tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4870195750078868110..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The WindFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5187038070201368872013-04-21T01:48:29.110-04:002013-04-21T01:48:29.110-04:00damn! this is one of my new favorites, Sis!
fucki...damn! this is one of my new favorites, Sis!<br /><br />fucking brilliant!<br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38709495195791454992013-04-10T12:28:46.486-04:002013-04-10T12:28:46.486-04:00Excellent. And so true.
This is my favorite:
&quo...Excellent. And so true.<br /><br />This is my favorite:<br />"Still and all"<br /><br />And then this:<br />"The one I love couldn't find the breath to speak my name"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8549599111974790352013-04-09T15:42:36.570-04:002013-04-09T15:42:36.570-04:00I love how you write such a variety of poetry. You...I love how you write such a variety of poetry. You can write a complex poem with many twists and turns, but then stop and write a simple, few-words that say so much:~)Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44309738097374749612013-04-09T11:44:40.372-04:002013-04-09T11:44:40.372-04:00You made every word count. Love the closing lines....You made every word count. Love the closing lines.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19226228083644627412013-04-09T09:18:37.249-04:002013-04-09T09:18:37.249-04:00I love the way you turned the wind on its ear and ...I love the way you turned the wind on its ear and put it in its rightful place. Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56216205828085892062013-04-09T07:09:35.852-04:002013-04-09T07:09:35.852-04:00You were most certainly NOT full of hot air when y...You were most certainly NOT full of hot air when you wrote this...This poem left me breathless (she laughed over her lame jokes).<br /><br />Really--dark and oh-so-true.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86606643996651966392013-04-08T23:47:15.340-04:002013-04-08T23:47:15.340-04:00The wind is a hollow beast. I can hear it in this...The wind is a hollow beast. I can hear it in this poem.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66777285597406953792013-04-08T22:05:15.513-04:002013-04-08T22:05:15.513-04:00Sounds *exactly* like some people I know. Great p...Sounds *exactly* like some people I know. Great piece!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59269002085096061812013-04-08T21:18:12.201-04:002013-04-08T21:18:12.201-04:00The wind is a spirit that can move the earth, but ...The wind is a spirit that can move the earth, but only that other spirit can move the heart. Agree w/MZ on the directness here. Works well.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1803544266544750252013-04-08T21:05:02.951-04:002013-04-08T21:05:02.951-04:00This has a directness and simplicity to it that is...This has a directness and simplicity to it that is beyond all but the best. You make it look easy.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10603295843490770052013-04-08T21:02:45.932-04:002013-04-08T21:02:45.932-04:00... as are many loud people .. empty.... as are many loud people .. empty.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34059881195902754542013-04-08T20:47:22.729-04:002013-04-08T20:47:22.729-04:00the last line is awesome. sad but i really liked i...the last line is awesome. sad but i really liked it. :)TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com