tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4827889823712770467..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The LDR Of The Silent Movie QueenFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81026678669912448552011-09-07T21:44:11.444-04:002011-09-07T21:44:11.444-04:00Shay, we haven't met. I'm John and I just...Shay, we haven't met. I'm John and I just found your poem on Hedgewithch's blog...... intensely beautiful...... I felt the passion of that young radio show host..... You sold me on the "raccoon eye" and "Cupid's bow mouth." Instantly I imagined a beautiful young silent-film starlet on set in full regalia and makeup. And then enter a radio talk show host.... and I had to think for a moment, no, those two couldn't be, different generations, different eras.. and then - that last stanza blew me away...... how awesome.... I really enjoyed this poem. I felt everything that young man did... his passion ripped through me..... "he whispers, don't hang up.." Oh.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78492633058406773922011-09-06T17:15:06.383-04:002011-09-06T17:15:06.383-04:00i love, love, love the ending! the entire poem is ...i love, love, love the ending! the entire poem is brilliant! glad your power's back on. ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2029460373111327422011-09-06T17:06:13.061-04:002011-09-06T17:06:13.061-04:00in the dark...
nice one
Aloha from Waikiki;
...in the dark...<br /><br /><br /><br />nice one<br /><br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki;<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /> <br /><br /> <br /> ><}}(°>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37782310866094135462011-09-06T14:47:51.347-04:002011-09-06T14:47:51.347-04:00I tried very hard to find Mary Pickford in Viking ...I tried very hard to find Mary Pickford in Viking regalia, but apparently she never played Brunnhilda or anything really cool like that. (Sad waste of talent, imo.)<br /><br />This is a fine poem which I enjoyed a lot, and I was so happy I could help get it out in time for the prompt. I'm even happier your power is finally back on. What an ordeal!hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16836293238007495172011-09-06T14:02:50.408-04:002011-09-06T14:02:50.408-04:00Come on; just one viking?Come on; just one viking?Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40985866001751832932011-09-06T10:46:38.618-04:002011-09-06T10:46:38.618-04:00Raccoon eyes - that's just what they look like...Raccoon eyes - that's just what they look like. :) <br /><br />50 hours without power - that's terrible! Glad it's back on and glad you have such a good friend.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89683455732885329612011-09-06T10:26:37.522-04:002011-09-06T10:26:37.522-04:00Wow. You are the master of visualization. Geez...Wow. You are the master of visualization. Geez, this was good.<br /><br />I'm glad you got your power back. That must have been tough.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8073607141156972062011-09-06T09:59:50.388-04:002011-09-06T09:59:50.388-04:00She DOES have fabulous raccoon eyes.
And thwat wa...She DOES have fabulous raccoon eyes.<br /><br />And thwat was some nice of Hedgewitch. 50 hours w/o power, oitch.<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51740557312571704332011-09-06T08:32:39.430-04:002011-09-06T08:32:39.430-04:00yay! all is right once more in the world...shay is...yay! all is right once more in the world...shay is back in power...hedge is cool...and its great to see you shay...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85454037113431702142011-09-06T08:20:29.341-04:002011-09-06T08:20:29.341-04:00He believes that she
can teach him not to fear bei...He believes that she<br />can teach him not to fear being seen.<br /><br />AwesomeDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75821115888700774952011-09-06T06:36:36.084-04:002011-09-06T06:36:36.084-04:00First of all, I'm glad you survived without po...First of all, I'm glad you survived without power for that long with your sanity still intact.<br /><br />There's a creepy undercurrent (or perhaps an overcurrent...Is there such a thing?) in your poem. The phrase "raccoon eyes," the ending is fabulous, and the way you captured the look of the silent screen stars is spot-on.<br /><br />Glad the power is back on...in more ways than one (inspirationally-speaking, not talent-wise).Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5443891341179873962011-09-06T06:30:21.836-04:002011-09-06T06:30:21.836-04:00It sizzles. I said more over at Hedgewitch's p...It sizzles. I said more over at Hedgewitch's posting of your post. <br />Glad you are <em>power</em>ful once again. :)<br /><br /><br />word veri: wordieLydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.com