tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post7698924004831771192..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): DispensationFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71599949117791181652012-07-09T12:20:48.147-04:002012-07-09T12:20:48.147-04:00It's very touching. :) The black lace touching...It's very touching. :) The black lace touching the white seems to sum up life.LL Cool Joehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13916666100971008775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48614514914943049202012-07-09T09:24:37.457-04:002012-07-09T09:24:37.457-04:00Short, sweet, and a touch sad. I love it. (I like ...Short, sweet, and a touch sad. I love it. (I like your new Emmylou photo better-looks more natural!)Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58849792918027172232012-07-08T21:29:37.590-04:002012-07-08T21:29:37.590-04:00For such a simple format, this piece rolls so nice...For such a simple format, this piece rolls so nicely off the tongue. Added to my short list of favorites by you. *Applause!*HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1268259517728989222012-07-08T17:54:50.445-04:002012-07-08T17:54:50.445-04:00Love the contrasts of emotions and colors in each ...Love the contrasts of emotions and colors in each stanza ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67643654588418553182012-07-08T17:16:35.345-04:002012-07-08T17:16:35.345-04:00Beautiful. Sigh.Beautiful. Sigh.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78559873588243714092012-07-08T13:05:20.124-04:002012-07-08T13:05:20.124-04:00You are as powerful with simplicity as you are wit...You are as powerful with simplicity as you are with verbosity (is that a word?) This just made me sigh with the pure genius of your words... (and I love that little top! :)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78096719049206661862012-07-08T11:28:15.021-04:002012-07-08T11:28:15.021-04:00I echo Mama Zen. Each stanza is a beautiful little...I echo Mama Zen. Each stanza is a beautiful little creation, and I like the contrast between them. I smiled to noted the heightened effect of the rhyme - made everything so crisp.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52951581079999180142012-07-08T08:52:38.505-04:002012-07-08T08:52:38.505-04:00This is perfection.This is perfection.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82819002260731810832012-07-08T02:02:39.028-04:002012-07-08T02:02:39.028-04:00Very lovely verse!
Madeleine Begun KaneVery lovely verse!<br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80131282035818411442012-07-07T22:22:51.435-04:002012-07-07T22:22:51.435-04:00I always love it when you work with rhyme, because...I always love it when you work with rhyme, because you never let it even begin to feel forced or obvious, and here is no exception--simple, elegiac almost, fragile-feeling statements that are knotted indivisibly together like lace neither black nor white--maybe ecru, the color of the flesh that longs and suffers and rejoices.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39264419076682486332012-07-07T22:11:49.890-04:002012-07-07T22:11:49.890-04:00I like this one.I like this one.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56244279877197385442012-07-07T21:45:34.393-04:002012-07-07T21:45:34.393-04:00"There is a point of fascination
Where the bl..."There is a point of fascination<br />Where the black lace touches the white" ... Sheesh. No kidding.<br /><br />"Tell me no, and I will go<br />Deep in the brambles, bleeding" ... Beautiful and sad.<br /><br />And what if I tell you no but mean yes? What will you do then? (Shhh. Don't tell me now; save your answer for your next poem.)<br /><br />;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58875100624810966982012-07-07T21:37:33.465-04:002012-07-07T21:37:33.465-04:00There is a sweetness here, but something sharper u...There is a sweetness here, but something sharper underneath.<br /><br />And this, without Bolthouse? ;)Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.com