tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1127983366231384626..comments2024-03-28T08:35:27.826-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): blood eggFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43228212495794300782013-07-31T20:23:13.887-04:002013-07-31T20:23:13.887-04:00That last line is really gorgeous, Shay.That last line is really gorgeous, Shay.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53514633114811909242013-07-30T16:05:30.277-04:002013-07-30T16:05:30.277-04:00Like so many great events that teach the sudden la...Like so many great events that teach the sudden language of ascent, it only hurts at first. This quietly self-assured, as I assume you are in real-life. Loved... MoskarinoBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53706408296076728392013-07-30T12:25:20.256-04:002013-07-30T12:25:20.256-04:00For some reason this made me think of the native a...For some reason this made me think of the native american burial custom of exposing the dead on a platform open to the sky...one of the best short poems I've read in a long time.<br /><br />And that's it for the remaining hair--bald as a cueball now. hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61876644274320194992013-07-30T12:21:29.497-04:002013-07-30T12:21:29.497-04:00Do I have a choice?
Rapture!Do I have a choice?<br />Rapture!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57168648497015502462013-07-30T08:28:15.558-04:002013-07-30T08:28:15.558-04:00poignant, visceral.poignant, visceral.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47078803057878901592013-07-30T07:58:14.509-04:002013-07-30T07:58:14.509-04:00yup, that last line is brilliant.yup, that last line is brilliant.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16250013329361736532013-07-30T07:44:42.481-04:002013-07-30T07:44:42.481-04:00"...this sudden language of ascent" is a..."...this sudden language of ascent" is a brilliant line, as usual.<br /><br />(The photo is striking as well.)Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63421969875913262622013-07-30T00:16:11.924-04:002013-07-30T00:16:11.924-04:00Yummy - I'll stick with a poached egg for now....Yummy - I'll stick with a poached egg for now. That pic is too awesomeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60859058931070411012013-07-29T23:40:12.852-04:002013-07-29T23:40:12.852-04:00Sudden language of ascent!
Yes!
ALOHA from Hon...Sudden language of ascent!<br /><br />Yes!<br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> ~ > < } } ( ° > <3Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.com