tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8752549653229954796..comments2024-03-26T19:38:47.952-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Station SevenFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-652856182625080472011-05-23T01:38:47.173-04:002011-05-23T01:38:47.173-04:00"Her skin tingles.
Her heart constricts.
It..."Her skin tingles.<br /><br />Her heart constricts.<br /><br />It is like a first kiss."<br /><br />Love this! you do have a way with sci-fi, but then you have a way with everything you write. the Shay way. {smile} ♥<br />daniAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15614411336200083942011-05-19T15:05:41.212-04:002011-05-19T15:05:41.212-04:00"Beyond the gray border of good sense."
..."Beyond the gray border of good sense."<br /><br />We should all be so lucky.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18246523358864585362011-05-19T13:41:02.700-04:002011-05-19T13:41:02.700-04:00WOW .. and it made my mind wander to several books...WOW .. and it made my mind wander to several books .. wander in a good way as in I gotta tell Shay about this or that .. but first I must read this again and again ...Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17975056802199338452011-05-19T12:36:52.494-04:002011-05-19T12:36:52.494-04:00Love it! The last few lines are particularly power...Love it! The last few lines are particularly powerful. Thank you, as always, for sharing your awesome talent with us.Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290572009221670011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25211911894675136232011-05-19T11:52:23.437-04:002011-05-19T11:52:23.437-04:00for some reason this reminds me of an aesop fable ...for some reason this reminds me of an aesop fable The Camel Dances.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31864681863098865572011-05-19T11:15:54.551-04:002011-05-19T11:15:54.551-04:00I love "their hearts have become like empty p...I love "their hearts have become like empty plastic bottles". WOW! Love the cosmic dancer. Fantastic writing, Shay!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2969124767062083312011-05-19T08:40:20.445-04:002011-05-19T08:40:20.445-04:00so was she dancing like Michael Jackson?
in all ...so was she dancing like Michael Jackson? <br /><br />in all seriousness, i hope my death is as beautiful...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26082822551341165882011-05-19T07:31:01.049-04:002011-05-19T07:31:01.049-04:00Actually, I think Kurt Vonnegut and Isaac Asimov h...Actually, I think Kurt Vonnegut and Isaac Asimov had a child (your mother) and you got a bit from both grand-dads...<br /><br />Check out your family tree! 'Tis true!Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65776386560553108272011-05-19T00:50:06.219-04:002011-05-19T00:50:06.219-04:00Thank you for the bedtime poem. Even if she is doo...Thank you for the bedtime poem. Even if she is doomed, she is beautiful, she is art, she has an audience. <br /><br />Sweet dreams, amiguita!Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28933714959230613822011-05-18T23:50:13.183-04:002011-05-18T23:50:13.183-04:00This poem is incredible. And has so much in it to ...This poem is incredible. And has so much in it to ponder that I am going to come back and read it again in the morning.Your writing is a continual amazement. I love the comment about your mom and Isaac Asimov - too funny. But that would explain it:)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45529162746376469592011-05-18T23:48:45.193-04:002011-05-18T23:48:45.193-04:00You are on a sci-fi roll, and it just keeps gettin...You are on a sci-fi roll, and it just keeps getting better. Out there where the air is thin and the gravity is a joke is where the very best dancing is, I've heard. Few have the courage to take off their helmets and go for it though--the pay is so bad and the benefits--well, fine if you have no dependents maybe. But the boss is supposed to be cool.. <br /><br />Beautiful imagery and I like the way the lines pile up in uneven blocks, tiptoe, then cascade on, like the movements of a dance, or, at the end, like a bright straight shaft that carries the full weight of the piece with precision.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78081676100688217482011-05-18T23:32:10.741-04:002011-05-18T23:32:10.741-04:00I'm still wonderin'...Are you sure your ma...I'm still wonderin'...Are you sure your mama didn't have an affair with Isaac Asimov? <br /><br />The image of a split seed...the blind dark--so perfect and at the same time, so unique.<br /><br />My sense of rhythm might be so off (actually, when it's said, "White people can't/shouldn't dance," they have watched ME) but my mind keeps wanting another line after the vending machine line. A short one, but a line nonetheless.<br /><br />But probably I am wrong. Your spirits NEVER have an off day or make a mistake...<br /><br />As usual, you put twisted, rich images in my head.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6579061514015962652011-05-18T23:06:19.930-04:002011-05-18T23:06:19.930-04:00I'm hoping you've seen the movie "Moo...I'm hoping you've seen the movie "Moon" with Sam Rockwell. If not, I hope you do yourself a favor and check it out. Sure, it doesn't have a fancy lunchroom, but it does have a hidden surprise or two... :-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.com