tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4580511704374171135..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): I Walk Out On The Fragrant Fields Of September*Fireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45495131328904569932020-10-04T19:04:13.017-04:002020-10-04T19:04:13.017-04:00with just a few strokes you bring worlds to life ~...with just a few strokes you bring worlds to life ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39665174129363996552020-10-01T13:51:51.453-04:002020-10-01T13:51:51.453-04:00This painted a lovely and witty look at two lives ...This painted a lovely and witty look at two lives each getting love from the other.<br /><br />“Moo me a clue, girlfriend”<br /><br />“Soft moo of stay-tuned, Chickie”<br /><br />Just love this!purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72956694107968637162020-09-27T17:35:28.499-04:002020-09-27T17:35:28.499-04:00“following the shifting arrow of a weather vane
an...“following the shifting arrow of a weather vane<br />and the cowbell-call of my wandering girl”<br /><br />"It's just me, with my bucket and milking hat, <br />dandelion blooms in the pocket of my smock."<br /><br />Love. So much.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20814171893139601122020-09-27T17:34:02.675-04:002020-09-27T17:34:02.675-04:00Warrior cow milking, always one of my favorite the...Warrior cow milking, always one of my favorite themes. Wasn't there some of that in the lost transcripts of Beowulf? You did this one up right. "Moo me a clue, girlfriend" is priceless. And party crashing hyenas! Do they hunt and eat any psalms that don't make it back to barn?qbithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08373768695201177514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15967689807972538402020-09-27T14:36:06.645-04:002020-09-27T14:36:06.645-04:00I love they mythic tone of this, and then the humo...I love they mythic tone of this, and then the humorous juxtaposition of the "bonnet and breastplate" or the "Moo me a clue, girlfriend" or "The soft moo of stay tuned, Chickie"<br />Really cool write, Fireblossom.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10183472595469527782020-09-27T14:18:29.935-04:002020-09-27T14:18:29.935-04:00Such a beautiful poem. It speaks to my questioning...Such a beautiful poem. It speaks to my questioning heart where I seek peace through animals more than any human. As always, I am in such awe of your writing. Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29614063824024603752020-09-27T12:58:10.606-04:002020-09-27T12:58:10.606-04:00What a joyous read! I loved the incongruity of a ...What a joyous read! I loved the incongruity of a breast plate and bonnet, along with the Stool of Error and .... well, I just simply adored it all! I think I may have to order a Stool of Error. There seem to be frequent occasion when one is required!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6266639334699408562020-09-27T12:45:42.716-04:002020-09-27T12:45:42.716-04:00Your Bessie-poem delighted me, through and through...Your Bessie-poem delighted me, through and through. "the soft moo of stay tuned, chickie" had me snorting out loud. Moo, moo.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-307454090584308902020-09-27T11:22:46.136-04:002020-09-27T11:22:46.136-04:00Sigh. This made me so happy to read. It is amazing...Sigh. This made me so happy to read. It is amazing, wonderful. Every, Single. Word. Perfection in a poem!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40436633329856487452020-09-27T10:44:00.297-04:002020-09-27T10:44:00.297-04:00...I am just in awe. Dorothy as a Valkyrie and tha......I am just in awe. Dorothy as a Valkyrie and that cow...how do you do it? Draw everything in and recreate it?? C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90133150142580176382020-09-27T10:02:53.875-04:002020-09-27T10:02:53.875-04:00Moo la la! Ha! Moo la la! Ha! Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50638359965708828802020-09-27T09:32:02.208-04:002020-09-27T09:32:02.208-04:00Wonderful. Loved the bonnet and the breastplate to...Wonderful. Loved the bonnet and the breastplate to start with. Petru J Viljoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04821468855056711841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16534339451778176372020-09-27T09:16:56.985-04:002020-09-27T09:16:56.985-04:00The world of this poem enchants me, charms me, lik...The world of this poem enchants me, charms me, like some faery realm I will be captured by forever if I enter. I don't understand it, so I won't claim to analyze it, but I find it beautiful, other-worldly and beguilingly odd. You are a truly gifted poet, Shay. I can do nothing but gasp in awe.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43395949782215438962020-09-26T20:18:34.558-04:002020-09-26T20:18:34.558-04:00I love the feel of how this moves through both a d...I love the feel of how this moves through both a day but yet is like an entire life flashing before us. This is full of beauty and deep with the questions all women have in their heart! I have always sensed a certain gentleness in cows. I love how that was also evident here. Gorgeous, wise, and profound! I love love love this Shay!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42184023664640230362020-09-26T19:25:24.710-04:002020-09-26T19:25:24.710-04:00Nice, nice, nice, Shay, very enjoyable reading. I...Nice, nice, nice, Shay, very enjoyable reading. I'm glad the milkmaid was able to get Bessie back home. And I love all the names you've come up with. I'll choose 'Stool of Error', milkmaids are sitting low and in precarious position for a kicking cow to reach. We had three one-legged stools, one each for Mom, Dad, and me. None for my younger sister, I don't think she even learned to milk a cow. <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.com