tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1052984528388545420..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Black-Eyed SusansFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39076898109470647692010-08-03T13:46:43.904-04:002010-08-03T13:46:43.904-04:00As beautiful a poem it was I can't help but be...As beautiful a poem it was I can't help but be stuck with the image of Ophelia floating in the lake. I always enjoy reading your work. Your imagery is just spectacular. Thank you for sharing.Robert Lloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536151998025229196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65260862107470612852010-08-03T07:50:00.797-04:002010-08-03T07:50:00.797-04:00Fireblossom, you have a beautiful blog; and you re...Fireblossom, you have a beautiful blog; and you really seem to be in tune with the flowers. Black-eyed Susans ARE striking! And even moreso through your poem.Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33758622435663813232010-08-02T14:43:22.598-04:002010-08-02T14:43:22.598-04:00Powerful, powerful poem! "wafer on the tongue...Powerful, powerful poem! "wafer on the tongue of the shrouded water" - amazing! I especially admire "there are mornings when I am struck bline without anything but the black-eyed susans". Wow.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45853340237894023842010-08-02T14:40:29.234-04:002010-08-02T14:40:29.234-04:00well, i don't know what to say. great poem ( m...well, i don't know what to say. great poem ( maybe to great for me)Moryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83171601373543979102010-08-02T04:35:03.401-04:002010-08-02T04:35:03.401-04:00a poem with a lot of depth in your writing - and m...a poem with a lot of depth in your writing - and my favorite line is ..when the water fanned her dark hair like a lover's fingers...an "off-moment"Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29129346034700454672010-08-01T23:56:51.070-04:002010-08-01T23:56:51.070-04:00Another poet from Poets United, saw the link in th...Another poet from Poets United, saw the link in the pantry, and I must say that this is a really awesome piece. Deep and insightful. Great post!<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39490292162998514382010-08-01T22:55:30.475-04:002010-08-01T22:55:30.475-04:00the first two lines...had me ...I wanted a novel a...the first two lines...had me ...I wanted a novel after that...wonderful, wonderful image of a woman with so much to tell....I am never disappointed with my visits here...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13498673598764341402010-08-01T18:10:01.593-04:002010-08-01T18:10:01.593-04:00I saw your poem link posted on Poets United and re...I saw your poem link posted on Poets United and really enjoyed it. An absolutely stunning poem, flling with images and emotion.<br /><br />(I will be sending you an invitation to my blog...so you can visit it as well..wath for it from blogger.)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31333538703255630852008-10-21T16:04:00.000-04:002008-10-21T16:04:00.000-04:00Thanks, Tracey-Ann. I'm partial to this one, so I'...Thanks, Tracey-Ann. I'm partial to this one, so I'm glad to hear you liked it, too. :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6655633915409454292008-10-21T07:28:00.000-04:002008-10-21T07:28:00.000-04:00Beautiful, straight from the soul.Beautiful, straight from the soul.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55066448625536060462008-09-21T15:57:00.000-04:002008-09-21T15:57:00.000-04:00Mmm, I love those paintings. Gabriel's paintings a...Mmm, I love those paintings. Gabriel's paintings and Christina's poems! <BR/><BR/>I don't like dry spells, but they seem to go with the territory, don't they? Hopefully you'll be writing up a storm in the near future. Your readers certainly hope so!<BR/><BR/>Thanks so much for your very kind words, Wordcrafter!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28617009384121793622008-09-21T11:43:00.000-04:002008-09-21T11:43:00.000-04:00Very beautiful images again Fireblossom, I am thin...Very beautiful images again Fireblossom, I am thinking of pre Rapahaelite paintings, those women with flowing manes, something controlled and strong, yet also fluid and vulnerable at the same time in their liquid eyes; Rossetti's "Beata"? I love reading you, it makes me long for my muse who has -temporarily- gone awol:)Beatrice Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47979148702592664732008-09-18T16:37:00.000-04:002008-09-18T16:37:00.000-04:00Thank you, bd! I love your blog as well. :-)Thank you, bd! I love your blog as well. :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-430579421059430252008-09-18T13:54:00.000-04:002008-09-18T13:54:00.000-04:00Wow what a poem. This is very deep and powerful. I...Wow what a poem. This is very deep and powerful. I love your site and black eyed susans.<BR/><BR/>love-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35217082850516765582008-09-16T18:47:00.000-04:002008-09-16T18:47:00.000-04:00There is certainly nothing to forgive! I'm glad yo...There is certainly nothing to forgive! I'm glad you enjoy what I create, and I really loved your comment here. <BR/><BR/>Btw, I've added Dark Star Discovery as one of the blogs I "follow." :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65055592633240976292008-09-16T16:37:00.000-04:002008-09-16T16:37:00.000-04:00Your poetry is beautiful, soulful, and mysterious ...Your poetry is beautiful, soulful, and mysterious and powerful... all the best qualities of feminine grace. Forgive me for being sappy, but I just love your writing.Martyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048847365398559366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68498050186196601192008-09-16T06:20:00.000-04:002008-09-16T06:20:00.000-04:00Thanks you, both Cynthia and Arts & P. I keep ...Thanks you, both Cynthia and Arts & P. <BR/><BR/>I keep returning to this subject, I guess I just don't know what to do with it except to write these Chokecherry poems.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68822245488966034382008-09-16T05:05:00.000-04:002008-09-16T05:05:00.000-04:00It's nice, deep and meaningful well done!It's nice, deep and meaningful well done!Art and Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01991284507367796696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83559646353323499402008-09-16T02:42:00.000-04:002008-09-16T02:42:00.000-04:00O, a deep river of a poem this isshayfire, herself...O, a deep river of a poem this is<BR/>shayfire, herself, a wafer ...tongue on shrouded water,<BR/>...fog was a mercy...and on...A<BR/>haunting poem of love lost written<BR/>like a sha-woman whose spells<BR/>are useless, whose vulnerability<BR/>she can't stop.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10598169309616545734noreply@blogger.com