tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8006456246068422213..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Bone GirlFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63505551402422009192010-04-22T22:43:29.732-04:002010-04-22T22:43:29.732-04:00Wow. That was really well-written. Sad though.
F...Wow. That was really well-written. Sad though. <br /><br /><a href="http://www.fourthgradenothing.com/" rel="nofollow">FourthGradeNothing.com</a>Allyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06076912971009055017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68957791574427144762010-04-21T21:28:54.508-04:002010-04-21T21:28:54.508-04:00This is an amazing piece of writing about somethin...This is an amazing piece of writing about something I think about all the time...you hit it perfectly and you describe her pain and ours so eloquently in the rats...<br /><br />thank you Shay as always...<br /><br />your words leave me speechless, but filled and nourished not from the rats that will breed and take but from the sun and the love that will give and grow.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15127343815869529555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31239194687124553092010-04-21T10:33:30.191-04:002010-04-21T10:33:30.191-04:00Really liked this. Your blog is so awesome.Really liked this. Your blog is so awesome.Sadakohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01164802394129505587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56691574920053815882010-04-21T10:03:22.135-04:002010-04-21T10:03:22.135-04:00Them who would rule the sovereign individual throu...Them who would rule the sovereign individual through caustic soda are once again expertly backhanded! Way to get them Shay.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62840321611569018952010-04-21T00:42:02.230-04:002010-04-21T00:42:02.230-04:00Poor Bone Girl.
She should realize that the rats a...Poor Bone Girl.<br />She should realize that the rats are RATS. They are not worthy of that much devotion.<br /><br />In the end, the rats don't give a shit. Of course, they never did.machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80799182818184139042010-04-20T23:27:44.385-04:002010-04-20T23:27:44.385-04:00They have been nibbling at me lately, too. You kno...They have been nibbling at me lately, too. You know, when they nibble, there's a perverse pleasure in seeing all that flesh peel off. Ribs do make such wonderful xylophones.RachelWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18225401230724459199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22195615446199665482010-04-20T22:58:36.483-04:002010-04-20T22:58:36.483-04:00Sounds so sad!!Sounds so sad!!Together We Savehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17294423259234525733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7989056121351790452010-04-20T19:41:06.146-04:002010-04-20T19:41:06.146-04:00If Bone Girl wants to be a flamenco dancer, glue t...If Bone Girl wants to be a flamenco dancer, glue that flower behind her right ear and let her dance!!Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58631849444418459862010-04-20T18:31:22.377-04:002010-04-20T18:31:22.377-04:00Can so relate to that part about the cafe.
I thin...Can so relate to that part about the cafe.<br /><br />I think sad and eloquent fit perfectly.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47366080996476274812010-04-20T16:16:38.802-04:002010-04-20T16:16:38.802-04:00Oh-- this is a sad way of viewing our getting old....Oh-- this is a sad way of viewing our getting old... rather as if getting decrepit- in and out- were and came together..<br />I agree with ellen, it's the b*****rats who did this to the bone girls...Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44209829535046084732010-04-20T14:52:41.552-04:002010-04-20T14:52:41.552-04:00I find rat poison highly effective.
Bone Girl is ...I find rat poison highly effective.<br /><br />Bone Girl is beyond tragic.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54319485111264520642010-04-20T12:54:50.150-04:002010-04-20T12:54:50.150-04:00If only the bone girls could see what they have le...If only the bone girls could see what they have let the rats do to them.<br /><br />If only they could say...I don't give a rat's ass.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84784295586534987602010-04-20T12:20:00.427-04:002010-04-20T12:20:00.427-04:00I felt that one all the way down to the marrowI felt that one all the way down to the marrowDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24380588882666957692010-04-20T12:03:57.017-04:002010-04-20T12:03:57.017-04:00This is sad, but I agree with others that it is el...This is sad, but I agree with others that it is eloquently stated. <br /><br />There are too many "bone" girls with rats in our society.<br /><br />We have such a warped sense of beauty and it's rather terrifying how it sends the "rats" scurrying out to find their victims.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36624303927777610642010-04-20T11:17:25.022-04:002010-04-20T11:17:25.022-04:00So very, very sad.So very, very sad.Debbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17480046958714954128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1405174100298202042010-04-20T11:11:21.214-04:002010-04-20T11:11:21.214-04:00Fantastic. Even if it is horribly sad, this is a ...Fantastic. Even if it <i>is</i> horribly sad, this is a fantastic piece.<br /><br />I can't think of a thing to say except to echo Mama Zen. Damn the rats and all the pestilence that comes with them.Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76466775194292655302010-04-20T11:07:06.374-04:002010-04-20T11:07:06.374-04:00You've said so much in so few words. I know b...You've said so much in so few words. I know bone girl. She lives inside my head but fat girl always bitch slaps her and makes me eat. :-) Great writing, FB. Blessings!!Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64102118445716453152010-04-20T10:55:31.635-04:002010-04-20T10:55:31.635-04:00Damn the rats.Damn the rats.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com