tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2871546317921463660..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Full MoonFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37885558189414102002011-09-18T14:33:16.180-04:002011-09-18T14:33:16.180-04:00I want those hands on my hips...love the sensual w...I want those hands on my hips...love the sensual write.<br /><br />And yes, the simple lines yet clear message is a big hit ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51487412791180998272011-09-14T20:20:54.419-04:002011-09-14T20:20:54.419-04:00"I want to lay with you,
as close as fur to t..."I want to lay with you,<br />as close as fur to the fox--"<br />Love this, so simple and wild...<br /><br />"there is only one sky<br />and one earth curved close against it."<br />This makes me think a million things, all of them revolutionary for humankind...Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773200135330787188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73049355751087826172011-09-14T04:10:59.685-04:002011-09-14T04:10:59.685-04:00oh wow, the moon's got you in its grasp... so ...oh wow, the moon's got you in its grasp... so romantic, so dreamy!Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54536855628699525732011-09-13T18:31:18.216-04:002011-09-13T18:31:18.216-04:00This is unbelievably beautiful. And, I'm not ...This is unbelievably beautiful. And, I'm not going to say one goddamn word about rolls.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56455430538458397682011-09-13T16:31:18.958-04:002011-09-13T16:31:18.958-04:00I swear to god, people. Crescent MOONS, not fuckin...I swear to god, people. Crescent MOONS, not fucking dinner rolls. And because the moon is cold, and I'm really talking about hands, I added the "warm." But whatever. It's a love poem I wrote for my girl, but if you all want it to be about the Pillsbury fucking Doughboy, go for it.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72402171088971440282011-09-13T12:46:23.207-04:002011-09-13T12:46:23.207-04:00Imagine me reading thinking oh crescents .. warm c...Imagine me reading thinking oh crescents .. warm crescents like those little frozen ready to bake and then I see Lolamouse had the same reaction .. its got to be the carbs, they, like love, make you want moreDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41797404268058456522011-09-13T11:33:17.565-04:002011-09-13T11:33:17.565-04:00Sensual and lovely. (Thanks, Herman, now I'm c...Sensual and lovely. (Thanks, Herman, now I'm craving crescent rolls!)Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54442247042597233552011-09-13T08:36:39.713-04:002011-09-13T08:36:39.713-04:00Love that moon analogy!Love that moon analogy!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60554819652404608572011-09-13T05:46:03.688-04:002011-09-13T05:46:03.688-04:00Really beautiful....
I especially loved -
"...Really beautiful....<br /><br />I especially loved -<br /><br />"I want to lay with you,<br />as close as fur to the fox"<br /><br />and -<br /><br />"that there is only one sky<br />and one earth curved close against it."<br /><br />Wonderful writing Shay!Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36021837649947761542011-09-13T02:56:17.983-04:002011-09-13T02:56:17.983-04:00Thank you Sherry, Hedge, and Dani. I worked especi...Thank you Sherry, Hedge, and Dani. I worked especially hard on this. The first draft was about thirty lines long, but as you can see, I felt the shorter poem was better. Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments on my love poem.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25410853737472601072011-09-13T01:20:08.288-04:002011-09-13T01:20:08.288-04:00"that there is only one sky
and one earth cur..."that there is only one sky<br />and one earth curved close against it."<br /><br />soooo beautiful, Shay! i agree with those above ~ no one can come close to your love poems. ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73425183757843087122011-09-12T23:45:34.122-04:002011-09-12T23:45:34.122-04:00I'm visualizing the hands lightly cupped, fitt...I'm visualizing the hands lightly cupped, fitting themselves to the curved shapes they are bracketing, all sort of one thing. The last lines are tender as a sigh, and the fox and its fur--can't be topped for an image of closeness. I echo Sherry, your love poems are in league of their own.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13168218625093144232011-09-12T23:41:18.272-04:002011-09-12T23:41:18.272-04:00So beautiful - no one writes love poems like you d...So beautiful - no one writes love poems like you do!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-697843155062283982011-09-12T23:36:51.764-04:002011-09-12T23:36:51.764-04:00yep sioux hit where my mind was heading with hands...yep sioux hit where my mind was heading with hands, but not that they are crescent rolls there is no way i am sharing my hands...<br /><br />really shay, this is lovely....flows well...and is sensual and intimate in ways that make me smile....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72354424356109385342011-09-12T23:34:01.325-04:002011-09-12T23:34:01.325-04:00And make them lightly brown, fresh out of the oven...And make them lightly brown, fresh out of the oven with...Oh, sorry. Herman Turnip got me off track.<br /><br />I like the idea of the title also hinting at a nice rear end, but perhaps my mind is in the gutter this evening.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76907653919897487492011-09-12T22:55:56.945-04:002011-09-12T22:55:56.945-04:00I want my hands to be two crescent rolls. Two but...I want my hands to be two crescent rolls. Two buttery, savory crescent rolls perched upon my wrists. MMmmmm...HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.com