tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1155607907527659884..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): DybbukFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58280044921486122392013-11-01T13:05:58.914-04:002013-11-01T13:05:58.914-04:00Red Sea turning into the Dixie Highway; damn, I wi...Red Sea turning into the Dixie Highway; damn, I wish that I had come up with that.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78794570271138599692013-11-01T07:27:34.009-04:002013-11-01T07:27:34.009-04:00Those Yiddish monsters are the worst! They'll ...Those Yiddish monsters are the worst! They'll kill you with guilt! I wanna hear the one about the rabbi and the massage therapist! <br /><br />I used to play the Tommy James version of Crimson and Clover over and over (ha!) when I was a kid!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48136033503756029182013-10-31T20:39:08.567-04:002013-10-31T20:39:08.567-04:00Love your authentic "VOICE."
Love that c...Love your authentic "VOICE."<br />Love that chick's tattoo! Xxmyinnerchick.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07523772091083412278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52528819440343358872013-10-31T11:58:55.998-04:002013-10-31T11:58:55.998-04:00They say Crimson and Clover is about 'Reds'...They say Crimson and Clover is about 'Reds' and Grass...<br />I believe it!<br />Fishnets? I'm showing some off today...Happy Halloween FBG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18060354820559362622013-10-30T23:30:57.227-04:002013-10-30T23:30:57.227-04:00Soul inhabiting spirit...eeek...nicely done. Soul inhabiting spirit...eeek...nicely done. Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8492824612320935702013-10-30T20:06:26.192-04:002013-10-30T20:06:26.192-04:00as always, you brought your A game to the out of s...as always, you brought your A game to the out of standard. I too had to google dybbuk, but lrds I happy I did child. I love how you portray the dybbuk as simply trying to help out instead of maliciously taking over a body. Too clever for me, I am off to read it a third time! Thanks for posting! and viva la<br />Isadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8268325612636945972013-10-30T18:05:17.456-04:002013-10-30T18:05:17.456-04:00I too had to look up Dybbuk ~ Different name, but...I too had to look up Dybbuk ~ Different name, but familiar spirit ~ Enjoyed the conversation specially crickets singing when it slips into your skin ~ Good one Shay ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48904679219510880922013-10-30T17:51:57.990-04:002013-10-30T17:51:57.990-04:00I am somehow both lulled and eerily disturbed by t...I am somehow both lulled and eerily disturbed by this. Which is perfect chilling perfection. Well done. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68963078886206226372013-10-30T17:26:48.523-04:002013-10-30T17:26:48.523-04:00This is right up your alley. I had to look Dybbuk ...This is right up your alley. I had to look Dybbuk up. Pretty cool i've never even heard of "Jewish Mythology" something new. Also love the JJ cover song. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15785448307741199782013-10-30T16:58:01.761-04:002013-10-30T16:58:01.761-04:00This was so much FUN to read aloud:~) For some rea...This was so much FUN to read aloud:~) For some reason it brought out my Southern accent. <br /><br />I also had to look up "dybbuk." I had no idea what it was. Heaven for forbid, what we do without Google!<br /><br />BTW I loved the word "F'rinstance." I never knew how to spell this word before, but do now. <br /><br />How life's smiling on you and thank you for making me laugh the other day with your comment.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11611702218654862392013-10-30T16:29:05.996-04:002013-10-30T16:29:05.996-04:00Great greeting dybbuk to prey! What an entrance! ...Great greeting dybbuk to prey! What an entrance! And who will notice? The victim never did much talking anyway. Grin.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22927293379390204692013-10-30T16:05:55.143-04:002013-10-30T16:05:55.143-04:00Nothing like well fashioned wicked!! Love this!!Nothing like well fashioned wicked!! Love this!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75888800112964328062013-10-30T16:01:22.363-04:002013-10-30T16:01:22.363-04:00"I've been misrepresented, yanno.
Mind if..."I've been misrepresented, yanno.<br />Mind if I sit closer?<br />See? I'm not some stenchy horror from a nightmare.<br />I've got French nails<br />and fishnets.<br />Nothing but class here, honey."<br /><br />Shay, this stanza made me laugh and laugh.<br /><br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48969660843658523592013-10-30T14:39:03.329-04:002013-10-30T14:39:03.329-04:00Your dybbuk has a bit of that old nails on the bla...Your dybbuk has a bit of that old nails on the blackboard touch to her...but she seems a most practical sort who will get the job done and that's what counts--love the crickets, the Red Sea parted for the Dixie Highway--quite a metaphor, actually--and I just can't imagine what possessed me to open the mail on a Saturday!hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49525887298217544932013-10-30T13:17:15.634-04:002013-10-30T13:17:15.634-04:00Ghoulishly perfect.Ghoulishly perfect.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13570218021872258342013-10-30T12:33:40.237-04:002013-10-30T12:33:40.237-04:00Seductive threat!
AlohaSeductive threat!<br /><br /><br />AlohaCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26984421197395104202013-10-30T12:33:10.026-04:002013-10-30T12:33:10.026-04:00Please, a dybbuk can be ignored, but you, Shay, ca...Please, a dybbuk can be ignored, but you, Shay, cannot. Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60108436397550969482013-10-30T11:48:07.620-04:002013-10-30T11:48:07.620-04:00mmm, Shay, slipping into something more comfortabl...mmm, Shay, slipping into something more comfortable? :) ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90498735330603486752013-10-30T11:22:51.642-04:002013-10-30T11:22:51.642-04:00You always, make me smile. This was fabulous and l...You always, make me smile. This was fabulous and like always more creative than one person should be allowed to be. Happy Halloween Shay!Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21782150314849239042013-10-30T10:29:59.738-04:002013-10-30T10:29:59.738-04:00Don't believe her oh so believable voice, don&...Don't believe her oh so believable voice, don't be naive, you've heard it all before, stay vigilant, deep down you know how this ends. I was yelling out load by the end! Fabulously evil.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29944165668474021692013-10-30T10:12:41.154-04:002013-10-30T10:12:41.154-04:00I love the voice in this poem. It is at once persu...I love the voice in this poem. It is at once persuasive and malicious. Perfectly ghoulish for the season.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19802487275393958532013-10-30T10:01:39.552-04:002013-10-30T10:01:39.552-04:00i had to google 'dybbuk'. and i'm glad...i had to google 'dybbuk'. and i'm glad for your tag on the whiskey - i went back and re-read the poem after thinking of both and it all made sense. TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com