tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3006935688318054861..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Entre NousFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55840566641222177072010-12-20T17:26:55.710-05:002010-12-20T17:26:55.710-05:00Damn, this is brilliant.Damn, this is brilliant.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47932643287249398982010-12-20T04:53:09.199-05:002010-12-20T04:53:09.199-05:00Tatting together the bubbles... The imagery there...Tatting together the bubbles... The imagery there is awesome.<br /><br />Congrats on the new netbook, FB. :)Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5745633589384464432010-12-20T01:10:34.432-05:002010-12-20T01:10:34.432-05:00I will just say wow! I very much like the repetit...I will just say wow! I very much like the repetition, which turns poetry into song when done as well as this.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67414735049139538302010-12-19T21:58:38.813-05:002010-12-19T21:58:38.813-05:00What a comeback, and oh, I love how you find the p...What a comeback, and oh, I love how you find the perfect images to go with your masterpieces! The world is back to "normal" again. ;)Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85891027602006737492010-12-19T21:49:57.652-05:002010-12-19T21:49:57.652-05:00absolutely delicious!absolutely delicious!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28889490067031941252010-12-19T20:21:28.018-05:002010-12-19T20:21:28.018-05:00You are on a roll. This is terrific. Glad you...You are on a roll. This is terrific. Glad you're back and the computer is humming again.<br /><br />Cheers, jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8263376782818286272010-12-19T20:02:38.948-05:002010-12-19T20:02:38.948-05:00The rooster may be dead but the
computer lives and...The rooster may be dead but the<br />computer lives and rules the roost...<br />well, your computer anyway.<br /><br />Think I saw that statue of the<br />woman in an art gallery last week..fayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07673468419383240363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78106256017979453142010-12-19T18:03:24.900-05:002010-12-19T18:03:24.900-05:00I'm impressed you did all this from a prompt! ...I'm impressed you did all this from a prompt! Wow and glad you're back. I like your work so much! The end was my favorite although I like the entire piece and how it flowed.<br />I gleaned from this "the love that dared not speak its name. Dark, edgy, sexy!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87029032137521385052010-12-19T17:06:44.615-05:002010-12-19T17:06:44.615-05:00I love how this moves from love and hope to love a...I love how this moves from love and hope to love and almost fear of losing love - and back again (and back again). Nice one.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39815429410113221952010-12-19T17:04:50.169-05:002010-12-19T17:04:50.169-05:00I think my favorite lines are:
"The rooster ...I think my favorite lines are:<br /><br />"The rooster is dead. <br />We soon will be, <br />so kiss me now, <br />Right here..." <br /><br />Love those lines. LOL.. they just strikes me as funny. Gigi Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08092019687497845746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91009510786206151042010-12-19T17:04:20.477-05:002010-12-19T17:04:20.477-05:00Soooo, myself and Hedgewitch both think you should...Soooo, myself and Hedgewitch both think you should be on Twitter, tweeting and twittling away about your poetry so that I can follow you and be kept up to date on how brilliant you obviously are. Sort it out. I'm @zerodemon.Adam Common, Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18294782717721438633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4687609339290512212010-12-19T16:48:15.396-05:002010-12-19T16:48:15.396-05:00Sorry reminds me of Hamlet-
"But even then t...Sorry reminds me of Hamlet-<br /><br />"But even then the morning cock crew loud, <br /> And at the sound it shrunk in haste away, <br /> And vanish'd from our sight."<br />Hamlet Act 1 Scene 2 <br /><br />maybe the cock died after seeing the ghost<br /><br />glad to have you back Shaymoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52757735653224259752010-12-19T16:39:02.170-05:002010-12-19T16:39:02.170-05:00yes...the in between! love the last bit ' But ...yes...the in between! love the last bit ' But I never know whether to crow, be silent, or just admire your beauty through the musty parallax of this place I have always called home' <br /><br />fantastic write!<br /><br />thank youHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20833085226693208482010-12-19T16:36:20.886-05:002010-12-19T16:36:20.886-05:00hot damn...it's so nice to have you back.
&q...hot damn...it's so nice to have you back.<br /><br /><br />"In the moment that I reach for you,<br /><br />To place a veil between this place and every hope that ever came in carrying a clip board,<br /><br />Saying,<br /><br />Oh yes, yes, bring this one,<br /><br />And we will see..."<br /><br />Christ, girl, I surrender :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76983028845862305152010-12-19T16:15:14.469-05:002010-12-19T16:15:14.469-05:00Oh. My. Freaking. God. Even your new computer must...Oh. My. Freaking. God. Even your new computer must stand, amazed, at the brilliance of this. SO many incredible lines, thoughts, creative leaps. Whew. I must go read the evil Hedgewitch's offering now. But methinks you have topped the charts with this one. YAY! You are DEFINITELY Back!:)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8699880241044439362010-12-19T16:10:09.842-05:002010-12-19T16:10:09.842-05:00Oh, this is beautiful... and painful too, in an un...Oh, this is beautiful... and painful too, in an understated sort of way. I was caught immediately by the opening words: <em>This is where I love you</em>, and then the here, here, and here of it. So much that's memorable in your poem - hope carrying clip boards... corridors splitting like bronchi... too much to mention really, in a comment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45775563976233413362010-12-19T15:31:41.624-05:002010-12-19T15:31:41.624-05:00you know - there are so many brilliant lines and b...you know - there are so many brilliant lines and bubbling emotions in this poem but (hate me for it) the line i loved most is...<br />where little black plastic wheels bring the dawn in on a cart..<br />this is just fabulous..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66017661615409414282010-12-19T15:29:40.744-05:002010-12-19T15:29:40.744-05:00I think I just crapped in my pants at how brillian...I think I just crapped in my pants at how brilliant this is. Don't think I would've got round to reading it tonight, so I'm glad you commented on mine. Awesome work.Adam Common, Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18294782717721438633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26370026922644976442010-12-19T14:58:13.432-05:002010-12-19T14:58:13.432-05:00Insane roosters, who have died! Shay this was grea...Insane roosters, who have died! Shay this was great, thanks for lightening my evening reading!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27700528738706731072010-12-19T13:46:08.069-05:002010-12-19T13:46:08.069-05:00yeah shays back...the rooster is dead, long live t...yeah shays back...the rooster is dead, long live the rooster...thanks for taking us on this journey shay...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2184427322356165112010-12-19T13:25:06.487-05:002010-12-19T13:25:06.487-05:00Snuffed roosters, mangnums, and heart bubbles in t...Snuffed roosters, mangnums, and heart bubbles in this corroding world we enter vulnerable, conditioned to perceive angles that leave us to often, hurt marrow-deep, and play deaf to the choir of longing. Welcome back!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76380634518598095512010-12-19T13:18:46.133-05:002010-12-19T13:18:46.133-05:00To employ a much over-used word, I find this one r...To employ a much over-used word, I find this one rather epic. About the journey and the destination, and the ones involved in making this most long and convoluted trip, all their snap shots in a slideshow they're watching (seperately or together? both?) from either the white hotel room or the den behind the dumpster. The dead rooster seems almost as threatening as the hidden fox, and the union as scary as the division amidst the bronchi and other body parts.<br /><br />Very glad you got yourself up and running to post this today. It's excellent.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90041213996102637552010-12-19T13:11:48.227-05:002010-12-19T13:11:48.227-05:00Glad you are back and going strong as ever...love ...Glad you are back and going strong as ever...love the reference to the rooster and fox...the inbetween ...held together with love and hope...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.com