tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7474146185350125318..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): in the time of the eclipseFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72066171654045101892013-06-26T22:05:00.880-04:002013-06-26T22:05:00.880-04:00all, and especially the fourth stanza... ~ Mall, and especially the fourth stanza... ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28280457791855986952013-06-26T19:30:55.687-04:002013-06-26T19:30:55.687-04:00Beautiful poem, especially that final stanza.
Pat...Beautiful poem, especially that final stanza.<br /><br />Pat<br />Critter AlleyPat Wahlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01138619912065680084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64191483888967525192013-06-26T14:53:48.449-04:002013-06-26T14:53:48.449-04:00"wicker bones" - just those two words al..."wicker bones" - just those two words alone - together - made this poem amazing, Shay.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72846208435122450262013-06-26T14:40:35.730-04:002013-06-26T14:40:35.730-04:00Some pain is nigh on impossible to put into words ...Some pain is nigh on impossible to put into words but you have done so here with that blend of beauty and heartache which twists the blade in every reader's memory of personal loss.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13424970147796623942013-06-26T13:21:12.427-04:002013-06-26T13:21:12.427-04:00I have to say I agree with Mama Zen. I read your c...I have to say I agree with Mama Zen. I read your comment on her poem, and then--a day later (somehow I missed it) I'm finally reading yours.<br /><br />This was the rut you were in? If this was a rut--the result of you getting stuck--I would be literally blown away by something from you that came easily and something that you considered a success.<br /><br />Three words I especially liked in this one.<br /><br />"...but not mine." That says volumes.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86363035241492038262013-06-26T13:12:38.740-04:002013-06-26T13:12:38.740-04:00That third stanza tells a story all its own. Mesme...That third stanza tells a story all its own. Mesmerizing.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40567686010509156912013-06-26T09:55:54.249-04:002013-06-26T09:55:54.249-04:00so busy i dont have blog visit time but i do pop ...so busy i dont have blog visit time but i do pop over here to read every day even tho i dont always leave a comment .. your writing is my oasisDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77218788471190990072013-06-26T08:15:44.632-04:002013-06-26T08:15:44.632-04:00OK, I read this and tears came. I could tell you ...OK, I read this and tears came. I could tell you which parts I loved most but instead I want to say, "Lord, I wish I could write like you."Carol Steel https://www.blogger.com/profile/01331628292567383426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32906035501828221142013-06-26T01:42:05.621-04:002013-06-26T01:42:05.621-04:00Always.Always.Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44332950330466039542013-06-25T22:36:53.139-04:002013-06-25T22:36:53.139-04:00This was just the usual Fireblossom gorgeousness a...This was just the usual Fireblossom gorgeousness and echoing yearning for me, always resonant and always ringing that bell, but then, when I got to the wicker bones, I truly felt it shift into another dimension...a fine and reverberant music in this one, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-92215119282495344812013-06-25T22:30:41.743-04:002013-06-25T22:30:41.743-04:00i like this line: a gift of pain makes it easy to ...i like this line: a gift of pain makes it easy to find my heart--TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12823862145782976242013-06-25T22:29:38.133-04:002013-06-25T22:29:38.133-04:00This is your idea of stuck? I'm just going to...This is your idea of stuck? I'm just going to meander off now . . . muttering impolite things and tearing my hair.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com