tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3696963863038773037..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The Small HouseFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3166587022714254922012-02-06T14:56:56.465-05:002012-02-06T14:56:56.465-05:00This reminds me of David E Kelley style story-tell...This reminds me of David E Kelley style story-telling. It resonated with the anti-social me.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9062845592688980512011-10-23T21:40:33.455-04:002011-10-23T21:40:33.455-04:00Makes you glad that she could escape to the small ...Makes you glad that she could escape to the small house. Hell, I wish that I could escape to a small house sometimes.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11560223008118512672011-10-22T21:45:00.352-04:002011-10-22T21:45:00.352-04:00I could live in this tiny house.I could live in this tiny house.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78273394092848100542011-10-22T13:09:35.352-04:002011-10-22T13:09:35.352-04:00How did I miss this? Lovely.How did I miss this? Lovely.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53328682439898770692011-10-21T22:58:37.798-04:002011-10-21T22:58:37.798-04:00I always like the expression, "Big love grows...I always like the expression, "Big love grows in small houses"<br />Tis poem fits :-)machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34274311531777595582011-10-21T20:47:42.527-04:002011-10-21T20:47:42.527-04:00Enjoyed this a lot - good read, made me smile. =)Enjoyed this a lot - good read, made me smile. =)Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41307038922122580532011-10-21T19:51:36.564-04:002011-10-21T19:51:36.564-04:00I wish I had that house! I'd move in tomorrow!...I wish I had that house! I'd move in tomorrow!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36557070682161902392011-10-21T12:29:41.289-04:002011-10-21T12:29:41.289-04:00Lovely and poignant. One feels the loneliness of t...Lovely and poignant. One feels the loneliness of the little girl, related to her baboon-people in the big house.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49050648265950456832011-10-21T11:48:14.611-04:002011-10-21T11:48:14.611-04:00So perfectly composed its one of those where you c...So perfectly composed its one of those where you can't believe its only 55 words. My husband has a photo book called Tiny Houses, like the one in your pic, and they seem to embody a sort of wholeness that many bigger houses dissipate in unneeded rooms of chaos, full of baboons. Loved this small dream, however far away the moon always seems to stay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2701986715882729782011-10-21T11:35:21.727-04:002011-10-21T11:35:21.727-04:00This is really beautiful, thank you.This is really beautiful, thank you.Linchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13375102514322010676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52045103916877735372011-10-21T11:33:51.109-04:002011-10-21T11:33:51.109-04:00That's a darling little house alright. You pu...That's a darling little house alright. You put the reader right inside it, Shay.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85362679330278819232011-10-21T10:49:59.868-04:002011-10-21T10:49:59.868-04:00some mornings I awaken and choose to live in a ...some mornings I awaken and choose to live in a 'little house', one I never had as a child. Hopefully, it's not just for little girls :-{)Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59007401757860588962011-10-21T09:00:40.484-04:002011-10-21T09:00:40.484-04:00Love the sing-songy sweetness of this.Love the sing-songy sweetness of this.Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60415041963278150112011-10-21T02:45:55.870-04:002011-10-21T02:45:55.870-04:00I would have thought big dreams could have come ou...I would have thought big dreams could have come out of that little house. I liked the wild baboons.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73112107302520862652011-10-21T00:12:40.862-04:002011-10-21T00:12:40.862-04:00"Where a small girl
Dreamed dreams as pretty,..."Where a small girl<br />Dreamed dreams as pretty,<br />small,<br />and distant<br />As the moon."<br /><br />love this 55, Shay! ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55946283914638381192011-10-20T23:45:18.369-04:002011-10-20T23:45:18.369-04:00you make writing seem effortless, love visiting he...you make writing seem effortless, love visiting here, enjoyed this very muchChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86118963668030024442011-10-20T23:14:32.593-04:002011-10-20T23:14:32.593-04:00we relate to that girl in her private space. . .
...we relate to that girl in her private space. . . <br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki;<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /> <br /> ><}}(°>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40513929115502578222011-10-20T22:26:41.943-04:002011-10-20T22:26:41.943-04:00we all need our places to escape to...even if we c...we all need our places to escape to...even if we can not get out of the orbit of the big one...keep dreaming little girl in the little house...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46375784835641318862011-10-20T22:10:56.457-04:002011-10-20T22:10:56.457-04:00Hmmmm....
Beat out by Edgar Allen Poe
Grrrrrrrrr
...Hmmmm....<br />Beat out by Edgar Allen Poe<br />Grrrrrrrrr<br /><br />Loved your Small Story Shay.<br />It's always an honor to have you play.<br />Thanks for visiting and reading, and have a Kick Ass Week-EndG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53351015718215493672011-10-20T22:09:51.547-04:002011-10-20T22:09:51.547-04:00I love this little poem. I like its simplicity, it...I love this little poem. I like its simplicity, its rhythm, its balance. Nicely done.The Subversive Librarianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13980058154838873164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67718314993882403172011-10-20T22:02:29.775-04:002011-10-20T22:02:29.775-04:00It's important for a kid to have a place where...It's important for a kid to have a place where s/he can dream. Great poem! Thanks for sending me into the weekend with a smile :-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.com