tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2629401532397664417..comments2024-03-28T19:48:05.247-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Hopeless PrayerFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87069894410433988582011-12-01T04:20:45.203-05:002011-12-01T04:20:45.203-05:00Definitely a heartfelt song, full of longing...Definitely a heartfelt song, full of longing...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54824280217370927442011-11-29T21:52:13.431-05:002011-11-29T21:52:13.431-05:00AMEN! This really sang to me today. Thank you!AMEN! This really sang to me today. Thank you!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6646472759334516372011-11-29T18:13:00.784-05:002011-11-29T18:13:00.784-05:00Your poem is like an old song. Absolutely capture...Your poem is like an old song. Absolutely captures the rhythm of an old spiritual. Wonderful, wonderful!Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63033841484740420292011-11-29T12:29:30.732-05:002011-11-29T12:29:30.732-05:00I'm happy to have the opportunity to read this...I'm happy to have the opportunity to read this poem again - just love the rhythm.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39902900703126792722011-11-29T10:40:13.321-05:002011-11-29T10:40:13.321-05:00Jesus may love you but the devil gives you the goo...Jesus may love you but the devil gives you the good stuff.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18713749653754095472011-11-29T09:32:39.322-05:002011-11-29T09:32:39.322-05:00I like this very much! I can hear it being sung!I like this very much! I can hear it being sung!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19569181611687538512011-11-29T02:02:54.184-05:002011-11-29T02:02:54.184-05:00i feel the shine whenever i read your words, Sista...i feel the shine whenever i read your words, Sista! ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54434206853657064172011-11-28T23:56:00.524-05:002011-11-28T23:56:00.524-05:00I love the lyrical tone and how we all know this t...I love the lyrical tone and how we all know this tune! Well Done~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42964382594540235742011-11-28T23:06:47.920-05:002011-11-28T23:06:47.920-05:00sing it, sister.sing it, sister.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47400081768004988212011-11-28T19:34:09.036-05:002011-11-28T19:34:09.036-05:00I know what you mean... prayer right when I wake u...I know what you mean... prayer right when I wake up helps me.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89167892128037627822011-11-28T19:30:03.011-05:002011-11-28T19:30:03.011-05:00I hear you sister ~
Though I hope not all days ar...I hear you sister ~<br /><br />Though I hope not all days are troubled ~<br /><br />Great write ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85110795381693838122011-11-28T14:44:26.619-05:002011-11-28T14:44:26.619-05:00This is kind of a chant, isn't it?This is kind of a chant, isn't it?Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61533975673302006912011-11-28T13:46:44.311-05:002011-11-28T13:46:44.311-05:00Amen, sister.
Love this line: "Wish I felt t...Amen, sister.<br /><br />Love this line: "Wish I felt that holy shine."✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64527363937126926832011-11-28T13:26:43.307-05:002011-11-28T13:26:43.307-05:00When you reach my age, the wish is 'let it be....When you reach my age, the wish is 'let it be.' Great writing, as always.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9530179804722538192011-11-28T12:36:31.317-05:002011-11-28T12:36:31.317-05:00He is near you, as near as your own heartbeat. xo...He is near you, as near as your own heartbeat. xoxo<br /><br />Psalm 91:4 "He will cover you with his feathers. He will shelter you with his wings. His faithful promises are your armor and protection."Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-193652022689764022011-11-28T12:33:26.609-05:002011-11-28T12:33:26.609-05:00Didnt your mother ever tell you dont touch shiny t...Didnt your mother ever tell you dont touch shiny things?Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54894424616703549632011-11-28T10:44:14.991-05:002011-11-28T10:44:14.991-05:00Me too.Me too.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36163125163887758662011-11-28T09:36:46.226-05:002011-11-28T09:36:46.226-05:00This feels like reading my own heart.This feels like reading my own heart.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48551514694834824552011-11-28T09:10:10.085-05:002011-11-28T09:10:10.085-05:00I wish for you moments of rest and relief. xoI wish for you moments of rest and relief. xoHannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88398293270843825602011-11-28T07:22:37.851-05:002011-11-28T07:22:37.851-05:00This has the feel for me of an old spiritual song ...This has the feel for me of an old spiritual song of the South, in the longing for a better way against the odds.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53089331309500738002011-11-28T06:28:15.139-05:002011-11-28T06:28:15.139-05:00This poem brought to me the spirit of Cool Hand Lu...This poem brought to me the spirit of Cool Hand Luke (or perhaps his mother). <br /><br />Jeeze--is there anything you cannot do? Perhaps one of us (not you) should launch a contest--the winner finds a poetic form that Shay fails at or the winner thinks of a topic that Shay cannot write an incredible poem about.<br /><br />I'll start working on the offical rules now...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44046986961648440862011-11-28T00:52:07.401-05:002011-11-28T00:52:07.401-05:00Coal's whisperin in your ear in the wee hours....Coal's whisperin in your ear in the wee hours. I can hear that blues guitar of hers (hitting the bass player's head)The way I look at it is, if God were so damn sweet he wouldn't try to blackmail us into worshiping him, but then that's just something I picked up at Satan's Reform School for Wayward Girls. Dig those toenails in girl--there's another weekend coming.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55431341968205123342011-11-28T00:30:50.272-05:002011-11-28T00:30:50.272-05:00You know how I relate to this poem! I love the voi...You know how I relate to this poem! I love the voice: "Devil not about to let such ease be mine."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11877453024730328902011-11-27T23:20:48.674-05:002011-11-27T23:20:48.674-05:00always felt the same.
magickly (age? REIKI? Apt? H...always felt the same.<br />magickly (age? REIKI? Apt? Hawaii?) I find myself living happily - ease (not PANIC!) in the morning.<br /><br /><br />I wish the same for you, even if it louses up your poetry production. better you should be too happy and relaxed to write it down. . . <br /><br />fond Aloha from Waikiki<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /> <br /> ><}}(°><br /><br />< ° ) } } > <<br /><br />(^_^)Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81870455600578918152011-11-27T23:14:44.411-05:002011-11-27T23:14:44.411-05:00life is a toil...very lyrical shay...if faith had ...life is a toil...very lyrical shay...if faith had to be felt is it really?<br /><br />you are pumping out poetry today..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com