tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8486420521600201709..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): ChloeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12822872850674979492009-03-11T22:04:00.000-04:002009-03-11T22:04:00.000-04:00Ironic? Me?I am loving "Chloe-form."Bob was a foil...Ironic? Me?<BR/><BR/>I am loving "Chloe-form."<BR/><BR/>Bob was a foil and fodder for Chloe. She was merely culling the herd. They would only starve in the winter if she didn't.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-557335306504059642009-03-11T21:51:00.000-04:002009-03-11T21:51:00.000-04:00"For chrissakes, Bob!" exclaimed a shaky-voiced Do..."For chrissakes, Bob!" exclaimed a shaky-voiced Don Parkley upon discovering what remained of his golf partner. Chloe looked down from a high branch,her eyes as clear and calm as summer moons."<BR/><BR/>Ok, in an effort to feel Bob's pain I read this again. But Chloe is still up in the tree whilst Bob's friend finds him in who knows what kind of Chloe-form. Even the way you spelled "chrissakes" is funny. It's ironic and funny to me.Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80992727452513999692009-03-10T22:36:00.000-04:002009-03-10T22:36:00.000-04:00Hehe, RK. Nobody uses their garages anyway!Stay tu...Hehe, RK. Nobody uses their garages anyway!<BR/><BR/>Stay tuned for "Chloe Snaps Back"!<BR/><BR/>My mother always said that one should always do things with grace. She never said homicide was any different. <BR/><BR/>YES! Mama Zen wins the right to suggest my next poem with a one word prompt. Elizabeth Hitchins was the alias of Nicole Wallace, Detective Goren's arch-nemesis! My favorite show.<BR/><BR/>Now Pouty, Daryl felt badly for old Bob. What does it say about us that we find so much humour in the misfortunes of others? ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59559998508593072232009-03-10T21:48:00.000-04:002009-03-10T21:48:00.000-04:00"Now resides inside the Elizabeth Hitchins Maximum..."Now resides inside the Elizabeth Hitchins Maximum Security Facility For Women" AKA the prison for the annoyingly undead.<BR/><BR/>It took me a long time to make it through this one because I kept having to stop and regain my composure from laughing so hard. That bit about Bob Newburg just tickled my funny bone.Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86407640599232162852009-03-10T21:38:00.000-04:002009-03-10T21:38:00.000-04:00Law and Order: Criminal Intent?Law and Order: Criminal Intent?Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-553242945960746522009-03-10T19:52:00.000-04:002009-03-10T19:52:00.000-04:00um....I'm gonna be real careful on the golf course...um....I'm gonna be real careful on the golf course from now on...<BR/><BR/>I'll be fixing *my* slice immediately...<BR/><BR/>I love that she did these things with her girlish grace. That is always the perfect way to do things.The Superfluous Bloggerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08245813501484871279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66481338033879108742009-03-10T17:54:00.000-04:002009-03-10T17:54:00.000-04:00Eek! Although Chloe reminds me of the main charac...Eek! Although Chloe reminds me of the main character in the movie Ginger Snaps.Judithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16354890444410748967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28665575249226965212009-03-10T16:31:00.000-04:002009-03-10T16:31:00.000-04:00This is sad! However I loved the line about her bu...This is sad! However I loved the line about her burning down the garage and her parents disagreeing.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90687025056324921992009-03-10T11:14:00.000-04:002009-03-10T11:14:00.000-04:00Hi Kristin! I'm glad you liked. :-)Yes Jannie, tis...Hi Kristin! I'm glad you liked. :-)<BR/><BR/>Yes Jannie, tis me within, and this is me; twas always thus and thus shall be.<BR/><BR/>Scarlet, I had fine time creating that whole prison/gift shop sequence. I'm waiting for someone to spot my little joke in naming the facility.<BR/><BR/>All my poems are from life, Momcat. Nice to see you!<BR/><BR/>Thank you, Shadow, I always love your comments.<BR/><BR/>Indeed, K. Closer than we generally like to think. <BR/><BR/>Oh, you just like tigers, Kelly! I loved your comment. Thanks!<BR/><BR/>Now there's an idea, Mama Zen! I can feel the wheels starting to turn already. And, um, any golfer who appears in my poetry is likely to meet a bad end. Any sport whose name originates from "Gentlemen Only, Ladies Forbidden" is never going to catch a break from me. <BR/><BR/>Hi Daryl! Well yes, poor Bob, but he DID disturb a lady at her lunch.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19222860445828036092009-03-10T10:48:00.000-04:002009-03-10T10:48:00.000-04:00Oh poor Bob ..Oh poor Bob ..Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24141294817512260642009-03-10T10:24:00.000-04:002009-03-10T10:24:00.000-04:00I adore Chloe. I want Chloe to meet the succubus!...I adore Chloe. I want Chloe to meet the succubus!<BR/><BR/>"Some men enjoy playing golf--<BR/>Some of them to a degree never intended by God."<BR/><BR/>And, that's hilarious.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40900815197953825762009-03-10T09:11:00.000-04:002009-03-10T09:11:00.000-04:00this mesmerised me, i followed the thread of your ...this mesmerised me, i followed the thread of your words like a loyal mutt but secretly wishing to identify with the feral side of chloe. You give expression to the female psyche that is so trod upon. bravo. <BR/>Kx <BR/>p.s some of the words that the google word verfication conjure up are weird. I got gulatess!Kelly https://www.blogger.com/profile/16136234174682473917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-896953229026147952009-03-10T07:05:00.000-04:002009-03-10T07:05:00.000-04:00For the record - I love over the top comments.I lo...For the record - I love over the top comments.<BR/><BR/>I love the poem. Thanks for the shout out.<BR/><BR/>I like to be reminded how close humans really are to the animal kindgom.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66864239415676263972009-03-10T05:57:00.000-04:002009-03-10T05:57:00.000-04:00how i love your writing, the humour that filters t...how i love your writing, the humour that filters though, mixed in gently with the dark side, wonderful!Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52499260492471558522009-03-10T03:09:00.000-04:002009-03-10T03:09:00.000-04:00That's so weird it could be real!That's so weird it could be real!BioniKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160435019367425283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79716938706191691382009-03-09T21:31:00.000-04:002009-03-09T21:31:00.000-04:00Brilliant! "She works in the inmate stitchery mak...Brilliant! <BR/><BR/>"She works in the inmate stitchery making little samplers for the Department of Corrections gift shop..." I love that! :)Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17560614073319109150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10736957395951385372009-03-09T20:58:00.000-04:002009-03-09T20:58:00.000-04:00Dear Lord, Lady. Have you always been like this? ...Dear Lord, Lady. Have you always been like this? Your imagination, that is? I think that is something that's born in the bones, not acquired as you go about your years.<BR/><BR/>Bravo!Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83372958817043156882009-03-09T19:11:00.000-04:002009-03-09T19:11:00.000-04:00OMG I love this one!OMG I love this one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com