tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2334198359236833554..comments2024-03-28T08:35:27.826-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): CoquetteFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9740037889823490402016-07-01T16:18:52.199-04:002016-07-01T16:18:52.199-04:00ooooo chilling. I have a feeling Magaly will love ...ooooo chilling. I have a feeling Magaly will love this one...oh! and yes I just saw her comment, quite right. I loved it too. Thanks for sharing. Stacie Eirichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13889951415294858821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44380490884429327682016-07-01T16:07:09.838-04:002016-07-01T16:07:09.838-04:00Oh my...dark and delightful. I am with Mama Zen, j...Oh my...dark and delightful. I am with Mama Zen, jealous.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8743606210613719562016-07-01T12:47:07.610-04:002016-07-01T12:47:07.610-04:00A seam-less chant-like dark-rhyme...love it, Shay!...A seam-less chant-like dark-rhyme...love it, Shay!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47296621302396992122016-06-30T18:05:36.078-04:002016-06-30T18:05:36.078-04:00tragic love is your specialty. :)tragic love is your specialty. :)TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90382153918189945532016-06-30T16:36:41.707-04:002016-06-30T16:36:41.707-04:00Not your usual unicorns and butterflies kind of pi...Not your usual unicorns and butterflies kind of piece ;)... The rhythm, the rhyme--HITHDYDI?Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31396997145087731652016-06-30T14:26:03.174-04:002016-06-30T14:26:03.174-04:00Darkly, tightly knit. Catchy and satisfying.Darkly, tightly knit. Catchy and satisfying.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5823652711328817632016-06-30T14:25:13.036-04:002016-06-30T14:25:13.036-04:00Somehow when I read something as lighthearted in f...Somehow when I read something as lighthearted in form, but heavy laden with meaning I think of William Blake and his sick rose... or rather as a response to him... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75847815757827208762016-06-30T14:19:55.378-04:002016-06-30T14:19:55.378-04:00I love scritchy-scratchy hearts like that!I love scritchy-scratchy hearts like that!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34167111874289151512016-06-30T13:38:37.025-04:002016-06-30T13:38:37.025-04:00I love this, wish I'd written it, envy it, wan...I love this, wish I'd written it, envy it, want to steal it . . .Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59486165961328297172016-06-30T13:24:04.416-04:002016-06-30T13:24:04.416-04:00Oh, the nightmares you and I would make. La la mos...Oh, the nightmares you and I would make. La la moskBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75522884312584253652016-06-30T13:12:27.950-04:002016-06-30T13:12:27.950-04:00Brief, enthralling, infections and wicked. I compl...Brief, enthralling, infections and wicked. I completely love it--the rhyme, the imagery, the story that grows out of it... everything. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3262127510538541992016-06-30T11:14:11.524-04:002016-06-30T11:14:11.524-04:00Awesome.
I love how you've made the heart a g...Awesome.<br /><br />I love how you've made the heart a giant outdoor sculpture, sitting on the lawn (as I envision it). It's a work of art, even if part of a horror movie. Poison Ivy 2. That's what it reminds me of.<br /><br />I think she is talking to herself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47418243782396097362016-06-30T10:14:11.334-04:002016-06-30T10:14:11.334-04:00I always enjoy reading your poetry. It is always ...I always enjoy reading your poetry. It is always fascinating, interesting an I am impressed by your ability to meld words, thoughts and unspoken truths together. And sometimes, you write something that really nails "it" for me. This was one of those. <br /><br />Thanks for sharing your work so generously. The Dancing Donkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16274299120708749101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84865647290474875982016-06-30T10:00:57.963-04:002016-06-30T10:00:57.963-04:00Loved it!!
:-)Loved it!!<br /><br />:-)Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-590681108152100932016-06-30T09:58:33.889-04:002016-06-30T09:58:33.889-04:00There is so much packed into this small piece. The...There is so much packed into this small piece. The hard protections around the heart, the probability of pain mixed with the plea to love it just the same - it paints such an intense image. The rhyme and meter here also work really well to solidify the feral but vulnerable feel. Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55360558019994381202016-06-30T09:06:41.853-04:002016-06-30T09:06:41.853-04:00How our little arts and crafts projects can come b...How our little arts and crafts projects can come back to haunt us, and every line of this with its perfect rhyme and meter, haunts the place where love might be, with a form we might not want to see. Exquisite.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com