tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2850113325507445283..comments2024-03-28T08:35:27.826-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The Witch In SpringtimeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27700888866872725382018-02-25T09:19:31.427-05:002018-02-25T09:19:31.427-05:00Step into my ring of frost and touch my face--
Lo...Step into my ring of frost and touch my face--<br /><br />Losing that hand is a small price to pay.<br /><br />LOVE it all!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13194833650330891382018-02-24T21:54:28.019-05:002018-02-24T21:54:28.019-05:00Wow. Too many fabulous lines to repeat. Amazing an...Wow. Too many fabulous lines to repeat. Amazing and slightly haunted. And haunting.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58697013905257234192011-09-13T01:09:25.861-04:002011-09-13T01:09:25.861-04:00all i want for Christmas is the time to read every...all i want for Christmas is the time to read everything you've ever written.<br /><br />there is no one on earth who can write like you do, Shay! {sigh} reading your words makes me happy. thank you! ♥ dAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39853365798848201482011-09-11T12:21:36.895-04:002011-09-11T12:21:36.895-04:00Hadn't read this--thanks for the linkback toda...Hadn't read this--thanks for the linkback today, it gives context to what you just wrote,and also is such a fine piece itself I would have hated to miss it. Your use of metaphor here is exceptionally skillful and hits the reader like the buffet of wings, painfully, but with beautiful feathers.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31804150567927973882010-10-10T01:32:25.560-04:002010-10-10T01:32:25.560-04:00Another of your fantastic froward witch poems. You...Another of your fantastic froward witch poems. You MUST submit these! So many amazing amazing amazing words and images - "shatter like dropped teacups", "I have been old since I was small", the whole burlap bag thing and the sisters "nothing but panic and claws". The swans.<br /><br />Absolutely incredible writing. Brilliant. Unlike anyone else's poems - unique. HIGHLY PUBLISHABLE!!!!!!!!!! I see a book of them - all witchy and froward.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36891783359616426192010-05-06T11:42:40.271-04:002010-05-06T11:42:40.271-04:00I'm trying to figure out how in the end, I fee...I'm trying to figure out how in the end, I feel soothed with this poem... soothed, old witch- you, Shay, have found the magicKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56491844768346304902010-05-05T14:19:18.993-04:002010-05-05T14:19:18.993-04:00I would love this poem...to grace my house and wal...I would love this poem...to grace my house and walls...I would love it if you elaborated this to story too...wow...you are amazing...as always!!!!<br />love you rock steady~Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15127343815869529555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37472926318871500292010-05-05T00:36:11.851-04:002010-05-05T00:36:11.851-04:00You are very talented !You are very talented !Senoritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13075972193214414769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12975851442394726332010-05-04T22:04:33.988-04:002010-05-04T22:04:33.988-04:00Love the image that accompanies this poem...and yo...Love the image that accompanies this poem...and you will NEVER lose your magic, my friend. E!V!E!R!Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8425652815707217542010-05-04T21:59:24.375-04:002010-05-04T21:59:24.375-04:00When you write from this painful place, I am touch...When you write from this painful place, I am touched deeply.<br /><br />No, Dear Witch. Your magick is intact!machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30499375458285965492010-05-04T19:13:01.900-04:002010-05-04T19:13:01.900-04:00I, too, say WOW! Awesome.I, too, say WOW! Awesome.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55324905463026241732010-05-04T19:07:57.905-04:002010-05-04T19:07:57.905-04:00This would make a great screenplay.
Very vivid wor...This would make a great screenplay.<br />Very vivid words.Strong.Thank you!Tabitha.Montgomeryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07462651710980805568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11240582492147786352010-05-04T18:51:17.555-04:002010-05-04T18:51:17.555-04:00Wow Shay! Sorry to gush as usual, but this is one ...Wow Shay! Sorry to gush as usual, but this is one of my favorites.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36820173397492285382010-05-04T17:53:38.487-04:002010-05-04T17:53:38.487-04:00There's such sorrow here and such strong image...There's such sorrow here and such strong imagery. Another beautiful, painful poem, Shay. There is magic in every line.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34573539202409693052010-05-04T14:45:46.483-04:002010-05-04T14:45:46.483-04:00Shay -- You had me on the first three lines of thi...Shay -- You had me on the first three lines of this poem. I read them over and over. I love the last line, "And my blood does not flow, it gusts."<br /><br />I've said it before, but it is so much fun to read your poetry aloud. There are so many characters in your poems, each unique!<br /><br />It would fun to hear you read your poems. Think about exploring this one day...a place where we can click and hear Shay read her words!Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76262723326372850812010-05-04T13:14:42.476-04:002010-05-04T13:14:42.476-04:00Magic missing? Not. at. all.Magic missing? Not. at. all.Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10283675620555021372010-05-04T12:20:14.854-04:002010-05-04T12:20:14.854-04:00sorry broken link, this one is goodsorry broken link, this one is goodwhohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17685473418191606910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78379527809604055682010-05-04T12:17:22.116-04:002010-05-04T12:17:22.116-04:00Oh My Bob!
where is Shay and who is this pretendi...Oh My Bob! <br />where is Shay and who is this pretending to be her?<br /><br />or<br /><br />where did you get the prompt to write from this point of view? <br /><br />Quit messing around or I am going to cry. And where did shadow go. You have to be strong so that you can help me dammit!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29042111804453257802010-05-04T11:16:39.172-04:002010-05-04T11:16:39.172-04:00Shay, sweetie, are you floundering in the depths?Shay, sweetie, are you floundering in the depths?ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80941953194089638272010-05-04T10:37:31.597-04:002010-05-04T10:37:31.597-04:00Your magic is anything but "gone". The ...Your magic is anything <i>but</i> "gone". The imagery in this is absolutely <i>astonishing</i>! (He said in a hushed, almost reverential voice.)<br /><br />This is brilliant. Simply brilliant.Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91847109276557231122010-05-04T10:08:22.641-04:002010-05-04T10:08:22.641-04:00Shay, this is amazing.Shay, this is amazing.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com