tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3547476568659295693..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Moon FableFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7749763471659777462014-03-04T16:57:19.860-05:002014-03-04T16:57:19.860-05:00Fireblossom, I'm amazed at the places the real...Fireblossom, I'm amazed at the places the realms of your imagination take us! That was indeed a captivating fable!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21537390153369890102014-03-04T12:27:18.288-05:002014-03-04T12:27:18.288-05:00Beautifully written...like rails on your childhood...Beautifully written...like rails on your childhood bed...love.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5680515230602378992014-03-04T11:59:52.862-05:002014-03-04T11:59:52.862-05:00What a delightful tale, well Written!
What a delightful tale, well Written! <br /><br />Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04679461800084973868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46756061590441219332014-03-04T00:43:27.199-05:002014-03-04T00:43:27.199-05:00you are a storyteller of note! Well Done!you are a storyteller of note! Well Done!Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75333387480180421082014-03-03T22:07:17.282-05:002014-03-03T22:07:17.282-05:00That was great. And even in my sickened state it ...That was great. And even in my sickened state it really made me laugh. Thanks...I needed that :-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65214388108789585772014-03-03T19:20:04.587-05:002014-03-03T19:20:04.587-05:00Oh what a crafty critter is the lion. This fable h...Oh what a crafty critter is the lion. This fable has a simplicity and style that reminds me of Aesop. Love it!<br /><br />Pat<br />Critter AlleyPat Wahlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01138619912065680084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52820884035878873382014-03-03T17:08:06.166-05:002014-03-03T17:08:06.166-05:00This was such a great story to read cool about the...This was such a great story to read cool about the zebra splitting in two. Really enjoyed reading this..thank you..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82479635349388447832014-03-03T16:01:16.976-05:002014-03-03T16:01:16.976-05:00I like the way you tell a story. Loved the zebra ...I like the way you tell a story. Loved the zebra splitting and giving her stripes to the dark and the stars. Wow.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26292259517279257262014-03-03T14:37:30.997-05:002014-03-03T14:37:30.997-05:00Well, I declare, a fairy tale for grown ups! Thank...Well, I declare, a fairy tale for grown ups! Thank you so much, it's brilliantly done.Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44513377410650852332014-03-03T13:16:34.589-05:002014-03-03T13:16:34.589-05:00I love this so much! I love this so much! Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31064965578352880302014-03-03T12:26:44.077-05:002014-03-03T12:26:44.077-05:00Oh Shay, the word magical does not do justice to y...Oh Shay, the word magical does not do justice to your tale. Ancient storytelling, today.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27330807628725267352014-03-03T12:22:15.754-05:002014-03-03T12:22:15.754-05:00Like all fables, a song, a speech, a cautionary ta...Like all fables, a song, a speech, a cautionary tale and an arc between past and future where each artifact of our cells can walk from one to the other--you strike just the right tone here, too, bare but still ornate with gleamy visuals, and I knew there was some Lorca moondust before I even got to that part--inspired writing, Shay, in the best kind of way, (and in a way it also reminds me of the Benda zebra--she could also split herself, i think.)hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56391851699918661912014-03-03T11:22:39.906-05:002014-03-03T11:22:39.906-05:00Such a cool fable . . . love the sound that accomp...Such a cool fable . . . love the sound that accompanies the burp.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6648046123198259962014-03-03T10:52:55.493-05:002014-03-03T10:52:55.493-05:00I love, I love, I love! I'm going to read thi...I love, I love, I love! I'm going to read this to Baby Puppy.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5889257273990455842014-03-03T09:44:26.802-05:002014-03-03T09:44:26.802-05:00This is a fable that should be taught in schools. ...This is a fable that should be taught in schools. Beautiful, Shay.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23276889174353807782014-03-03T09:17:29.512-05:002014-03-03T09:17:29.512-05:00I like these Gypsies , they are crazy brave , and ...I like these Gypsies , they are crazy brave , and thank you cor letting us look through their treasure ....Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47372637691417873452014-03-03T08:51:45.477-05:002014-03-03T08:51:45.477-05:00I enjoyed this very clever fable. What we swallow ...I enjoyed this very clever fable. What we swallow only repeats.Cait O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04569760764766505179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87126481383093048772014-03-03T08:39:42.276-05:002014-03-03T08:39:42.276-05:00Fab fable from FB ...Fab fable from FB ...Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.com