tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5311652419428351319..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Girl SphynxFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-418907434379943372014-09-23T07:53:35.809-04:002014-09-23T07:53:35.809-04:00love the poem ~ fabulous take on the prompt ~ but ...love the poem ~ fabulous take on the prompt ~ but which are the lies not well enough told? the ones every time you see her not letting on how you really feel or the lie at the end...<br /><br />"I never blushed, I swear."<br /><br />{smile}<br /><br />great music selection as well!<br />♥my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27473735611848117532014-09-14T12:55:30.592-04:002014-09-14T12:55:30.592-04:00I agree with Lolamouse!I agree with Lolamouse!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21743413903053369842014-09-13T22:57:22.345-04:002014-09-13T22:57:22.345-04:00Brass in Pocket!!!! Squee!
I really dig this p...Brass in Pocket!!!! Squee! <br />I really dig this piece, and love the duplicity of the narrators thoughts: her object of her affection is just that friendly with everyone. Me thinks there are so many levels here, I can live in this poem for the whole of September. Well done and viva la!!!!Isadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59328964790000785872014-09-12T11:41:23.061-04:002014-09-12T11:41:23.061-04:00"I act so straight
that I can't even bend..."I act so straight<br />that I can't even bend to sit down"<br /><br />love that!Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89600882248138050432014-09-11T19:25:33.734-04:002014-09-11T19:25:33.734-04:00Awww, better luck next time? I love your descript...Awww, better luck next time? I love your descriptions, and I sure would like to meet someone, "...warmer than a San Antonio tiled roof." Nice one Shay.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56067703210525119742014-09-11T15:31:34.276-04:002014-09-11T15:31:34.276-04:00love that song.
so, what lie was told better here...love that song.<br /><br />so, what lie was told better here? hmmm. ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28761788484595829092014-09-11T14:27:30.438-04:002014-09-11T14:27:30.438-04:00So sad! Which makes it kind of funny. This one k...So sad! Which makes it kind of funny. This one knows, I think, and resistance requires a kind of stubborness that defies expectation. O! to be able to flirt back like a straight woman would and keep her guessing.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30163763136950271922014-09-11T11:49:07.041-04:002014-09-11T11:49:07.041-04:00I TOAD-ally love this! So straight I cant sit down...I TOAD-ally love this! So straight I cant sit down. Smiling. Plus the rainbow jewelry. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90616600384991161062014-09-11T10:12:25.130-04:002014-09-11T10:12:25.130-04:00I like what Sam said... and add a heartfelt sigh f...I like what Sam said... and add a heartfelt sigh for any who suffers unrequited love.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68754837622376067002014-09-11T10:11:59.469-04:002014-09-11T10:11:59.469-04:00you never know …. you never know …. Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46517921392974886352014-09-11T09:38:21.119-04:002014-09-11T09:38:21.119-04:00She knows...and she likes it!She knows...and she likes it!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2697167402486019952014-09-11T06:26:55.890-04:002014-09-11T06:26:55.890-04:00Seems well-told to me!Seems well-told to me!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1061950349458630032014-09-11T05:30:00.363-04:002014-09-11T05:30:00.363-04:00Lie to survive. How sad is that?Lie to survive. How sad is that?Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45149786061110255122014-09-11T03:46:59.201-04:002014-09-11T03:46:59.201-04:00Some lies keep us a liveSome lies keep us a liveAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8567038393758254602014-09-10T23:28:02.904-04:002014-09-10T23:28:02.904-04:00Excellent - this is the painful kinda lie...love t...Excellent - this is the painful kinda lie...love the so straight cant's even bend to sit line...:) Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67755978746180500782014-09-10T22:26:49.467-04:002014-09-10T22:26:49.467-04:00OMG? I act so straight that I can't even bend...OMG? I act so straight that I can't even bend to sit down?? How in the world do you come up with these gems! Love, love this Shay!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76594074160997423802014-09-10T19:22:00.628-04:002014-09-10T19:22:00.628-04:00Yeah, and then some self assured gal cruises in an...Yeah, and then some self assured gal cruises in and opens that right UP!<br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> =^..^= . <3<br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47551525853360825512014-09-10T19:16:01.538-04:002014-09-10T19:16:01.538-04:00You just never know, though...I love the sense of ...You just never know, though...I love the sense of intimacy here, as the speaker lets you sip a bit of the sweet taste of her secrets, even if she has to keep all that from the person who matters more. Very nifty use of both 'sphinx' and 'aviatrix,' too. I also feel I must say, a wink is as good as a nod to a blind horse, for some reason.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18694934312714056722014-09-10T18:08:12.687-04:002014-09-10T18:08:12.687-04:00*sigh**sigh*TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com