tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2844113149559318371..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Good WomanFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8402151117210266912015-04-26T12:52:06.973-04:002015-04-26T12:52:06.973-04:00um.... i'm not really hungry right now. maybe ...um.... i'm not really hungry right now. maybe later.<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10705974976465368792015-04-18T01:10:14.307-04:002015-04-18T01:10:14.307-04:00I gravitated to the same line as Susie. iron in th...I gravitated to the same line as Susie. iron in these lines, beneath the velvet ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3647523530068565332015-04-17T18:43:16.529-04:002015-04-17T18:43:16.529-04:00This is wonderful Shay :) I really loved reading i...This is wonderful Shay :) I really loved reading it!<br />You have given a whole new meaning to the term "Blind devotion."<br /><br />Love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21897022032413627032015-04-17T17:48:37.162-04:002015-04-17T17:48:37.162-04:00So much devotion and seduction in this, but that l...So much devotion and seduction in this, but that last unanswered question would lead to many sleepless nights (keeping one eye open). Excellent write, outtasight! la la MoskBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21605335699992035622015-04-17T14:37:15.666-04:002015-04-17T14:37:15.666-04:00I'll find it,
fetch it,
bread it and fry it.
...I'll find it,<br />fetch it,<br />bread it and fry it.<br /><br />Now that's love!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89614151962114920702015-04-17T13:00:57.945-04:002015-04-17T13:00:57.945-04:00Oh, this is brilliant! Trust you, Shay, to tell th...Oh, this is brilliant! Trust you, Shay, to tell the 'right' story.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18632398535399154332015-04-17T10:57:16.978-04:002015-04-17T10:57:16.978-04:00How did I just know that you would pick that parti...How did I just know that you would pick that particular piece?!! You give new meaning to "blind devotion!" Where is the line where love becomes obsession? I'd be wary of trying that dessert!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45097951034293768912015-04-17T10:02:57.461-04:002015-04-17T10:02:57.461-04:00Devotion takes many forms but seldom seems to get ...Devotion takes many forms but seldom seems to get itself back in turn--cooking a very apt metaphor--one cooks, the other eats--and the sardonic frosting really fits the picture. Forgive the incoherence--about commented out here.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5457689759074286232015-04-17T09:09:53.989-04:002015-04-17T09:09:53.989-04:00The sweet desert served cold I wonder.The sweet desert served cold I wonder.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67267952873712849262015-04-17T08:54:36.111-04:002015-04-17T08:54:36.111-04:00Love it! (And I too wonder about the underlying me...Love it! (And I too wonder about the underlying meaning in that ending.)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51801962295352802632015-04-17T05:38:03.951-04:002015-04-17T05:38:03.951-04:00Lovely thoughts, real nice!Lovely thoughts, real nice!Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8968265661991897572015-04-16T23:45:40.804-04:002015-04-16T23:45:40.804-04:00This is wonderful. Made me chuckle.This is wonderful. Made me chuckle.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86173739817452226302015-04-16T23:36:53.585-04:002015-04-16T23:36:53.585-04:00Ah, sweet. Sad too. k. Ah, sweet. Sad too. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9240235213974293512015-04-16T23:13:09.793-04:002015-04-16T23:13:09.793-04:00"I'll find it, fetch it, bread it and fry..."I'll find it, fetch it, bread it and fry it". LOL. I love the "birds flying through you" lines!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65002689931712608612015-04-16T22:48:31.206-04:002015-04-16T22:48:31.206-04:00Said, the spider to the fly! Yikes~
Clever, FB!Said, the spider to the fly! Yikes~<br /><br />Clever, FB!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15650895382642772302015-04-16T21:54:51.976-04:002015-04-16T21:54:51.976-04:00Sounds almost like "trick or treat?" Nic...Sounds almost like "trick or treat?" Nicely imagined xhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34718947163571881182015-04-16T19:25:12.572-04:002015-04-16T19:25:12.572-04:00perfect lover... but a sober, minor note at end? ...perfect lover... but a sober, minor note at end? A threat?<br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu,<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> =^..^=<br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47632382783575536652015-04-16T18:54:09.060-04:002015-04-16T18:54:09.060-04:00Each stanza--not better than the previous one, bec...Each stanza--not better than the previous one, because each one is perfect in its own way.<br /><br />Find it, fetch it, bread it, fry it...and the last one---sooo dark and delicious. (Don't take one bite of that dessert, darlin', if you crossed Shay. ;)Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75094377318935478542015-04-16T18:22:43.963-04:002015-04-16T18:22:43.963-04:00Hmmm...a warning. "knowing only the braille o...Hmmm...a warning. "knowing only the braille of a singular devotion." Love that line<br />Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21243366162530222202015-04-16T18:18:24.098-04:002015-04-16T18:18:24.098-04:00i love your evil ways... :)i love your evil ways... :)TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com