-08T17:16:08.340-04:002010-09-08T17:16:08.340-04:00LOL @G-Man!
"--her name, Natalie, like a l...LOL @G-Man! <br /><br /><br />"--her name, Natalie, like a loaf of bread on a wooden table."<br />"<br />"She had hair like an approaching storm."<br /><br />Amazing poem. Love the above lines. "Mocked by the pigeons"—they make fun of the way I walk, pigeon-toed of course.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47605233932642511132010-09-08T14:47:25.555-04:002010-09-08T14:47:25.555-04:00You evoke the Eastern European images, adding an a...You evoke the Eastern European images, adding an air of inviting mystery to Natalie. O rperhaps she already had that. Good poem.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26398326211206888292010-09-08T14:18:30.457-04:002010-09-08T14:18:30.457-04:00I love to hear that accent - my friend Tereza has ...I love to hear that accent - my friend Tereza has it, too. The comparison you make to her voice is wonderful.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91380647390009863702010-09-08T13:32:16.714-04:002010-09-08T13:32:16.714-04:00This was like a Truffaut film; it's grainy, re...This was like a Truffaut film; it's grainy, real black&white recollections really work. Very successful. Kudos to you. Thanks, Gay (@beachanny)Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24768177718692169512010-09-08T13:05:23.854-04:002010-09-08T13:05:23.854-04:00I am sooooooooo glad you were curious about my cur...I am sooooooooo glad you were curious about my curiosity as that led me to you and this wonderful poem. I could see her, hear her and smell the bread in the bakery.La Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17073392636329074062010-09-08T12:56:25.163-04:002010-09-08T12:56:25.163-04:00Brillant Shay, just brillant - your "like an ...Brillant Shay, just brillant - your "like an afternoon cloud drifting under her skirt"...this piece is a signature "U" piece of wonderful image --- this - it screams "publish Me".....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16400713870857382832010-09-08T11:59:40.978-04:002010-09-08T11:59:40.978-04:00Aardvark, Billy. 766-5432
Arlo, Klaus. 766-2433
As...Aardvark, Billy. 766-5432<br />Arlo, Klaus. 766-2433<br />Ashley, Herrbert. 765-7766<br />Bisko, Theodore. 766-8996<br />Bracha, Nadine. (unlisted)<br />Brandt, Willy. 766-5443<br /><br />(she reads it so well does she not?)<br /><br />Claus, Santa. 765-3333<br />Crantz, Rose N. 767-2212<br />.<br />.<br />.<br />.<br />.<br />etc.G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6015771866428868762010-09-08T11:54:04.079-04:002010-09-08T11:54:04.079-04:00lol.. the comparison of name to a loaf of bread is...lol.. the comparison of name to a loaf of bread is amusing :D what a different poem..! nice!<br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/hubble/" rel="nofollow">My One Shot</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59520850981724091672010-09-08T11:19:02.371-04:002010-09-08T11:19:02.371-04:00Col-if-fawn-e-a is like RomanyCol-if-fawn-e-a is like RomanyDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59517242046819872482010-09-08T10:59:01.632-04:002010-09-08T10:59:01.632-04:00a fascinating piece shay...she made me want to wai...a fascinating piece shay...she made me want to wait in a bread line...that to me says much...great rememberance...you have a style all your own...nice one shot!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55589748494567663472010-09-08T10:18:09.196-04:002010-09-08T10:18:09.196-04:00Belgrade, Bel Air... whatever.
Still... the idea ...Belgrade, Bel Air... whatever.<br /><br />Still... the idea of you joining an Order is mildly amusing. The Sisters would never be the same, that's for sure!Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78841072367369822912010-09-08T09:48:30.941-04:002010-09-08T09:48:30.941-04:00I have a niece named Natalie so I have to get past...I have a niece named Natalie so I have to get past the image of her and into the image of your Natalie which isn't too difficult as you describe her so beautifully, Shay.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48283255908961225552010-09-08T09:09:16.633-04:002010-09-08T09:09:16.633-04:00(Too funny, Jannie!)
I liked the various images y...(Too funny, Jannie!)<br /><br />I liked the various images you invoke to remember Natalie by.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-396070360950310412010-09-08T07:42:41.583-04:002010-09-08T07:42:41.583-04:00My Dear Lord,
I LOVE this blog! have I ever ment...My Dear Lord,<br /><br />I LOVE this blog! have I ever mentioned that??<br /><br />Her name like a loaf of bread on a wooden table.<br /><br />I dated a guy once, his name was like a plastic bag on a fence post in the wind. Hey! Could I be a poet too? :)<br /><br />xoxoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.com