tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5478278093633008056..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Love ProofsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64460501462936663362015-09-27T01:54:35.956-04:002015-09-27T01:54:35.956-04:00Findings: crazy can be induced, love cannot.
Howev...Findings: crazy can be induced, love cannot.<br />However, if love occurs independently, crazy follows without effort. Love that! Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12674138428623098412015-09-26T00:47:40.657-04:002015-09-26T00:47:40.657-04:00No one develops characters and voice in such a sho...No one develops characters and voice in such a short space as you do! This somehow recalls to mind the book I am reading now "The Scarlet Sisters: Sex, Suffrage, and Scandal in the Gilded Age" (Maybe the attitude). Not sure how accurate it is .. but it is a fascinating read so far (not too far into it yet). Here is the author talking about her book: http://www.c-span.org/video/?318367-1/myra-macpherson-scarlet-sisters Thought you might find it interesting... <br /><br />Have you ever thought of writing a novel? Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22810219672648690252015-09-25T18:07:08.643-04:002015-09-25T18:07:08.643-04:00Perfect. And I liked your commentary on poetry. &#...Perfect. And I liked your commentary on poetry. 'useless and embarrassing.'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47063345297159016352015-09-25T14:07:21.364-04:002015-09-25T14:07:21.364-04:00This is fabulously mad. It's frenetic feel wor...This is fabulously mad. It's frenetic feel works with the topic. Love can seem like mad science at times.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48655731888383593882015-09-25T13:22:46.833-04:002015-09-25T13:22:46.833-04:00Science pays better... stick to that and become a ...Science pays better... stick to that and become a rocket scientist, maybe she can get more men than mice.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3438241626864956292015-09-25T13:13:53.246-04:002015-09-25T13:13:53.246-04:00OH! "Crazy follows without effort" :)
a...OH! "Crazy follows without effort" :) <br />and THIS: <br />"effortlessly sparking the Tesla coil of her heart." <br /><br />Awesomeness. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85347088612937670762015-09-25T11:26:47.708-04:002015-09-25T11:26:47.708-04:00I absolutely adore this. I wanted it to go on!I absolutely adore this. I wanted it to go on!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24662410358851404302015-09-25T09:35:18.269-04:002015-09-25T09:35:18.269-04:00They say truth is stranger than fiction, well, it ...They say truth is stranger than fiction, well, it is funnier and sharper too. Great job with this- love it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21172189733307832452015-09-25T09:20:15.350-04:002015-09-25T09:20:15.350-04:00"However, if love occurs independently, crazy..."However, if love occurs independently, crazy follows without effort." What a light hand you give to the dreary and sentimental subject--like champagne instead of muddy bitter old tea. there is a quizzical and teasing feel to this that really only underlines the way the truth of love can easily level our lives. I also love the mad science.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13111416254177175122015-09-25T01:02:52.069-04:002015-09-25T01:02:52.069-04:00Oh, I love this object lesson in how 'stupid/c...Oh, I love this object lesson in how 'stupid/crazy' love can make the best of us. My favourite couplet is the one presenting the findings of the investigation. Thanks for participating, Shay.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15960668345164779552015-09-25T01:00:32.508-04:002015-09-25T01:00:32.508-04:00Findings: crazy can be induced, love cannot.
Howev...Findings: crazy can be induced, love cannot.<br />However, if love occurs independently, crazy follows without effort.<br /><br />Brilliant. And--sadly--true.<br />Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81940603241555924252015-09-25T00:22:29.347-04:002015-09-25T00:22:29.347-04:00I would vote for her to stick to science! But the...I would vote for her to stick to science! But the heart will do what it will! A lot of fun, Shay. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73686136107645702632015-09-24T20:01:44.723-04:002015-09-24T20:01:44.723-04:00I like this comfortable mix of science, fairy tale...I like this comfortable mix of science, fairy tale and Film Noir wrapped around a great character voice--very Rosemary Clooneyish--Kicking.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62360977843913687332015-09-24T17:48:31.016-04:002015-09-24T17:48:31.016-04:00"With the white mice, and then with human sub..."With the white mice, and then with human subjects,<br />during wartime, when anything goes.<br /><br />Findings: crazy can be induced, love cannot.<br />However, if love occurs independently, crazy follows without effort."<br /><br />The kernal of genius in this krazy korn!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA <br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> =^..^=<br /><br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88628784172074961612015-09-24T17:19:47.958-04:002015-09-24T17:19:47.958-04:00How I love this! Especially how "crazy follow...How I love this! Especially how "crazy follows without effort." Yup. Love the science lab voice in this poem - very humorous.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com