tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1499583908336405253..comments2024-03-28T19:48:05.247-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Red LeavesFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18965440422509600022011-11-12T18:52:20.377-05:002011-11-12T18:52:20.377-05:00an acoustic guitar the only accompaniment... you ...an acoustic guitar the only accompaniment... you and Coal harmonizing... i'll pay up to $100 bucks for a concert ticket. ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47278976704355415582011-11-09T20:37:38.641-05:002011-11-09T20:37:38.641-05:00Others have said what I was going to say...you sho...Others have said what I was going to say...you should submit this to a song-writing site. If you don't already get Writer's Digest or Poets and Writers, grab a copy. They have calls for submission. I like the way you used the color prompt. VictoriaVictoria Ceretto-Slottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11791036961620087347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4445082670802010352011-11-07T14:23:09.506-05:002011-11-07T14:23:09.506-05:00I can hear it to music, love the repetition, so pe...I can hear it to music, love the repetition, so perfect, perfectChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25976102838377529902011-11-06T18:36:52.456-05:002011-11-06T18:36:52.456-05:00Ha ha. :) This is cute.
I like the funky brown ja...Ha ha. :) This is cute.<br /><br />I like the funky brown jacket on the chair.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79250525705438920502011-11-06T11:43:15.576-05:002011-11-06T11:43:15.576-05:00I want to hear this one to music...I want to hear this one to music...Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05049511202014141182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30284062762312135042011-11-06T10:58:43.627-05:002011-11-06T10:58:43.627-05:00This, though seemingly simple, has a very catchy l...This, though seemingly simple, has a very catchy lyric quality that communicates so much deeper than the mere words. The colour play is great too.Zoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16929674746784140738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88095474907435406772011-11-06T10:24:31.634-05:002011-11-06T10:24:31.634-05:00I agree, there's a song being born here. Nice....I agree, there's a song being born here. Nice.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67977012735762988242011-11-06T09:28:36.545-05:002011-11-06T09:28:36.545-05:00These words beg to be sung.These words beg to be sung.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24492789563874898072011-11-06T09:13:42.154-05:002011-11-06T09:13:42.154-05:00Love the chant, song-like appeal, vivid images!Love the chant, song-like appeal, vivid images!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20837875444150879812011-11-06T08:57:07.872-05:002011-11-06T08:57:07.872-05:00Your words are MY red leaves holding me to this ea...Your words are MY red leaves holding me to this earth. Lovely, awesome poem! xo <br /><br />"But words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling like dew, upon a thought, produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions, think." Lord ByronMarionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67238878617109126832011-11-06T08:57:07.481-05:002011-11-06T08:57:07.481-05:00I'm with Hedgewitch. I thought this a song.I'm with Hedgewitch. I thought this a song.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75716737818186057492011-11-06T08:32:33.786-05:002011-11-06T08:32:33.786-05:00Sounds like you are singing red leaves.. red leave...Sounds like you are singing red leaves.. red leaves...Love this ~diScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42611561159918498652011-11-06T00:10:55.613-04:002011-11-06T00:10:55.613-04:00i can feel the pace of the feet walking through th...i can feel the pace of the feet walking through those red leavesAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72521315828577263412011-11-05T23:20:08.731-04:002011-11-05T23:20:08.731-04:00The rhythm, the bit of whimsy...delightful.The rhythm, the bit of whimsy...delightful.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46128133238904148032011-11-05T23:11:46.602-04:002011-11-05T23:11:46.602-04:00And I like this poem pretty good too!And I like this poem pretty good too!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58181480110221118342011-11-05T22:35:30.864-04:002011-11-05T22:35:30.864-04:00def think coalblack had a hand in this...def lyric...def think coalblack had a hand in this...def lyrical...playful and nice imagery...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2898838467863281482011-11-05T22:24:41.695-04:002011-11-05T22:24:41.695-04:00This reads like a song. And it's red beyond be...This reads like a song. And it's red beyond beleaf. *dodges* okay--I like the mirror verses, with their lovesong lilt and reverb repetition. I like the lady's voice as well.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83310359996752391152011-11-05T22:23:22.205-04:002011-11-05T22:23:22.205-04:00Context makes such a difference! Thanks for the lo...Context makes such a difference! Thanks for the lovely poem and tune.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77066053458268839282011-11-05T22:18:51.782-04:002011-11-05T22:18:51.782-04:00I like this pretty good!I like this pretty good!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com