tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post217634686717565388..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Softer HeartFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36592464649678945762017-04-21T11:22:46.784-04:002017-04-21T11:22:46.784-04:00Somehow this poem whisper-sung all breathy directl...Somehow this poem whisper-sung all breathy directly into my ear.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37978468851662734102017-04-21T11:06:09.607-04:002017-04-21T11:06:09.607-04:00Such a hauntingly sad song.Such a hauntingly sad song.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18109680761576445542017-04-21T09:17:28.690-04:002017-04-21T09:17:28.690-04:00I love how this unfolds. Haunting is the perfect ...I love how this unfolds. Haunting is the perfect word for it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52337711704910458572017-04-21T01:07:44.552-04:002017-04-21T01:07:44.552-04:00this gave me chills, Shay!
"I cannot find my...this gave me chills, Shay!<br /><br />"I cannot find my softer heart<br /> by wing or dusk-light call."<br /><br />stunning!<br /><br />♥<br /><br />(i've tricked your captcha -- i AM a robot.)Dani Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18012898548478062463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57132107912878901612017-04-20T23:28:40.099-04:002017-04-20T23:28:40.099-04:00That ending grabbed my heartThat ending grabbed my heartAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41754516092335776872017-04-20T21:05:24.278-04:002017-04-20T21:05:24.278-04:00It's lovely, Shay. Thanks. k.It's lovely, Shay. Thanks. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46026234641525673842017-04-20T20:36:28.281-04:002017-04-20T20:36:28.281-04:00There is a certain cadence here which really works...There is a certain cadence here which really works with the theme of this poem. Nice work!Charleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07983825702353264957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35911414335183862982017-04-20T20:18:36.791-04:002017-04-20T20:18:36.791-04:00Shivery brilliant. A fitting culmination to all th...Shivery brilliant. A fitting culmination to all these wonderful poems your prompt gave rise to. Thank you so much for a feast of reading.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55319366709634119172017-04-20T19:59:35.604-04:002017-04-20T19:59:35.604-04:00This is beautiful.This is beautiful.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31564449872969743792017-04-20T19:55:26.557-04:002017-04-20T19:55:26.557-04:00Oh my God. I just heard a loud crack in my heart. ...Oh my God. I just heard a loud crack in my heart. Too gorgeous for words. You used up all the best ones.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44882046716894545052017-04-20T19:33:34.805-04:002017-04-20T19:33:34.805-04:00I think that was you're softer heart...dang th...I think that was you're softer heart...dang that was amazing.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33280844564063425452017-04-20T19:28:19.078-04:002017-04-20T19:28:19.078-04:00Gah. This is gorgeous. Heading back up to read aga...Gah. This is gorgeous. Heading back up to read again. <br />And thanking you. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16400442251408879532017-04-20T18:16:38.458-04:002017-04-20T18:16:38.458-04:00This is beautiful. I am dealing with a few stones ...This is beautiful. I am dealing with a few stones in my heart. Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79449804991717581002017-04-20T18:15:12.420-04:002017-04-20T18:15:12.420-04:00This is soo beautifully tender, so very evocativel...This is soo beautifully tender, so very evocatively penned, Shay!❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34775665050980408152017-04-20T18:09:53.799-04:002017-04-20T18:09:53.799-04:00The last line is especially exquisite... especiall...The last line is especially exquisite... especially since it includes an ellipsis. (You know how I dearly love those.)Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29066483239643838152017-04-20T18:03:52.281-04:002017-04-20T18:03:52.281-04:00Sometimes the simplest things sing the truest. Eve...Sometimes the simplest things sing the truest. Every word of this is pure, powerful and exquisite.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19043906798407597282017-04-20T18:03:22.893-04:002017-04-20T18:03:22.893-04:00I love how this moves about a central fulcrum of t...I love how this moves about a central fulcrum of the wrong face and then fades as if an echo. Something quite haunting in this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com