tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1459776955659469288..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): LiesFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81804021773654017132011-12-06T23:20:27.566-05:002011-12-06T23:20:27.566-05:00Wow. I have read several of your amazing epics thi...Wow. I have read several of your amazing epics this evening.......you just keep hitting them outta the park! You go, girl!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10045250806156213562011-12-06T17:02:31.448-05:002011-12-06T17:02:31.448-05:00Now that is one that is over the fence, outta the ...Now that is one that is over the fence, outta the park and GONE! Major league hit there! Love the Poe too!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27849920104367275342011-12-06T04:10:26.807-05:002011-12-06T04:10:26.807-05:00i LOVE your words, SP! can NOT get enough! {only h...i LOVE your words, SP! can NOT get enough! {only highlighted in the green of envy} {ok, 16 coats of green envy covering every pore of my body!} ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78179489502356567052011-12-06T01:08:07.359-05:002011-12-06T01:08:07.359-05:00This is awesome.This is awesome.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28991668596577756282011-12-05T16:24:34.816-05:002011-12-05T16:24:34.816-05:00Perhaps you are the one who put the roses and cogn...Perhaps you are the one who put the roses and cognac on EAP's grave all those years?Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55539015463206829592011-12-05T14:51:38.570-05:002011-12-05T14:51:38.570-05:00You have a poetic voice like none other.. and I as...You have a poetic voice like none other.. and I ask myself: Jealous much?<br /><br />This just swept me up and along - I loved how the threads were woven back together at the end, but my fave part is the monologue of the airman. "The sky is filled with devils and blackbirds...<br /><br />Beautiful gypsy poetry, this.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79898155867144480282011-12-05T13:06:37.009-05:002011-12-05T13:06:37.009-05:00The phrase "out of the park" comes to mi...The phrase "out of the park" comes to mind here. You're a bit more economical these days in length, but here it serves you well to be more discursive. The Rickenbacker part is blood-chilling, like opening a window in your nightgown when it's below zero and feeling that polar air come into the room. Of course, I like the Edgar Allan Poe part best--wandering through a baseball poem and finding salvation. Pure sorcery of the gypsy Fireblossom variety.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44739678899402651932011-12-05T10:19:08.017-05:002011-12-05T10:19:08.017-05:00I cant quite put my finger on what exactly that ca...I cant quite put my finger on what exactly that captivated me, but I do love it.kudos1<br />but could u do something about the font?something a bit more clear?Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13250815286565394802011-12-05T06:09:16.625-05:002011-12-05T06:09:16.625-05:00Hey< This is great! You led us through quite so...Hey< This is great! You led us through quite some wonderful road! Excellent!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80874443246016223682009-11-15T22:36:58.708-05:002009-11-15T22:36:58.708-05:00I came via Cloudia.
And have been reading, avidl...I came via Cloudia. <br /><br />And have been reading, avidly.<br /><br />And when you combined Luther's hymns with beer hall songs (as, of course, they truly were)... ...well, to misquote another, I came, I saw, You conquered.<br /><br />Well done, elegant phrasing, wonderful images, and not just style, but substance, too. <br /><br />*swoon*Sepiru Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08600130405222535830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37085324999983870572009-11-12T07:29:31.545-05:002009-11-12T07:29:31.545-05:00This is another rich poem, filled with fantastic i...This is another rich poem, filled with fantastic imagery. I especially like the part about E.A. Poe... Excellent, Shay!Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31730124687876627332009-11-09T11:17:40.396-05:002009-11-09T11:17:40.396-05:00And his spirit flew away like an oriole,
Set free...And his spirit flew away like an oriole,<br /><br />Set free by my love<br /><br /><br />sighDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31117830316605331232009-11-09T01:51:31.186-05:002009-11-09T01:51:31.186-05:00ohhh...I so needed one of your fixes tonight....th...ohhh...I so needed one of your fixes tonight....thank you for never disappointing! :)Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23915184167337770272009-11-08T22:20:06.580-05:002009-11-08T22:20:06.580-05:00This is some rich, resonant s**t!
Aloha, Friend...This is some rich, resonant s**t!<br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha, Friend!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15806240312411749242009-11-08T20:16:34.538-05:002009-11-08T20:16:34.538-05:00Holy crap, that's a poem. Makes me want a hot ...Holy crap, that's a poem. Makes me want a hot dog, real bad.Elizabeth Bradleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03150221675618198674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87323532887619048162009-11-08T19:16:30.721-05:002009-11-08T19:16:30.721-05:00I wish I could speak French and leave you somethin...I wish I could speak French and leave you something in French on your blog but, alas, it is not to be. Now, I could teach you some Zombie slang, but that's another story...listen for azurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04300428777385011211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77311054945204126932009-11-08T15:33:06.534-05:002009-11-08T15:33:06.534-05:00I think I need to reread this one a few times.
I ...I think I need to reread this one a few times.<br /><br />I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41507362705997707592009-11-08T13:17:45.632-05:002009-11-08T13:17:45.632-05:00What's to be said here except WOW!!!?
I've...What's to be said here except WOW!!!?<br />I've had to interrupt my break to read you... I couldn't help it!!!<br />How can you combine so many issues in just one poem leading to the same and opposite directions? Only You can do that my dear Shay<br />HUGSDulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15151227721628155052009-11-08T13:15:56.720-05:002009-11-08T13:15:56.720-05:00lies give you something to talk about
when friends...lies give you something to talk about<br />when friends get together.jack senderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08935449260703670377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78888850650627607542009-11-08T09:06:06.957-05:002009-11-08T09:06:06.957-05:00Shaysie...You ROCK!
This was awesome!
Have you eve...Shaysie...You ROCK!<br />This was awesome!<br />Have you ever seen Woody Allen's movie...Zelig?g-manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05597285773359986622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86558086382066512182009-11-08T07:25:35.361-05:002009-11-08T07:25:35.361-05:00How interesting!How interesting!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87434864874059152572009-11-08T07:04:22.883-05:002009-11-08T07:04:22.883-05:00This one blew me away, into the sky, over the Coca...This one blew me away, into the sky, over the Coca Cola signs...I l love it, Chica!Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17560614073319109150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85755002932602758512009-11-08T07:01:38.411-05:002009-11-08T07:01:38.411-05:00amazing.amazing.Vodka Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04734323418017847775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82419173228070020202009-11-07T21:57:05.934-05:002009-11-07T21:57:05.934-05:00Misters Poe and Ruth were fortunate to have crosse...Misters Poe and Ruth were fortunate to have crossed your path. The dancer was very lucky indeed, for she had the love of a poet.machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60615333070403664592009-11-07T21:32:56.714-05:002009-11-07T21:32:56.714-05:00I can't even begin to tell you how much I like...I can't even begin to tell you how much I like this one. Beautifully written.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com