tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post9119467417532929360..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): My Favorite DevilFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85190976888686640872010-11-17T18:59:15.659-05:002010-11-17T18:59:15.659-05:00Every word of this is beautiful.Every word of this is beautiful.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2724830748152352852010-11-15T15:15:59.138-05:002010-11-15T15:15:59.138-05:00Wicked beautiful - great words. You have such wond...Wicked beautiful - great words. You have such wonderful imagination, Shay.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22891446322910223462010-11-15T15:13:29.287-05:002010-11-15T15:13:29.287-05:00As always .. deeply movedAs always .. deeply movedDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21374275404945362402010-11-15T14:02:30.516-05:002010-11-15T14:02:30.516-05:00I aint heard haint before.
your work always surp...I aint heard haint before.<br /><br /><br />your work always surprises and breathes.<br /><br /><br />I know how to keep my soul and bones together,<br /><br />"And that's why I nap in the middle of the wild dog pack<br /><br />When you come callin' my name<br /><br />With that sharp look in your eye."<br /><br /><br /><br />Truly love yer stuff<br /><br /><br /><br /> Aloha from Waikiki :)<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /><br />><}}(°>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34998524925093750962010-11-15T07:58:35.101-05:002010-11-15T07:58:35.101-05:00Dear Tiger-friend,
I didn't imagine I would be...Dear Tiger-friend,<br />I didn't imagine I would be crying( in a good way) at 4:55 in the morning. The line about "I'm ugly not stupid really got to me and then that the character had the experience of being made to feel beautiful, ah redemption and then loss. I am sorry you know such devils. You, my friend, are neither stupid or ugly. You are beautiful and the truth is that you are. <br />Much love,<br />Weasel-friend<br />xoxoLa Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13928216324306901592010-11-14T23:49:20.940-05:002010-11-14T23:49:20.940-05:00Holy smokes, that was good. I think this might ev...Holy smokes, that was good. I think this might even be my all time favorite poem of yours.<br />Bravo!<br />xo jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31616743848608626912010-11-14T22:05:28.820-05:002010-11-14T22:05:28.820-05:00"The daughter of two devils, after all"...."The daughter of two devils, after all"...good line, Chica! :)Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80796656709126828342010-11-14T21:20:43.770-05:002010-11-14T21:20:43.770-05:00There's too many fantastic lines to choose jus...There's too many fantastic lines to choose just one. I think this may be one of my favorites of yours...Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39555467742609316882010-11-14T21:19:28.819-05:002010-11-14T21:19:28.819-05:00Hey Shay,
what a poet you are, I like the head blo...Hey Shay,<br />what a poet you are, I like the head blown off, for me it is my honesty that evades me and does the demolition of my scull cap.<br /><br />thanks for your writing, keep sharing.<br />DianneDiannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18323454057921441274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14114429738951832982010-11-14T17:32:51.325-05:002010-11-14T17:32:51.325-05:00The "swirl and devastation" is one of my...The "swirl and devastation" is one of my favorite lines here.<br /><br />Way cool poem. Waaaay cool.<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63642764105579353502010-11-14T11:56:55.367-05:002010-11-14T11:56:55.367-05:00"And that's why I nap in the middle of th..."And that's why I nap in the middle of the wild dog pack"<br /><br />absolutely marvelous. thank you very much for sharing this.Lisa Ursuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03906234995763166824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86515529345211036232010-11-14T11:36:08.439-05:002010-11-14T11:36:08.439-05:00Sightings of the feral girl indeed. Nice marriage ...Sightings of the feral girl indeed. Nice marriage of childhood canniness with awakening miasma of adulthood smarts/soul. You do know that if it doesn't kill you, it probably ain't poison, I think, but more like those drugs that take different people different ways--the ones they tell you not to try aren't always as bad as the rep they get...<br />Lots of great lines...nappin in the wild dog pack, when the pressure dropped, so did I...but my fave is the couplet about the saviour's name. Really nice work, feral one. (Sorry I was watching dumbarse Sunday morning political shows and was tardy to the better program you had on here.)hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83809005321278074842010-11-14T11:00:15.592-05:002010-11-14T11:00:15.592-05:00Just gorgeous, Shay. Left me breathless.Just gorgeous, Shay. Left me breathless.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61180786696945835072010-11-14T10:38:49.880-05:002010-11-14T10:38:49.880-05:00Absolutely inspired and inspiring writing, like no...Absolutely inspired and inspiring writing, like nothing else I have ever read . Leaves me stupified and in awe. It is every word glorious but I especially was caught by "slip through the morning fog like a river spirit." The Muse spirit that lives in you is a force to be reckoned with. This is just mind-blowing writing. Whew! Thank you for existing and writing these poems!!!!!!!!!!! and making our lives so much richer.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57909801166529530612010-11-14T10:36:23.991-05:002010-11-14T10:36:23.991-05:00damn, Shay
If I have to live with lies, let them ...damn, Shay<br /><br />If I have to live with lies, let them be your lies,<br /><br />All down the rest of my life.<br /><br />effing hot...<br /><br />girl, if you ever stop writing I will have to come see about that.<br /><br />so you best not ever start to stoppin'<br /><br />~ReneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13305713291993745282010-11-14T10:16:23.746-05:002010-11-14T10:16:23.746-05:00Oh heaven's to betsy
this is so gorgeous
wickl...Oh heaven's to betsy<br />this is so gorgeous<br />wickly gorgeous<br />to read...but I'm certain not to have lived<br />I would love to read a novel written this way..<br />talent so much talent you haveSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17237890564793761442010-11-14T10:01:04.468-05:002010-11-14T10:01:04.468-05:00LOVE it!LOVE it!Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68577809019245814372010-11-14T09:59:29.980-05:002010-11-14T09:59:29.980-05:00yes and hell yes.yes and hell yes.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36509228012945189352010-11-14T09:47:59.996-05:002010-11-14T09:47:59.996-05:00Powerful. Shay, you write about things I'm sti...Powerful. Shay, you write about things I'm still afraid to, at least until some people are dead. <br /><br />"I run through the cornstalks like a haint" is such a gorgeous line. <br /><br />I had to read this one through twice, Shay, to savor it properly.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76490865525831587122010-11-14T09:18:58.688-05:002010-11-14T09:18:58.688-05:00you make me ache shayyou make me ache shayBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84685596439795821782010-11-14T09:13:19.198-05:002010-11-14T09:13:19.198-05:00Once again you blow my mind better than any dust d...Once again you blow my mind better than any dust devil...Your passion rips across the page, scattering words in its wake...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com