tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5371962148832445868..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Love Song From A Plain WomanFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46735611622881059602012-08-20T22:43:39.253-04:002012-08-20T22:43:39.253-04:00Wonderful, I love what you have done with this emo...Wonderful, I love what you have done with this emotion! The imagery guided us into so many enchanted corners~ :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9318298282648622012012-08-20T22:36:13.566-04:002012-08-20T22:36:13.566-04:00A lot of fun in this as well as beauty. k. A lot of fun in this as well as beauty. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62070550284496965712012-08-20T22:09:13.557-04:002012-08-20T22:09:13.557-04:00Brilliant love poem, Shay. It brought tears to my ...Brilliant love poem, Shay. It brought tears to my eyes.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80772350422938947982012-08-20T21:23:37.538-04:002012-08-20T21:23:37.538-04:00There are so many ways that a writer can go wrong ...There are so many ways that a writer can go wrong with this notion--a piece that wallows in self-pity or spite, something that wails and rends its garments, as it were. This piece finds a balance between hard-won, homespun wisdom and the transcendent nature of a love that goes beyond the mirror and the smile. Does it soar? Hell, yes--but it keeps a judicious watch out for treetops and radio antennas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88776089968226374602012-08-20T20:05:45.448-04:002012-08-20T20:05:45.448-04:00Gorgeous, sumptuous, expansive - all words I assoc...Gorgeous, sumptuous, expansive - all words I associate with breathtaking beauty, like the sea and the sky. Wonderful!Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10577433623159520532012-08-20T17:07:45.265-04:002012-08-20T17:07:45.265-04:00"If I have beauty, it sleeps twined with devo..."If I have beauty, it sleeps twined with devotion . . ." I know! SO wouldn't be wonderful to feel that every minute? And you do: <br />"I know that the old vain goddesses in their marble temples <br />Must grind their teeth and spit<br />For helpless envy<br />Of us."<br />____<br />What a way to say "we have something special" and mean it!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22072847767312777652012-08-20T14:20:01.942-04:002012-08-20T14:20:01.942-04:00Devotion is gorgeous! I agree, the vanity of skin...Devotion is gorgeous! I agree, the vanity of skin cannot compare...nice write.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18434427487113461972012-08-20T14:19:01.363-04:002012-08-20T14:19:01.363-04:00The singular beauty of devotion, who could fail to...The singular beauty of devotion, who could fail to be smitten by such words - no doubt the out-dated goddesses cringe with envy.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84418290145181959112012-08-20T13:03:17.037-04:002012-08-20T13:03:17.037-04:00ah, the beauty of the words mimic the beauty of th...ah, the beauty of the words mimic the beauty of the writerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16393560064251223292012-08-20T12:36:05.988-04:002012-08-20T12:36:05.988-04:00This is great. It's exactly what love is. Thos...This is great. It's exactly what love is. Those gods and goddesses can eat their hearts out.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79571902265587118842012-08-20T12:10:44.731-04:002012-08-20T12:10:44.731-04:00I agree - nothing plain about this. I agree - nothing plain about this. Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42803723075440753502012-08-20T11:08:53.892-04:002012-08-20T11:08:53.892-04:00Yes, I agree with Sherry's comment.
In this y...Yes, I agree with Sherry's comment.<br /><br />In this your truly define the pureness of love especially for those that may not have eyes to see, ears to hear, smells obstructed. <br /><br />This type of love ascends beyond the sensorial world of the mundane.<br /><br />Gracias for this beautiful shareMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6526459792044982182012-08-20T11:02:08.284-04:002012-08-20T11:02:08.284-04:00nothing 'plain' about this ..nothing 'plain' about this .. Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35140783699783351152012-08-20T10:34:42.416-04:002012-08-20T10:34:42.416-04:00so easy. lovely!so easy. lovely!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40867571872721072442012-08-20T09:00:56.750-04:002012-08-20T09:00:56.750-04:00Really lovely lines...my fav was the opening...Really lovely lines...my fav was the opening...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57419255852602239842012-08-20T08:30:25.589-04:002012-08-20T08:30:25.589-04:00really beautiful.....if I have beauty, it sleeps t...really beautiful.....if I have beauty, it sleeps twined with devotion....lovely lines...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47640708884568474532012-08-20T06:58:58.249-04:002012-08-20T06:58:58.249-04:00Beautiful love poem...Shay. Your poet's voice...Beautiful love poem...Shay. Your poet's voice sings clear and true!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76906605205786414002012-08-20T00:11:02.519-04:002012-08-20T00:11:02.519-04:00You are beautiful to write such exquisite poetry.You are beautiful to write such exquisite poetry.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27232668239923693342012-08-19T23:11:23.715-04:002012-08-19T23:11:23.715-04:00"when the sun ran her light across the wild p..."when the sun ran her light across the wild places nobody owns" ... I'm swooning, and I'm not even the beloved!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49028750243864874652012-08-19T22:22:27.398-04:002012-08-19T22:22:27.398-04:00{{{sigh}}} i adore your love poems!
♥{{{sigh}}} i adore your love poems!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17480664953988879762012-08-19T21:36:38.802-04:002012-08-19T21:36:38.802-04:00I love this. I swear I can hear the crickets.I love this. I swear I can hear the crickets.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40844912427835151072012-08-19T20:55:06.013-04:002012-08-19T20:55:06.013-04:00Nothing plain at all about the heart and mind that...Nothing plain at all about the heart and mind that can write - and feel - about love the way you do, Shay. Anyone would be privileged and honored to be loved by you. You write love poems like nobody else. This one is absolutely lovely. And would indeed make goddesses gnash their teeth in envy. I know it makes POETS gnash our teeth, and even rend a garment or two.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71226702900447869482012-08-19T19:46:01.711-04:002012-08-19T19:46:01.711-04:00A gorgeous poem that I'm so happy to have read...A gorgeous poem that I'm so happy to have read. Love the phrase "when the sun ran her light across the wild places nobody owns,"Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19113095073639847352012-08-19T19:43:07.510-04:002012-08-19T19:43:07.510-04:00Beauty is as beauty does, also, I think, and it is...Beauty is as beauty does, also, I think, and it is doing it here. Your love poems are some of the most comforting and uncluttered of any I've read, Shay. '...the places nobody owns' is a line that just sings, and in a million voices.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47013138036295701242012-08-19T19:35:17.251-04:002012-08-19T19:35:17.251-04:00Words that would make the worshipped one swoon...Words that would make the worshipped one swoon...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.com