tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2883345321637604928..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): For AnnieFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34815301180745623002011-05-01T16:59:11.696-04:002011-05-01T16:59:11.696-04:00I thought this was very whimsical. I can see how k...I thought this was very whimsical. I can see how kids would love this.<br />Nice entry.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74769651339433601322011-04-29T18:28:47.359-04:002011-04-29T18:28:47.359-04:00This is fabulousness. That Annie is one lucky girl...This is fabulousness. That Annie is one lucky girl.patriciacaspershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17048071609997739569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87273334295990621072011-04-28T13:51:07.261-04:002011-04-28T13:51:07.261-04:00Wonderfully creative. I wanted to come up with so...Wonderfully creative. I wanted to come up with something like that for my trochee article. I just wrote something so lame it was embarrassing. Yes, color me green with a touch of pink ...cause while I'm envious I'm so happy I got to read this from you! GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3463453455032594182011-04-28T02:59:49.312-04:002011-04-28T02:59:49.312-04:00Hurray, a fun poem that plays with words and makes...Hurray, a fun poem that plays with words and makes you laughJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71412449674207916572011-04-28T00:28:32.744-04:002011-04-28T00:28:32.744-04:00You continually astound me with the depth and leng...You continually astound me with the depth and length of your creativity and stuff. :DRavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290572009221670011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4289511738386782702011-04-27T23:44:13.972-04:002011-04-27T23:44:13.972-04:00"whimsical" is the right word, i think. ..."whimsical" is the right word, i think. :) a good note on which to end the day-- with a smile! thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24964971918779246652011-04-27T22:58:47.012-04:002011-04-27T22:58:47.012-04:00what a lovely whimsical poem...I hope to dream of ...what a lovely whimsical poem...I hope to dream of zebras tonight...RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76003324818391217152011-04-27T21:02:13.934-04:002011-04-27T21:02:13.934-04:00I love the jewelry box hooves!I love the jewelry box hooves!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50463121627533621012011-04-27T20:16:07.349-04:002011-04-27T20:16:07.349-04:00Delightful, cute, kuwai even :)Delightful, cute, kuwai even :)marousiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12925164210601407878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8274941835518360462011-04-27T15:38:29.828-04:002011-04-27T15:38:29.828-04:00"With Annie gone
who's eyes shall
compare..."With Annie gone<br />who's eyes shall<br />compare to the sun?<br /><br />Not that I did.<br />But I do now<br />that's she's gone."<br /><br />I think that's how that one goes? From my often faulty memory that weaves in and out of what's real and not, as dreams of cream bodied zebras with clouds in their heads weave in and out of blog posts.<br /><br />xoxoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10163632205388276342011-04-27T15:32:08.829-04:002011-04-27T15:32:08.829-04:00We don't ever lose the childhood singsong of n...We don't ever lose the childhood singsong of nursery rhymes deep in our inner inner ear - but how their tropes change over time. These zebras are kiddie confections with much more dangerous -- or wild - hooves. Just like adulthood. The tactile imagery is astounding here. - BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37728099362503325592011-04-27T14:50:13.107-04:002011-04-27T14:50:13.107-04:00so sweet and well...dreamy!so sweet and well...dreamy!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58636186984839247982011-04-27T14:43:03.596-04:002011-04-27T14:43:03.596-04:00I love zebras - this was such a nice poem.I love zebras - this was such a nice poem.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68454540150089373532011-04-27T13:26:50.344-04:002011-04-27T13:26:50.344-04:00this one makes me smile... I think it not so much ...this one makes me smile... I think it not so much sweet, as telling, of possibilities...dream-like, much as a Sgt. Peppers song... excellent write~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4291234015235998172011-04-27T12:09:01.036-04:002011-04-27T12:09:01.036-04:00Sweet. Precious. Fun. Nice :-)
Any more little pla...Sweet. Precious. Fun. Nice :-)<br />Any more little platitudes I can write? Assume that I have.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88595264732528480892011-04-27T11:48:13.839-04:002011-04-27T11:48:13.839-04:00its a delightful readits a delightful readDeLihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15795530327579458125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61537885454379162902011-04-27T10:30:01.747-04:002011-04-27T10:30:01.747-04:00I love this its so charming ... and I often feel a...I love this its so charming ... and I often feel as if I am made of cream under the sun's streamDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50103627816324913052011-04-27T09:17:33.819-04:002011-04-27T09:17:33.819-04:00Okay, Shay, you are amazing at writing whimsical, ...Okay, Shay, you are amazing at writing whimsical, magical children's poems too?!! When the Talent Goddess was handing out talent, you DEFINITELY pushed people out of line and took more than one turn! No fair!!!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49356834096149184542011-04-27T08:56:19.592-04:002011-04-27T08:56:19.592-04:00What a fun poem. You have an awesome imagination. ...What a fun poem. You have an awesome imagination. :)Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39073700884458767182011-04-27T08:38:47.731-04:002011-04-27T08:38:47.731-04:00Tender and sweet!
:)Tender and sweet!<br />:)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53502315110698481192011-04-27T08:38:33.160-04:002011-04-27T08:38:33.160-04:00I'll go ahead and say it's sweet and delig...I'll go ahead and say it's sweet and delightful and magical and all of that...<br />and it's adorable as well :)<br /><br />did you know a giraffe can kick the head off of a lion?<br />yes.<br />just some food for thought for your next poem :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4855638469968689792011-04-27T06:33:26.159-04:002011-04-27T06:33:26.159-04:00very tender shay, i enjoyed it much...very tender shay, i enjoyed it much...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81557846883309780272011-04-27T04:14:59.414-04:002011-04-27T04:14:59.414-04:00Bristle broom mane is a genius stroke... :)Bristle broom mane is a genius stroke... :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37931790226050848012011-04-27T04:12:49.150-04:002011-04-27T04:12:49.150-04:00This is so tender-- dazzling imagery especially fo...This is so tender-- dazzling imagery especially for a children's poem. A surprise and a delightful one-- and I was very insecure about the poem I posted today-- thank you FB for calling me a show-off! xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1168003549055998282011-04-27T00:55:16.992-04:002011-04-27T00:55:16.992-04:00dream zebras are neat
a shame that you hate haiku
...dream zebras are neat<br />a shame that you hate haiku<br />you'd despise my blogAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515148975353849650noreply@blogger.com