tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3774038306286903557..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): ColorformsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23565910775855370302014-06-09T13:59:57.828-04:002014-06-09T13:59:57.828-04:00This is real as rain. Gorgeous, Shay.This is real as rain. Gorgeous, Shay.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43912777914320204082014-06-08T23:51:57.089-04:002014-06-08T23:51:57.089-04:00This is so original...You create such a story in t...This is so original...You create such a story in the form of a letter. You made me smile while at the same time I felt a few tears. Great write!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56487038147121133902014-06-07T10:10:00.335-04:002014-06-07T10:10:00.335-04:00Since I don't know what colorforms are (possib...Since I don't know what colorforms are (possibly a language/culture thing) I had a chance to imagine it to be just about anything, and that made the already wonderful letter so much more wonderful, enchanting, mysterious and poetic. Wonderful write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41695505882179235732014-06-07T08:58:07.820-04:002014-06-07T08:58:07.820-04:00Very vivid and real, so personal as to be universa...Very vivid and real, so personal as to be universal. K . Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4725269136813316162014-06-07T08:17:57.300-04:002014-06-07T08:17:57.300-04:00Wow, Shay! I have to read it again-I loved colorf...Wow, Shay! I have to read it again-I loved colorforms-you write the best flash poetry!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84512500191429466472014-06-07T02:48:34.014-04:002014-06-07T02:48:34.014-04:00only you could connect colorforms and the goddess!...only you could connect colorforms and the goddess!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17586287898067899722014-06-06T21:15:23.494-04:002014-06-06T21:15:23.494-04:00Your writing comes to life and your voice is audib...Your writing comes to life and your voice is audible, Shay...I love this letter. I also enjoy your use of colorforms in a nostalgic way but then also as the emotion of blue...love that. Excellent work!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52156428696812038182014-06-06T13:30:28.802-04:002014-06-06T13:30:28.802-04:00Emotion welling up inside me .. can't stop it ...Emotion welling up inside me .. can't stop it .. bubbling over! Something terrifically clever for me to say? FORGEDABOUTIT! You aced this.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18693975501239220262014-06-06T12:30:33.301-04:002014-06-06T12:30:33.301-04:00Wow. I was wishing that just this once she didnt d...Wow. I was wishing that just this once she didnt disappear and that you got another chance. Love the coming back to reality and wondering if the dog ate his food. That is SO how life goes on. Sigh. Loved this.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62193448662758717812014-06-06T11:26:42.416-04:002014-06-06T11:26:42.416-04:00I think cinematic is a good choice of word for thi...I think cinematic is a good choice of word for this story within a letter. So many great concepts at work here - the colorform analogy, and the sense that this may be another way to write about unrequited love, in the unanswered letters still being sent out.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47654640400306863222014-06-06T11:22:49.984-04:002014-06-06T11:22:49.984-04:00cinematic
Thanks again.cinematic<br />Thanks again.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86976285917488861012014-06-06T11:22:13.204-04:002014-06-06T11:22:13.204-04:00Tears in my eyes. Your story-poem twisted my gut ...Tears in my eyes. Your story-poem twisted my gut and is so cinimatic I was there, and also in my own journey wondering how she vanished and whether the cat is well. Bravo!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53088329253351302542014-06-06T10:40:24.236-04:002014-06-06T10:40:24.236-04:00Very personal, very real, and a full share of comm...Very personal, very real, and a full share of commonality with all of us who long to see someone who is never really there. hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86474304346858939422014-06-06T10:16:46.247-04:002014-06-06T10:16:46.247-04:00i was waiting and hoping for the traffic to subsid...i was waiting and hoping for the traffic to subside for both of you to meet up on the other side! dammit!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6157324290965380022014-06-06T08:56:31.880-04:002014-06-06T08:56:31.880-04:00Ahhhhh.....your words always give me a bit of goos...Ahhhhh.....your words always give me a bit of goose pimples. I so love your voice and the reality that it uses to flavor your characters. As you know I am a big fan of characterization and dialogue, and you always manage to endear a reader to a character in a flash. You always leave the reader wanting more and that is a talent that will always make you one of my faves. Hope this missive finds you well, we will talk again soon.<br /><br />Lots of Love,<br /><br />Herotomost.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87660086250364609292014-06-06T08:21:48.763-04:002014-06-06T08:21:48.763-04:00I had completely forgotten about colorforms! I lo...I had completely forgotten about colorforms! I love that you wrote such a lyrical letter around them.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.com