tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2106420747882222617..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): When She Was A Boy / Kiss MeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78536575867669892102011-07-19T17:40:01.683-04:002011-07-19T17:40:01.683-04:00thank youthank youCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4424831134797859552011-07-18T17:48:53.719-04:002011-07-18T17:48:53.719-04:00I want to thank everyone for these fantastic and k...I want to thank everyone for these fantastic and kind comments!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3459071559474849362011-07-18T09:37:47.668-04:002011-07-18T09:37:47.668-04:00Paired to perfection!Paired to perfection!Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20019493063172734032011-07-18T09:08:42.474-04:002011-07-18T09:08:42.474-04:00Song lyrics baby. Song lyrics here.Song lyrics baby. Song lyrics here.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60327669586905677432011-07-18T08:46:47.854-04:002011-07-18T08:46:47.854-04:00As the days dragged by,
She gathered up her guts a...As the days dragged by,<br />She gathered up her guts and left home.<br /><br />She carved herself good and sharp<br />Right down to the bone.<br /><br />Unique!Jacqueline Howetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522485407848765933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40714629454756264822011-07-18T08:43:50.574-04:002011-07-18T08:43:50.574-04:00When She Was A Boy is pure brilliance.When She Was A Boy is pure brilliance.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19508306960162820352011-07-18T08:03:08.088-04:002011-07-18T08:03:08.088-04:00very delightful, both of them!
The first, sure cou...very delightful, both of them!<br />The first, sure courage born of persistent struggle to create an identity.<br />The second, tunes well with the first, it's like the same beautiful girl has grown all confident, to not hide but persuade even the mighty.<br />Nice read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52066495802621938152011-07-17T23:01:46.762-04:002011-07-17T23:01:46.762-04:00My favorite Bob Dylan song: "Love Sick" ...My favorite Bob Dylan song: "Love Sick" off of his Time Out Of Mind album. <br /><br />"I see, I see lovers in the meadow<br />I see, I see silhouettes in the window<br />I'll watch them 'til they're gone<br />And they leave me hangin' on<br />To a shadow."HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20688814930290827062011-07-17T22:09:17.211-04:002011-07-17T22:09:17.211-04:00Shay...
Kick Ass!!!Shay...<br />Kick Ass!!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45238684826674129642011-07-17T21:14:01.840-04:002011-07-17T21:14:01.840-04:00The first one captured what is most certainly angu...The first one captured what is most certainly anguish. "She carved herself good and sharp right down to the bone." What a powerful image.<br /><br />How many flogging sessions resulted in TWO poems from the same spirit in one day?Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17243900022708004902011-07-17T17:57:12.293-04:002011-07-17T17:57:12.293-04:00Goodness gracious - you are so talented, my friend...Goodness gracious - you are so talented, my friend. I'm in awe.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69184014999319720702011-07-17T16:27:31.241-04:002011-07-17T16:27:31.241-04:00She wore the same eyes....when I lock the door it ...She wore the same eyes....when I lock the door it rains inside....I love these Poems !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34701628982747570002011-07-17T15:34:20.212-04:002011-07-17T15:34:20.212-04:00both of these are gorgeous and both sound like gir...both of these are gorgeous and both sound like girls i would not mind meeting...excellent descriptions...when i lock the door it rains inside....hot...yeah i need to go get a kiss now...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66155452465336552352011-07-17T15:26:31.858-04:002011-07-17T15:26:31.858-04:00I also loved these photos. Your first poem was bea...I also loved these photos. Your first poem was beautiful, brave, and strong. The second, funny and insistent. Always look forward to your offerings!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20368039373292821632011-07-17T14:48:23.530-04:002011-07-17T14:48:23.530-04:00Wow... both astounding, creating imagery so far b...Wow... both astounding, creating imagery so far beyond the photos themselves. Truly inspirational!<br /><br />Your talents challenge those who read, goading into the depths, yet blessing with beauty.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63792527161724494872011-07-17T14:26:32.077-04:002011-07-17T14:26:32.077-04:00Two poems of equal beauty, insight and great lines...Two poems of equal beauty, insight and great lines.. I love to dissect poems and find that one line that really pulls me north, south, east west.<br />"She carved herself good and sharp<br />Right down to the bone." and<br /><br />"And when I lock the door,<br />It rains inside."<br /><br />well done on both poems!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60990966682843450622011-07-17T14:26:15.161-04:002011-07-17T14:26:15.161-04:00and when I lock the door
it rains inside...
Intri...and when I lock the door<br />it rains inside...<br /><br />Intriguing as always!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19863832559984610682011-07-17T13:50:22.813-04:002011-07-17T13:50:22.813-04:00"when she was a boy" - captured so perfe..."when she was a boy" - captured so perfectly.Jhon Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05952691262605706711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91636951788265582602011-07-17T13:40:16.554-04:002011-07-17T13:40:16.554-04:00What a brave girl she is:
Love these lines~
She ...What a brave girl she is:<br /><br />Love these lines~<br /><br />She carved herself good and sharp<br />Right down to the bone.<br /><br />They say don't read your own tarot--<br />But she did.<br /><br />And second one - kiss me- sounds like a demand by a strong woman.<br /><br />thanks for the follow ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63232312085884407802011-07-17T13:32:28.109-04:002011-07-17T13:32:28.109-04:00I especially love the first poem "when she wa...I especially love the first poem "when she was a boy she wore the same eyes" and "born from that a beautiful girl." In the second poem, I like the repetition of "Kiss me. You'll live." <br />Great writing, as always, Ms Fireblossom!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31416067963561783382011-07-17T13:31:41.409-04:002011-07-17T13:31:41.409-04:00i just love your creativity shay. there's alwa...i just love your creativity shay. there's always a fresh wind sweeping through your poetry and i leave refreshed and sometimes a bit tousled...but that's fine...she wore the same eyes...love thatClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12920063966916483152011-07-17T13:12:55.542-04:002011-07-17T13:12:55.542-04:00Kiss Me
Wow.
Absolutely magic, and I love how the ...Kiss Me<br />Wow.<br />Absolutely magic, and I love how the words just<br />tango like that.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17810567193486851762011-07-17T12:16:48.112-04:002011-07-17T12:16:48.112-04:00I read my own tarot...AND, I'm a (or was a) se...I read my own tarot...AND, I'm a (or was a) seaside whore! lol These are both freakin awesome! Love the drum you beat on...and the way your present your rhythms to the world! Leaving the ouija...still smirking! You are beyond Poet!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82476812656047938942011-07-17T11:42:17.082-04:002011-07-17T11:42:17.082-04:00She carved herself good and sharp
Right down to th...She carved herself good and sharp<br />Right down to the bone.<br /><br />Excellent lines. Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51016905374267120522011-07-17T11:23:26.986-04:002011-07-17T11:23:26.986-04:00Just brilliant ~ 'And when I lock the door, It...Just brilliant ~ 'And when I lock the door, It rains inside'. Wish I'd written this line!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.com