tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post492906226434871707..comments2024-03-28T19:48:05.247-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): MirandaFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64097907990245516512010-08-15T17:41:26.211-04:002010-08-15T17:41:26.211-04:00Bravo fireblossom, wonderful done - love those lin...Bravo fireblossom, wonderful done - love those lines "She has read your tarot, she has your number".... reminds me of youthful hot days....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48888038638203853522010-08-15T07:15:46.831-04:002010-08-15T07:15:46.831-04:00big grins...skipping to the valley...big grins...skipping to the valley...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84058299821264638832010-08-15T02:50:17.556-04:002010-08-15T02:50:17.556-04:00I felt the pounding pace - the sense of urgency to...I felt the pounding pace - the sense of urgency to grasp the moment!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30834460332253035252010-08-14T17:23:23.544-04:002010-08-14T17:23:23.544-04:00Whatever made you write this wonderful poem..thank...Whatever made you write this wonderful poem..thanks..see what a prompt can do!!<br /> Picnic at Hanging Rock...one spooky movie!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37626107633032301182010-08-14T16:47:39.793-04:002010-08-14T16:47:39.793-04:00Fireblossom this is amazing writing! You always ha...Fireblossom this is amazing writing! You always have something unigue and wonderful to contribute. I always look forward to more!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48495370772118979272010-08-13T20:44:37.520-04:002010-08-13T20:44:37.520-04:00Hmmm knowing Shay she could take this to an unexpe...Hmmm knowing Shay she could take this to an unexpected end.<br /><br />Nice one dear<br /><br />you never disappoint<br /><br />smiles from the Moonmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74569771125610528332010-08-13T20:34:29.130-04:002010-08-13T20:34:29.130-04:00Oh awesome, Shay!!
Just awesome. Well, not JUST a...Oh awesome, Shay!!<br /><br />Just awesome. Well, not JUST awesome -- so many other good things too.<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27522122737834860012010-08-13T20:20:03.653-04:002010-08-13T20:20:03.653-04:00Kiss her already! So fun, reminds me of boys I dat...Kiss her already! So fun, reminds me of boys I dated when I was young.CMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15697762495151569561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77129544018671116332010-08-13T16:45:17.130-04:002010-08-13T16:45:17.130-04:00OH! Kissin' Kissin' that's what I'...OH! Kissin' Kissin' that's what I've a been a Missin'...<br /><br />:) mmmm... came by for a fix, leavin' never disappointed!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80118514057035309722010-08-13T15:21:14.693-04:002010-08-13T15:21:14.693-04:00Brava
Warm Aloha from Waikiki :)
Comfort S...Brava<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Warm Aloha from Waikiki :) <br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23713458677194134292010-08-13T15:06:36.165-04:002010-08-13T15:06:36.165-04:00I really enjoyed that.I really enjoyed that.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01748341137256175029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67771503958638202412010-08-13T14:55:09.173-04:002010-08-13T14:55:09.173-04:00Yes, it might, if you don't.Yes, it might, if you don't.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3380094617732940602010-08-13T13:35:43.212-04:002010-08-13T13:35:43.212-04:00you are truly a master of words - like the last li...you are truly a master of words - like the last line a lot..the world will not end if you go down the valley to find her heartbeat, but might if you don'tClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54570107527145835582010-08-13T12:54:56.677-04:002010-08-13T12:54:56.677-04:00'she knows your tarot' ... 'she has yo...'she knows your tarot' ... 'she has your number' ... I love the feel of those words. Very nicely written! And yes, it could be put to music.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61587418522427025982010-08-13T12:17:47.972-04:002010-08-13T12:17:47.972-04:00I loved the ending of this one:~)
Oh, I see you ...I loved the ending of this one:~) <br /><br />Oh, I see you wrote it for Magpie. Another person I know writes for Magpie, Linda. She visits my site...she generally writes short stories.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67589554196425794532010-08-13T11:04:43.134-04:002010-08-13T11:04:43.134-04:00No, the world won't end if you kiss her.No, the world won't end if you kiss her.machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38478529235054768852010-08-13T09:37:59.006-04:002010-08-13T09:37:59.006-04:00In moments of deep emotion it does feel as if the ...In moments of deep emotion it does feel as if the world will end .. <br /><br />And I knew, just knew that photo was from Picnic at Hanging Rock .. awesomeDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50926312573450528852010-08-13T08:48:18.903-04:002010-08-13T08:48:18.903-04:00"Forget the sky.
She will shake the sun out o..."Forget the sky.<br />She will shake the sun out of her hair,<br />No matter how much you chart houses, trines, oppositions,<br />At the start of the day--<br />Fever."<br /><br />Loved this even more after looking up the meaning of "trines'. It is always good to have a new word for the day.Granny Anniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18165058412950953296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13192589287334975672010-08-13T08:24:44.096-04:002010-08-13T08:24:44.096-04:00so if she weighs as much as a duck...
No seriousl...so if she weighs as much as a duck...<br /><br />No seriously... this would make a great 60's retro song. I like!Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34467974235584714442010-08-13T07:55:02.924-04:002010-08-13T07:55:02.924-04:00Nice! I totally agree with Willow. . . this would ...Nice! I totally agree with Willow. . . this would be one fab piece for a song, i would listen to it all the time. perfectAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3359497488672461752010-08-13T05:00:58.151-04:002010-08-13T05:00:58.151-04:00Ooh! Hot. I loved it. The world might indeed end :...Ooh! Hot. I loved it. The world might indeed end :)Tabitha Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08196816108272065974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12049207469687815662010-08-13T03:04:59.217-04:002010-08-13T03:04:59.217-04:00Curiously evocative. I like it, a lot.Curiously evocative. I like it, a lot.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55088065576667036562010-08-13T01:15:53.718-04:002010-08-13T01:15:53.718-04:00You are so persuasive in the best of ways, Chica! ...You are so persuasive in the best of ways, Chica! Love it and that movie is so freaky ("Picnic at Hanging Rock"). I thought it was going to be predictable, but no. I didn't love it but I loved that it wasn't predictable.Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40340472566520213772010-08-12T23:15:00.031-04:002010-08-12T23:15:00.031-04:00Good advice to any age.
ElizabethGood advice to any age.<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86181119173343117512010-08-12T23:12:31.398-04:002010-08-12T23:12:31.398-04:00That motored Fireblossom..va va va vrooom...with t...That motored Fireblossom..va va va vrooom...with truth.And vulnerability.Thank you for sharing.Tabitha.Montgomeryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07462651710980805568noreply@blogger.com