tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7607622331338293704..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): DescentFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73628871734796391012011-04-03T22:39:56.705-04:002011-04-03T22:39:56.705-04:00Who among us has not known the futility of those d...Who among us has not known the futility of those dark damp wings?gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59880005928186293532011-04-03T17:39:15.552-04:002011-04-03T17:39:15.552-04:00Just magnificent. No other word will do.Just magnificent. No other word will do.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27813980413265570732011-04-03T12:22:10.841-04:002011-04-03T12:22:10.841-04:00.. we should all have wings.. we should all have wingsHelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9801949780800804202011-04-03T03:37:05.073-04:002011-04-03T03:37:05.073-04:00God, this is GOOD!
xxGod, this is GOOD!<br /><br />xxLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05321514984426181181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41158500964662602962011-04-02T18:58:00.339-04:002011-04-02T18:58:00.339-04:00Denied three times...
cock-a-doodle-doDenied three times...<br /><br />cock-a-doodle-doAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6418498069578535962011-04-02T15:08:08.643-04:002011-04-02T15:08:08.643-04:00Five burning beds for Fireblossom. Absence -- and ...Five burning beds for Fireblossom. Absence -- and denial -- makes the heart grow under into realms of even wilder thunder. Appetite is just the first door, and it can't be opened for all the feasting. Now, what's beyond the door marked "fluttering"? Black wings surely will find out ... BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48662477761104503642011-04-02T10:49:05.109-04:002011-04-02T10:49:05.109-04:00the "tag on my dress" is perfect, and th...the "tag on my dress" is perfect, and then . . . so creepy. Those wings are fabulous as well.patriciacaspershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17048071609997739569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54124202697313596012011-04-02T10:20:29.750-04:002011-04-02T10:20:29.750-04:00the wrath of a woman scorned.the wrath of a woman scorned.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39230389806162857342011-04-02T10:14:25.691-04:002011-04-02T10:14:25.691-04:00The transformation of those wings! It all happens ...The transformation of those wings! It all happens so fast, and I gasped, more than sighed, at the ending. You capture perfectly how love denied indeed turns to an unappeasable appetite and transforms us into dark, greedy things. I say fly away, my friend. There's better feeding elsewhere!Ami Mattisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14902927714516619352011-04-02T05:37:25.479-04:002011-04-02T05:37:25.479-04:00I can see it all - just wow.I can see it all - just wow.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49030901382035592282011-04-01T23:26:28.083-04:002011-04-01T23:26:28.083-04:00Oh, the wings, the wings! Wrapping them around her...Oh, the wings, the wings! Wrapping them around herself and then, at the end , "appetite unleashed, it sounds like fluttering." Brilliant writing indeed. Fantastic!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15253556669674001722011-04-01T23:14:48.559-04:002011-04-01T23:14:48.559-04:00woohooo! hot! i like it hot! i went hot tonight to...woohooo! hot! i like it hot! i went hot tonight too...cracking alive, down the middle...this was wonderful shay, hit just my mood...so its off to bed and have a good night...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36256150990718909192011-04-01T22:44:50.712-04:002011-04-01T22:44:50.712-04:00I love the build up, first time...second time... t...I love the build up, first time...second time... then you let up a bit, and then continued.<br /><br />The lines aboout the sheet having to be burned. Gorgeous!<br /><br />Amy Lee...Is that the singer Amy Lee?Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15268688513492734962011-04-01T21:13:47.319-04:002011-04-01T21:13:47.319-04:00Whoa. What a metamorphosis, trial by and through f...Whoa. What a metamorphosis, trial by and through fire...took my breath away there for a moment. And the wings are so big, so black, swallowing everything, requiring everything...but still delicate as a sigh, fluttering...wonderful contrasts, excellent writing.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com