tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2945335486814974055..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Commuter Fireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53097754112728326142022-01-30T10:30:57.554-05:002022-01-30T10:30:57.554-05:00So often it just takes that slip for everything to...So often it just takes that slip for everything to end.<br />undertaker<br />for the makerbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60951350537856838662022-01-29T20:58:42.628-05:002022-01-29T20:58:42.628-05:00So well done, Shay. It can take a minute!So well done, Shay. It can take a minute!purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22653414327519302062022-01-28T16:21:27.740-05:002022-01-28T16:21:27.740-05:00And it can happen just that quick! Great use of t...And it can happen just that quick! Great use of the form.ms_lilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03999098267891256848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65771503104914685102022-01-28T15:09:23.458-05:002022-01-28T15:09:23.458-05:00Skillfully done, Shay! I love the smooth progressi...Skillfully done, Shay! I love the smooth progression of your poem. 💝Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44314845525405962912022-01-28T11:51:02.776-05:002022-01-28T11:51:02.776-05:00Yoiks. Gotta hold tight to those transfers.Yoiks. Gotta hold tight to those transfers.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59869973607318960282022-01-28T11:12:48.808-05:002022-01-28T11:12:48.808-05:00Ha! Busted, indeed. This kind of thing could drive...Ha! Busted, indeed. This kind of thing could drive you around the bend. I love every minute of it. *runs* Seriously, fun to read, and full of wit and skill, as always.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77374254359087849992022-01-28T09:36:45.043-05:002022-01-28T09:36:45.043-05:00My Dear … you wear humor well! Light and dark. My Dear … you wear humor well! Light and dark. Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86325730422176788922022-01-28T06:39:39.655-05:002022-01-28T06:39:39.655-05:00Nice one! :)Nice one! :)Veerahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02376506271796977740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57186158431481807182022-01-28T05:12:28.523-05:002022-01-28T05:12:28.523-05:00That's dark humor, I love it!That's dark humor, I love it!Mrityunjay Dixithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07941995454390645789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37108334259712706312022-01-28T01:33:02.779-05:002022-01-28T01:33:02.779-05:00Why am I smiling?Why am I smiling?Darius the Matehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10324160088339267420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62585550905520151382022-01-27T22:02:36.490-05:002022-01-27T22:02:36.490-05:00Dang, in just one, quick minute life is done and a...Dang, in just one, quick minute life is done and after feeling so good about how things were going too! Great write!Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17151970883045877442022-01-27T19:49:55.905-05:002022-01-27T19:49:55.905-05:00A great narrative! A great narrative! Carol Congaltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09802368671162764611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2957994396432938152022-01-27T19:17:45.549-05:002022-01-27T19:17:45.549-05:00What an abruptly sad ending Shay. But darkly humor...What an abruptly sad ending Shay. But darkly humorous — well written.robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54229620122441531412022-01-27T18:31:47.060-05:002022-01-27T18:31:47.060-05:00wow... brilliant write!wow... brilliant write!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08610558671347167083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22077252059255105612022-01-27T18:13:59.804-05:002022-01-27T18:13:59.804-05:00'bus-ted' - very good!'bus-ted' - very good!Marion Hortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09928737422288639311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80689856077131886342022-01-27T17:59:57.408-05:002022-01-27T17:59:57.408-05:00Yes.Yes.Ron.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17003968251465131521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28078121170137252292022-01-27T17:18:50.649-05:002022-01-27T17:18:50.649-05:00Well that was quick turn to meet the Maker. Be ca...Well that was quick turn to meet the Maker. Be careful when you are waiting for that bus! Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22995335483117085582022-01-27T17:02:44.811-05:002022-01-27T17:02:44.811-05:00Woops....bang¨¨! That took a sudden turn...so to s...Woops....bang¨¨! That took a sudden turn...so to speak...very well done...forestbatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17599113483535736057noreply@blogger.com