tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2157242354933873389..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The Crow In My EyeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13764923420811751772017-11-26T10:39:41.128-05:002017-11-26T10:39:41.128-05:00Awwww.Awwww.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31859314591766583132017-11-26T00:07:04.119-05:002017-11-26T00:07:04.119-05:00snotty ole crow. i know someone who can take care ...snotty ole crow. i know someone who can take care of that fer yaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21644152860733716072017-11-25T17:40:58.207-05:002017-11-25T17:40:58.207-05:00Whoaa!!💞 This is beautifully haunting!! Especiall...Whoaa!!💞 This is beautifully haunting!! Especially like; "I could be smiling or lying or out of my mind, but the crow won't forget your face, and he won't be kind." Fabulous 55!💞Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48088168157714009852017-11-25T15:24:15.013-05:002017-11-25T15:24:15.013-05:00I always say hello to crowsI always say hello to crowscrickethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06906012140602705902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19154656919903805382017-11-25T12:17:34.634-05:002017-11-25T12:17:34.634-05:00Well crafted with a final line that rises even abo...Well crafted with a final line that rises even above.Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79440381325939159162017-11-25T10:40:55.379-05:002017-11-25T10:40:55.379-05:00WOW! Also, YES! Nailed it. A poem that sticks in o...WOW! Also, YES! Nailed it. A poem that sticks in one's head like a barb. Or a beak.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42896166684904459612017-11-25T10:03:37.816-05:002017-11-25T10:03:37.816-05:00Intriguing. I like the use of the crow here. The s...Intriguing. I like the use of the crow here. The symbolism of the crow is often that of individuality, which might definitely rub up against anyone invading or competing with that. The crow is also favored for communication and wisdom.<br /><br />Perhaps through the law of similar it realizes that the other "you" and it was not that much different.<br /><br />Fresh killed love. Ha. There you have it.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81853861372185193652017-11-25T08:32:18.683-05:002017-11-25T08:32:18.683-05:00I love how you lament your lack of inspiration, an...I love how you lament your lack of inspiration, and then pop out a gem like this! You exemplify here everything the 55 does best--impact through compression, discriminating word choice, and the power of an image reduced to its basics--all with a great richness that sacrifices nothing in the way of nuance or subtlety. Every line takes its toll. And, btw, I can so relate--I have had crows in my eyes for years. Thanks SO much for playing, and for kicking total weekend ass.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33048722983531300202017-11-25T07:16:14.805-05:002017-11-25T07:16:14.805-05:00I love this --- especially:
"You frustrate h...I love this --- especially:<br /><br />"You frustrate him, <br />by law of similars.<br />My crow likes trinkets, toys,<br />and fresh-killed love"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52242003925555304072017-11-25T00:06:27.430-05:002017-11-25T00:06:27.430-05:00Hi Shay's crow - meet Kerry's raven. I'...Hi Shay's crow - meet Kerry's raven. I'm sure you two will get along famously.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com