tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8091013598444173564..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): DirtFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87350396860087437012018-01-09T23:44:07.577-05:002018-01-09T23:44:07.577-05:00Sexy, powerful, walking the danger line all hooker...Sexy, powerful, walking the danger line all hooker red and high...Whew!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82461250426159852762018-01-09T15:36:39.496-05:002018-01-09T15:36:39.496-05:00Danger... this is what we crave, but seldom seek (...Danger... this is what we crave, but seldom seek (at least if you have survived being teenager)brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30356017552273920122018-01-09T13:42:44.299-05:002018-01-09T13:42:44.299-05:00"hooker red and high like this"
I love ..."hooker red and high like this"<br /><br />I love that repetition.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51998099897087828592018-01-09T11:57:41.943-05:002018-01-09T11:57:41.943-05:00You ask questions, that possibly have no answers, ...You ask questions, that possibly have no answers, or perhaps the answers change by the moment?annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43054345061184001232018-01-09T11:35:59.185-05:002018-01-09T11:35:59.185-05:00Reads like music, as a good poem should.
What inde...Reads like music, as a good poem should.<br />What indeed is under the dirt, behind a smile, in our heads?<br />Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21504486494905099602018-01-09T11:26:09.391-05:002018-01-09T11:26:09.391-05:00I can just see the satisfaction on the face of the...I can just see the satisfaction on the face of the one who indulges their curiosity by investigating this dangerous delight further. Sometimes we just have to know - even if we know that full knowing is a dangerous endeavor. Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16724331270163007522018-01-09T10:44:01.900-05:002018-01-09T10:44:01.900-05:00In my head, this was read by a woman dressed to ki...In my head, this was read by a woman dressed to kill, lips the color of fresh blood, a lethal weapon in her hand, a grin on her face... She recites the poem while gliding towards a listener... That smile never leaves her face... Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67064301748420713072018-01-09T10:07:33.122-05:002018-01-09T10:07:33.122-05:00There's something both deadly and harmonious a...There's something both deadly and harmonious about this, every word glowing, every image translucent with meaning...you are writing at the top of your form these days Shay--a joy, albeit a dangerous one, to read.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78907665275784862462018-01-09T08:18:07.367-05:002018-01-09T08:18:07.367-05:00She rhymes, and so evilly! Such dirts sound like t...She rhymes, and so evilly! Such dirts sound like thirst. A dangerous music. Such precarious heels. Amen.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60674825599108415002018-01-09T07:58:36.847-05:002018-01-09T07:58:36.847-05:00i suppose growth is always a lil dangerous. but sh...i suppose growth is always a lil dangerous. but she ain't dirty. she's just bright rightAngiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413074557542736813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75281799764339872252018-01-09T07:11:11.036-05:002018-01-09T07:11:11.036-05:00So lyrical! And what can be better than "blac...So lyrical! And what can be better than "blackly bright"!!!Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64128711120748107822018-01-08T14:08:53.949-05:002018-01-08T14:08:53.949-05:00Exactly what I wanted. I think the answer to all t...Exactly what I wanted. I think the answer to all those questions is "Yes." ~Often the most dangerous and exhilarating thing of all.<br /><br />Thank you for writing such a "dirty" poem.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61832340686006083972018-01-08T12:28:24.851-05:002018-01-08T12:28:24.851-05:00This made me sing on the inside. What an amazing l...This made me sing on the inside. What an amazing lyrical piece. Beautiful images, Shay.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67551461846090343272018-01-08T12:18:01.421-05:002018-01-08T12:18:01.421-05:00LOL, love your label, "dare to post umprompte...LOL, love your label, "dare to post umprompted". There are such beautiful visuals in this poem: the "moon-gray shed", the "petal walls in my head", and the ravens going "blackly bright". Sigh. "It's dangerous hooker red and high like this" - but high on life is the best high there is. In awe, upon reading, as usual.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.com