tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1192041400041854401..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): in waterFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91456995095886185912013-08-21T14:20:12.997-04:002013-08-21T14:20:12.997-04:00I love the imagery of this poem. How much you made...I love the imagery of this poem. How much you made me see with your words. I loved the "stately grackles"...I'm not sure too many people would describe them that way, but I agree and like it. And how many times have I watched cardinals bobbing on a branch. <br /><br />Then the last line...the many different meaning:~)<br />Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58594402384752845862013-08-21T06:19:51.578-04:002013-08-21T06:19:51.578-04:00Ah, Maude, yes! So missed you and your art. You ma...Ah, Maude, yes! So missed you and your art. You make living worthwhile.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25938597381596143972013-08-20T23:00:59.030-04:002013-08-20T23:00:59.030-04:00So lost in another that you forget yourself. Beau...So lost in another that you forget yourself. Beautifully done!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37870470014529531512013-08-20T16:52:50.092-04:002013-08-20T16:52:50.092-04:00Mmmmmm...that was delicious. You sure can stir the...Mmmmmm...that was delicious. You sure can stir the mood with your writing. You can cast a tone better than anyone I know. Loved it.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62551936137263154892013-08-20T12:17:19.480-04:002013-08-20T12:17:19.480-04:00Wowzers! This even stirred some dim, ancient memor...Wowzers! This even stirred some dim, ancient memory in me, old cretin that I am!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51918099158431924552013-08-20T11:27:23.415-04:002013-08-20T11:27:23.415-04:00***there were your slender fingers,
your hand
wet ...***there were your slender fingers,<br />your hand<br />wet to the wrist,<br />stirring me and holding my heart as I spread and rippled***<br /><br />LOVE!!!myinnerchick.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07523772091083412278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4817735296231830262013-08-20T11:23:07.334-04:002013-08-20T11:23:07.334-04:00Truly beautiful.Truly beautiful.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40197142501184124482013-08-20T00:19:54.541-04:002013-08-20T00:19:54.541-04:00How beautiful that she was there to stir you gentl...How beautiful that she was there to stir you gently in your reverie.gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56700830503370683732013-08-19T23:01:57.462-04:002013-08-19T23:01:57.462-04:00H to the OT!!!!!!!!!!!!
ALOHA from Honolulu
...H to the OT!!!!!!!!!!!!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> ><}}(°> Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2180275993161936712013-08-19T21:51:08.812-04:002013-08-19T21:51:08.812-04:00"your hand wet to the wrist" and "s..."your hand wet to the wrist" and "spread and rippled." Gorgeous phrases...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55172991066494345852013-08-19T21:10:14.770-04:002013-08-19T21:10:14.770-04:00Dreamlike and full of ripples of starlight and mag...Dreamlike and full of ripples of starlight and magic. I also like the phrase 'clutch of trees,' which seems to play into the personification, especially at the ending where the deep waters flow as intended. Just lovely, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63808678437955098142013-08-19T21:08:08.444-04:002013-08-19T21:08:08.444-04:00sweet and dreamy.sweet and dreamy.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34662323811469256212013-08-19T20:44:26.537-04:002013-08-19T20:44:26.537-04:00What a gorgeous poem!What a gorgeous poem!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.com