tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3516406384875416453..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Clever GypsyFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76059592263934061872012-08-15T11:39:25.807-04:002012-08-15T11:39:25.807-04:00WOW:
"She spent my coin on a biscuit
And my ...WOW:<br /><br />"She spent my coin on a biscuit<br />And my heart on a whore<br />Leaving only my stupid dazzled desire,<br />Too dim to even know it should die"<br /><br />I wasn't expecting this brilliant section; you surprised me, starting with the biscuit. Perfect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17263014571839331812009-07-30T19:41:50.803-04:002009-07-30T19:41:50.803-04:00What can I say?.. I love it!What can I say?.. I love it!She..the beauty and the besthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11710179461574830490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35109759633904409102008-04-12T07:55:00.000-04:002008-04-12T07:55:00.000-04:00Thank you, Kelly, Blu, and Jess. This has always b...Thank you, Kelly, Blu, and Jess. This has always been a bit of a favorite of mine. Even though it's about a real person, I created the gypsy part. As I wrote above, I had recently seen "The Illusionist" and also had discovered the comic strip magician Zantanna, cartoon woman of my dreams! So, I rolled all that up together, and this is the result.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17519608172524515262008-04-10T07:29:00.000-04:002008-04-10T07:29:00.000-04:00Wonderful poem, Shay. I loved the imagery you used...Wonderful poem, Shay. I loved the imagery you used. I could picture every bit of it in my mind. And the gypsy is such a clever woman. The rhythm of the poem flows so well!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02243326935103258280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90934787298394623042008-04-08T19:17:00.000-04:002008-04-08T19:17:00.000-04:00a nice hot adventure...hmmm.a nice hot adventure...hmmm.Bluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03411393257959546931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80982034419137234742008-04-08T16:55:00.000-04:002008-04-08T16:55:00.000-04:00yes, clever and bittersweet, i wasn't quite sure w...yes, clever and bittersweet, i wasn't quite sure where you were gonna take me with this one, but i enjoyed getting there to find out the outcome. Beware of clever gypsies!Kelly https://www.blogger.com/profile/16136234174682473917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80682584470651742892008-04-07T17:04:00.000-04:002008-04-07T17:04:00.000-04:00Thank you, Leigh. I had just recently seen "The Il...Thank you, Leigh. I had just recently seen "The Illusionist" at the time I wrote this, and had those sorts of things in mind.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77365416612733383992008-04-07T09:29:00.000-04:002008-04-07T09:29:00.000-04:00Clever poem.Clever poem.Leigh Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15080517449825380527noreply@blogger.com