tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post8949498909044447869..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): For ChokecherryFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69231562049927185422008-08-27T23:19:00.000-04:002008-08-27T23:19:00.000-04:00Thanks, lady. This poem wouldn't behave, I had to ...Thanks, lady. This poem wouldn't behave, I had to keep rewriting it, but the funeral belles survived from the first draft to the last, though truth be told, they were funeral "bells" the first time through. I guess, when in doubt, I turn to nature. <BR/><BR/>Thanks for stopping in!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18272419195088952072008-08-27T07:45:00.000-04:002008-08-27T07:45:00.000-04:00Hey Shay- This is beautiful. I loved the images, e...Hey Shay- This is beautiful. I loved the images, especially "I cut the funeral belles..And lay them on the riverbank along with my dress."C. Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11957562888440201122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51946579970860522142008-08-26T07:44:00.000-04:002008-08-26T07:44:00.000-04:00Thanks, sister mine. :-)I always love to see that ...Thanks, sister mine. :-)<BR/><BR/>I always love to see that you have been here. I'd like to wrap you and Cynthia up and just keep you here!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11193582356980050922008-08-26T00:03:00.000-04:002008-08-26T00:03:00.000-04:00*smile* There's a dawn every day. The occasional a...*smile* <BR/><BR/>There's a dawn every day. The occasional aubade seems in order. <BR/><BR/>You still write beautifully, Cookie. Thank you.Nicholehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14493388319402851234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86811287487452434562008-08-25T10:10:00.000-04:002008-08-25T10:10:00.000-04:00Many thanks, Cynthia. I wouldn't be a very good Am...Many thanks, Cynthia. I wouldn't be a very good Amy Lowell fan if I didn't write an aubade from time to time, now would I? ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91263805321547771722008-08-23T20:28:00.000-04:002008-08-23T20:28:00.000-04:00So lovely Shay, an aubade to a lover whose fragran...So lovely Shay, an aubade to a <BR/>lover whose fragrance lingers on.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10598169309616545734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14366228845023383112008-08-23T19:49:00.000-04:002008-08-23T19:49:00.000-04:00Thanks, sweetie! :-)Thanks, sweetie! :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55509684600109660312008-08-23T02:33:00.000-04:002008-08-23T02:33:00.000-04:00Beautiful.Beautiful.rc_girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15743385087668882170noreply@blogger.com