tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8450545534289896366..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Ice Cream WalkFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24999241816875044532017-09-23T02:16:29.044-04:002017-09-23T02:16:29.044-04:00i agree with hedgewitch '...an acorn fell on a...i agree with hedgewitch '...an acorn fell on a tin roof like an angry word...' only you could imagine that, Shay. brilliant! <br /><br />♡Dani Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18012898548478062463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40996039254280675882017-09-17T07:55:52.597-04:002017-09-17T07:55:52.597-04:00I could feel the whole thing.I could feel the whole thing.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8925167293442627412017-09-17T01:55:48.908-04:002017-09-17T01:55:48.908-04:00Been there, walked that, felt there. I was there ...Been there, walked that, felt there. I was there with you. Good write!Sarah Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06548593069470592148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90398403429483849442017-09-16T13:13:15.316-04:002017-09-16T13:13:15.316-04:00'..an acorn fell on a tin roof like an angry w...'..an acorn fell on a tin roof like an angry word...' That is so you, Shay, to throw in a glittering line like that offhand, a casual glimmering in a night-dark mood of uneasiness and dissatisfaction--what do we fear more, I wonder, the shadow, or the thing itself we never get around to naming? This is just fine, evocative writing. I felt as if I were there.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22302569050827010142017-09-16T13:05:51.085-04:002017-09-16T13:05:51.085-04:00Utterly brilliant. Beyond words to the spaces betw...Utterly brilliant. Beyond words to the spaces between breathing.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76702133449176225302017-09-16T12:06:39.708-04:002017-09-16T12:06:39.708-04:00I was right there with you - the too much or not e...I was right there with you - the too much or not enough, the not being who someone thought us to be, fine specimens that we are notwithstanding.....the walk on the edge of uneasiness at all that lurks in the darkness. Thank God for the dogs of the world, I say, who show us what true acceptance, devotion and unconditional love really feels like.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5553611874499364122017-09-16T11:43:41.883-04:002017-09-16T11:43:41.883-04:00Gosh this is beautifully evocative!💘 I love "...Gosh this is beautifully evocative!💘 I love "There's someone else, or you're someone else from who they thought" and can relate to "the book marker is lost. Better have all the caramel cookie dough now. So I couldn't sleep, after." What I love most about this poem is that its both fierce and tender at the same time. It deals with our everyday life - the things we do, how we feel about stuff happening around us.. and so much more! Thank you so much for participating, Shay💘Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.com