tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4920511441932186184..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): St. CreolaFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28967484617970453352011-09-10T10:44:59.908-04:002011-09-10T10:44:59.908-04:00This one's pure genius, Shay...and the image i...This one's pure genius, Shay...and the image is just perfect! You've set the mood, mi'ja...now I just need some moving men, the ones that "ripple when standing still." Yeah, that would be a perfect image as well! lolIleanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88236776901989389182011-09-09T23:42:49.061-04:002011-09-09T23:42:49.061-04:00"keeps the birds from getting sedentary
or ol..."keeps the birds from getting sedentary<br />or old."<br /><br />HA! LOVE that! actually, i love the entire poem. i'll go with mind-boggling, too. ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1560122126998051952011-09-09T21:56:52.163-04:002011-09-09T21:56:52.163-04:00HOW do you do it?
Aloha from Waikiki;
Comfort ...HOW do you do it?<br /><br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki;<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /> <br /><br /> <br /> ><}}(°>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16980242566354445532011-09-09T21:23:39.764-04:002011-09-09T21:23:39.764-04:00Image after beautiful image! Gorgeous writing, Sh...Image after beautiful image! Gorgeous writing, Shay. Truly.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40323561957762802322011-09-09T19:35:33.202-04:002011-09-09T19:35:33.202-04:00I used to be a Joan of Arc groupie...You just gave...I used to be a Joan of Arc groupie...You just gave me a more contemporary saint to follow.<br /><br />Shay---Are you back for good?Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43002129349673847492011-09-09T15:36:56.763-04:002011-09-09T15:36:56.763-04:00This is one interesting saint! I might even like t...This is one interesting saint! I might even like to keep an image of her on my dashboard, and I'm Jewish!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55014074094068236512011-09-09T13:04:31.498-04:002011-09-09T13:04:31.498-04:00Hedgewitch said it - mind-boggling. I am boggled b...Hedgewitch said it - mind-boggling. I am boggled by your creative genius. I especially love "pie-eyed little pilgrim", and sending the coffins tumbling off the cliff. What a read this morning! First Joy's, now yours. I am already sated!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64895038666327598942011-09-09T12:39:42.655-04:002011-09-09T12:39:42.655-04:00Fuckin' awesome writing, just awesome. I'...Fuckin' awesome writing, just awesome. I'm sure she lives in a hidden lair by the French Quarter and sells counterfeit voodoo dolls to unsuspecting tourists...Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74271172470025245342011-09-09T12:09:51.954-04:002011-09-09T12:09:51.954-04:00i would def believe in her...kinda like the parous...i would def believe in her...kinda like the parousel too as a symbol..she seems gentle enough and not minding shit on the couch is a plus...some really nice phraseology through out...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7849077957872273902011-09-09T10:38:28.195-04:002011-09-09T10:38:28.195-04:00You know, occasionally I come across a religion I&...You know, occasionally I come across a religion I'd like to be able to believe in; I'm not sure if I'm ready for one this realistic, but I do like the way it rolls. The second stanza, the jelly butter muffin, and the cascading coffins make me feel just the teensiest bit unsure of whether St Creola would be listening to my prayers in quite the way I meant them. Another fine, surreal and mind-boggling piece.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67340789286964194022011-09-09T10:37:00.377-04:002011-09-09T10:37:00.377-04:00Coffins at a starting line. That line is great.Coffins at a starting line. That line is great.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84425717038356161292011-09-09T10:20:01.306-04:002011-09-09T10:20:01.306-04:00"Let your softness leave her boneless, beatif..."Let your softness leave her boneless, beatific, even a little bruised" - such an exquisite phrase!<br /><br />Love the stockings in the first pic, and the 2nd pic reminds me of the toilet tissue commercial where the rough replacement roll tossed to the guy shaves his head)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.com