tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3954632020287746354..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): AdviceFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40370983178750744192014-01-13T01:31:01.089-05:002014-01-13T01:31:01.089-05:00fuck! i am never trying to write again!
shit! thi...fuck! i am never trying to write again!<br /><br />shit! this is about as close to perfection as anything could ever be!<br />damn you anyway!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8480509947517335022014-01-09T10:09:14.398-05:002014-01-09T10:09:14.398-05:00I doesn't get any better than this. Ever.I doesn't get any better than this. Ever.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90022706316541552532014-01-08T19:56:21.184-05:002014-01-08T19:56:21.184-05:00You are The Storyteller of Poetry!
If I had a Thim...You are The Storyteller of Poetry!<br />If I had a Thimble full of your talent, I could call<br />myself great. It's an honor to be in your presence,<br />Your Highness <br />GalenG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6251016236113371032014-01-08T13:18:31.571-05:002014-01-08T13:18:31.571-05:00Gorgeous, Shay!Gorgeous, Shay!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48188528474829143352014-01-08T03:41:40.471-05:002014-01-08T03:41:40.471-05:00men are wizards cuz all we can do is wiz. women ar...men are wizards cuz all we can do is wiz. women are witches cuz you know which way is which.<br /><br />you know which way is which.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35388951076177970682014-01-08T01:49:16.362-05:002014-01-08T01:49:16.362-05:00This poem says so much to me about the self-actual...This poem says so much to me about the self-actualization of the feminine psyche. There are so many restrictions, real and psychological, against women coming into their own - even in the free world - and I maintain it to be one of the most powerful metamorphoses of human consciousness. Your poem has put everything I have ever believe, intrinsically, into words.<br /><br />This is phenomenal.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78427066256609568072014-01-07T23:49:38.784-05:002014-01-07T23:49:38.784-05:00I love how in the misguided we can always find our...I love how in the misguided we can always find ourselves~ Beautiful Shay~ (I love your words and the photo)Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10593819912616808912014-01-07T23:17:37.087-05:002014-01-07T23:17:37.087-05:00Running has always worked for me--though sometimes...Running has always worked for me--though sometimes the things that chase you know how to run fairly well themselves. <br /><br />This is full of bright jewel knives that morph,from<br /><i>I pulled the nails up inside my feet,<br />until I had claws,</i> <br />into<br /><i>I gave myself a name, and the name means "beloved" </i><br />making a sense of pervasive tenderness roll over what was designed to give pain, and a shining that makes them seem only misplaced things that ended by creating a beauty & strength they never intended. (I almost never quote but sometimes...you know, you have to.) One of your best, Shay, than which there is no better.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86551378705745661132014-01-07T22:50:04.013-05:002014-01-07T22:50:04.013-05:00serious consequences, distilled pains, art, yearni...serious consequences, distilled pains, art, yearning, self abasement and self celebration!<br />liberation in love-<br />We are not ordinary, and that has always seemed a great thing during unimaginable trials. . . .<br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA, Dark Red Star,(Shay)<br /> from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /><br /><br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25683064241583052182014-01-07T22:16:04.485-05:002014-01-07T22:16:04.485-05:00Tell me, where you inspired by that amazing photo?...Tell me, where you inspired by that amazing photo? Great piece!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41180968574608160532014-01-07T20:04:50.001-05:002014-01-07T20:04:50.001-05:00"I hid my heart in the hollow of a tree"..."I hid my heart in the hollow of a tree". An especially brilliant poem, Shay. Loved it. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com