tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post387209110804230696..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Snow White, Hopeful LycanthropeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79944804673708185272011-06-21T11:42:52.810-04:002011-06-21T11:42:52.810-04:00'heart in a cookie jar' 'fed on limes&...'heart in a cookie jar' 'fed on limes' ~ master indeed ~ dipped, ducked, danced and dived throughout ~ but cannot believe that any could ever concieve to leave ~ spellbound Shay ~ thankyou so very much for the clear and concise expression and explanation ~ sharing not only your time but your knowledge and wonderful expertise ~ Midsummer wishes ~ Lib ~ @Libithinalibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25534165932528908892011-06-21T10:46:43.547-04:002011-06-21T10:46:43.547-04:00"...
He says you won't come,
But I howl..."...<br />He says you won't come,<br /><br /><br />But I howl and call<br /><br />all night in the blizzard,<br /><br />just in case you do."<br /><br />Ouch, how I feel that. The desperation and the hope.... beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52620028654722550542011-06-21T03:51:45.128-04:002011-06-21T03:51:45.128-04:00A nice touch, desperation and longing portrayed in...A nice touch, desperation and longing portrayed in a cunning, light manner.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11557967723463286392011-06-20T23:51:47.097-04:002011-06-20T23:51:47.097-04:00Nice...love the keeping of your heart in a cookie ...Nice...love the keeping of your heart in a cookie jar...and your actor up high...thanks for hosting Shay...always fun..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27679167138051696852011-06-20T23:51:46.089-04:002011-06-20T23:51:46.089-04:00Nice...love the keeping of your heart in a cookie ...Nice...love the keeping of your heart in a cookie jar...and your actor up high...thanks for hosting Shay...always fun..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61902530556367746982011-06-20T21:23:38.666-04:002011-06-20T21:23:38.666-04:00The shifting focus really left a great flow in the...The shifting focus really left a great flow in the verse. Great write ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9007030486221254362011-06-20T21:19:35.368-04:002011-06-20T21:19:35.368-04:00This has a lovely cadence, and everything that mak...This has a lovely cadence, and everything that makes poetry good, plus it expresses heart. Beautiful piece. <br /><br />Your write up on free verse was helpful. I've bookmarked it for reference. Thank you.brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26779915154477865072011-06-20T21:00:31.237-04:002011-06-20T21:00:31.237-04:00Many adjectives come to mind - magical, quirky, bl...Many adjectives come to mind - magical, quirky, bluesy, snazzy, and it was an excellent link to your article. <br /><br />Thank you so much for your explication and your examples. It is journal worthy and you did One Stop Poetry proud and I am honored that you accepted my request. GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73391595949119132302011-06-20T16:00:07.913-04:002011-06-20T16:00:07.913-04:00I keep a man, under my thumb (where he should be i...I keep a man, under my thumb (where he should be in my honest opinion) who tells me to keep away from the cookie jar when I feel like eating! Oh this was good, a whole scene from a play in one poem. All hail the freeverse queen ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38234216715437390172011-06-20T15:16:59.434-04:002011-06-20T15:16:59.434-04:00I used keep mine in the cookie jar too but it got ...I used keep mine in the cookie jar too but it got found out; now I keep it where no one ever looks. Even I don't remember where.<br /><br />I loved trying to unravel this. Was completely unsuccessful but enjoyed the try.Randy Behaviorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17221025801740967490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52861242758214982452011-06-20T14:11:48.607-04:002011-06-20T14:11:48.607-04:00A strange but intense grief encompassing your ever...A strange but intense grief encompassing your every word. Fireblossom, you have that unknown magic in you, leaving us enthralled. :) wow!Monikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15844893934428524824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84947212615862637952011-06-20T13:49:01.126-04:002011-06-20T13:49:01.126-04:00This wolf must like prey that can be turned -- oh ...This wolf must like prey that can be turned -- oh yeah, she's a were-wolf. And dudes are painted ducks,part of the turning-game. And the wolf, well, it's hard to hear the howls for all the fine high singing. But I see the fangs, oh yes I do, shagassing outta here.-BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37156104100608656152011-06-20T10:43:55.708-04:002011-06-20T10:43:55.708-04:00Great choice to link today. I enjoyed the chance t...Great choice to link today. I enjoyed the chance to read it again and savor the vintage as it ages in the WG cask to total mellow.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17494090897866116752011-06-20T09:59:01.215-04:002011-06-20T09:59:01.215-04:00You really are a master of free verse. I love your...You really are a master of free verse. I love your style and personal perspective on relationships.<br />This is another stunning piece.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79576847733181702302011-06-20T08:56:44.643-04:002011-06-20T08:56:44.643-04:00Very nice ~ no good at all turning into a saint......Very nice ~ no good at all turning into a saint...whatever next? ;)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60104672057120823702011-06-06T12:26:50.991-04:002011-06-06T12:26:50.991-04:00It's Charlie Sheen, isn't it?It's Charlie Sheen, isn't it?Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36027097952242771232011-06-06T10:12:32.661-04:002011-06-06T10:12:32.661-04:00Mr Charles would have loved thisMr Charles would have loved thisDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23760579957368464262011-06-04T23:49:38.634-04:002011-06-04T23:49:38.634-04:00what is there to say really, except ~
perfection!...what is there to say really, except ~<br /><br />perfection!<br />dAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69575595549940752042011-06-04T23:47:42.522-04:002011-06-04T23:47:42.522-04:00"I keep my heart
hidden in a cookie jar
in ..."I keep my heart<br /><br />hidden in a cookie jar<br /><br />in my kitchen." - for some reason, Shay, this made me want to cry.<br /><br />I love the actor in the suitcase - it seems the right location.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78836571064209141272011-06-04T23:42:07.433-04:002011-06-04T23:42:07.433-04:00Why, oh why, do we wait on the one that will never...Why, oh why, do we wait on the one that will never show?<br />Yet, the one is there, is shrugged away without a care.machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20579499009965770072011-06-04T21:17:09.219-04:002011-06-04T21:17:09.219-04:00please do not subject us to felt board bible stori...please do not subject us to felt board bible stories...please go to her and appease her before it comes to that...smiles.<br /><br />delightful write shayBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3715575154706871042011-06-04T21:04:24.446-04:002011-06-04T21:04:24.446-04:00Good grief! Why would a girlfriend ever leave you...Good grief! Why would a girlfriend ever leave you?Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44960710144795409702011-06-04T20:46:25.835-04:002011-06-04T20:46:25.835-04:00The heart is a lonely lycanthrope, indeed. The act...The heart is a lonely lycanthrope, indeed. The actor in the suitcase is a fetch worthy of any sorceress, and whatever the writer may turn into, it will still howl, I feel. A clever and twisty poem, with a rock bottom to it and a haunting melody of love pitched low.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com