tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5086244739800578604..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): RequestFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83089253744078257602011-03-16T18:38:56.397-04:002011-03-16T18:38:56.397-04:00Spiky, wonderful use of sparse line breaks/languag...Spiky, wonderful use of sparse line breaks/language. Uber-effective.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42060130481027605722011-03-12T08:29:00.814-05:002011-03-12T08:29:00.814-05:00A great verse.. and nice emotional ride.. I enjoye...A great verse.. and nice emotional ride.. I enjoyed it. So raw and strong... thanks for sharing...<br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-memories-from-living.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36868949909289885862011-03-12T05:52:34.517-05:002011-03-12T05:52:34.517-05:00I wish my mother was alive to read this. You just ...I wish my mother was alive to read this. You just described her marriage to her first (of four) husbands. I mean Zing!<br /><br />I like reading others' comments to you and sure am glad I didn't miss the little exchange between you and the Windbag. :0Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16622349783748677922011-03-10T15:28:02.865-05:002011-03-10T15:28:02.865-05:00That Babbitt..he won't risk it for a shard of ...That Babbitt..he won't risk it for a shard of ice,I'm afraid. Keen write!<br />GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21112804246206780372011-03-10T14:26:36.997-05:002011-03-10T14:26:36.997-05:00Mmmm...I found your comment almost as interesting ...Mmmm...I found your comment almost as interesting as your poem. I have no talent for poetry myself, but I enjoy yours.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74889281656279934922011-03-10T10:29:58.706-05:002011-03-10T10:29:58.706-05:00Stolen wedding dresses line the halls of a museum ...Stolen wedding dresses line the halls of a museum in Khartoum. I flew there once in a Harry Chapin tune.<br /><br />Damn snow -- Don't they have post offices in San Antonio too?? :)<br /><br />xoxo to you, my still-favorite poet.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32836674658410988302011-03-09T22:02:41.543-05:002011-03-09T22:02:41.543-05:00"If you can't be civil, Piss Off ??"..."If you can't be civil, Piss Off ??"<br /><br />Isn't that an oxymoron? Or maybe just a moron.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19893453013956218812011-03-09T21:32:16.907-05:002011-03-09T21:32:16.907-05:00^^^Dear Windpasser,
Like most blowhards, you can ...^^^Dear Windpasser,<br /><br />Like most blowhards, you can dish it out, but you don't much like taking it. You go around making your lengthy, pompous, clueless comments at other people's blogs, notwithstanding that you have utterly no writing talent whatsoever. Your "poetry" is hilariously bad. So I pricked your ego. It needed it.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41891676736918652462011-03-09T20:28:34.958-05:002011-03-09T20:28:34.958-05:00I did not appreciate your smart ass comment about ...I did not appreciate your smart ass comment about my poem about the little girl asking Mom about death. If you can't be civil or thoughtful, you need not make insensitive comments. In other words, Piss Off.<br /><br />Tiger WindwalkerBig Sur Blogispherehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13080435178381510742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26988186473847674812011-03-09T20:08:41.447-05:002011-03-09T20:08:41.447-05:00Aahh..deliciously dark, Shay!! And so very allurin...Aahh..deliciously dark, Shay!! And so very alluring.. well, at least to the keen reading eye... <br />I hope he takes that risk.. I am sure it'll be worth it..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22779419709178129032011-03-09T19:17:52.437-05:002011-03-09T19:17:52.437-05:00Really enjoyed reading this...would you care to da...Really enjoyed reading this...would you care to dance?Charlie Paranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70147615763925683942011-03-09T19:08:41.890-05:002011-03-09T19:08:41.890-05:00"As if I had been born into the palm of your ..."As if I had been born into the palm of your hand..." Nice line. Hopefully, he'll take a risk or two for you :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-497486999703968642011-03-09T16:55:49.211-05:002011-03-09T16:55:49.211-05:00I don't really have words to tell you how I fe...I don't really have words to tell you how I felt about this. It's too stunning for words. So good.Luna Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00577750498136765025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3261632733421573332011-03-09T15:52:01.126-05:002011-03-09T15:52:01.126-05:00damn fine work my friend...damn fine work my friend...Marshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74630183476265986502011-03-09T15:32:58.687-05:002011-03-09T15:32:58.687-05:00Nice snarl and bite! :)
PadmavaniNice snarl and bite! :)<br />PadmavaniPadmavanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16599409031618354347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79531293645516454362011-03-09T13:22:32.257-05:002011-03-09T13:22:32.257-05:00Raven and I had the same favorite line!Raven and I had the same favorite line!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73263154228801332972011-03-09T13:06:08.533-05:002011-03-09T13:06:08.533-05:00I hope he's man enough for her, but something ...I hope he's man enough for her, but something tells me he can't handle an ice witch like this one. Chilling poem, and sharp as an icicle.lizziviggihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15921603615699013169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50454388602713403362011-03-09T11:22:57.477-05:002011-03-09T11:22:57.477-05:00nice play between expectation and frustration...ho...nice play between expectation and frustration...hope he risked it..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28347990850282727582011-03-09T11:03:44.072-05:002011-03-09T11:03:44.072-05:00Bald guys are still sexy, right?Bald guys are still sexy, right?machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53384652437346900122011-03-09T10:30:48.896-05:002011-03-09T10:30:48.896-05:00and with a feathery hammer, an offering to bliss
...and with a feathery hammer, an offering to bliss<br /><br />I like this<br /><br />Peace, hpknot eyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14238403848734436106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44635370202144993652011-03-09T10:30:11.067-05:002011-03-09T10:30:11.067-05:00and with a feathery hammer, an offering to bliss
...and with a feathery hammer, an offering to bliss<br /><br />I like this<br /><br />Peace, hpknot eyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14238403848734436106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52095263639542658322011-03-09T08:57:22.226-05:002011-03-09T08:57:22.226-05:00A feral matrimonial, fer sure ... you do an excell...A feral matrimonial, fer sure ... you do an excellent job whiting out the old purities with white fury. I daresay you're married enough to the vatic mob. - BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21290017556931689252011-03-09T08:39:49.200-05:002011-03-09T08:39:49.200-05:00FB - you combine beauty and coolness. Nice one sh...FB - you combine beauty and coolness. Nice one shot!Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26283131215032161322011-03-09T08:39:29.132-05:002011-03-09T08:39:29.132-05:00A declaration of self awareness and self respect. ...A declaration of self awareness and self respect. This is me. I like me. There. Terrific, Fireblossom!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43166339001866848052011-03-09T07:37:27.478-05:002011-03-09T07:37:27.478-05:00'Unless, naturally, you mean the purity of my ...'Unless, naturally, you mean the purity of my disappointment at your revealed ordinariness.'<br /><br />I loved the entire piece, but this line was my favorite!Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290572009221670011noreply@blogger.com