tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5651644099263468253..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): LongingFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39581732321945729912010-01-12T20:34:26.170-05:002010-01-12T20:34:26.170-05:00I like the end with a twist. (((Chloe)))I like the end with a twist. (((Chloe)))Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18048391027025970802010-01-08T07:35:29.750-05:002010-01-08T07:35:29.750-05:00Wow, what a beautiful read... too many delicious i...Wow, what a beautiful read... too many <i>delicious</i> images and thoughts to quote them all...Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66503225432810685552010-01-06T18:50:58.647-05:002010-01-06T18:50:58.647-05:00It's such a pleasure to read such fine writing...It's such a pleasure to read such fine writing out here in our blog community Fireblossom ;)<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.Tabitha.Montgomeryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07462651710980805568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90867087451942083762010-01-06T01:40:43.025-05:002010-01-06T01:40:43.025-05:00never satisfied, always ostracized, ever categoriz...never satisfied, always ostracized, ever categorized,.....a "white bird in a golden cage"Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02687020216039527521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54102568862958390152010-01-06T01:25:41.224-05:002010-01-06T01:25:41.224-05:00"Suspended in honey" LOVE that!
More pl..."Suspended in honey" LOVE that!<br /><br />More please.<br />xoJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22439918428071774052010-01-05T21:23:28.187-05:002010-01-05T21:23:28.187-05:00haunting really, in a yin and yang kind of way...t...haunting really, in a yin and yang kind of way...to be everything...what a dream!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36278438375346655342010-01-05T21:15:29.022-05:002010-01-05T21:15:29.022-05:00The ending aches. I love this.The ending aches. I love this.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20268121224001960572010-01-05T18:17:16.743-05:002010-01-05T18:17:16.743-05:00I've come back and back and back again.
I am ...I've come back and back and back again.<br /><br />I am moved each time.machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26261064508927457172010-01-05T12:38:17.463-05:002010-01-05T12:38:17.463-05:00Chloe I love. Succubus I fear--but only slightly. ...Chloe I love. Succubus I fear--but only slightly. I wish to be awake when something happens in the night, even in a dream. I want to remember.<br /><br />"At home in the skin of anything she has ever done".....SERENITY, YESSS!<br /><br />"Her eyes are now, as ever, the undisturbed center..." <br /><br />One can nearly always SEE where there are lies...in the eyes.<br /><br />Fireblossom, I do not see HOW one could visit here once, and not return day after day.steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498524940140288735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46790172259713280252010-01-05T08:47:15.857-05:002010-01-05T08:47:15.857-05:00i'd wither away should i no longer be able to ...i'd wither away should i no longer be able to remember my dreams...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42075267974555625832010-01-05T04:28:28.497-05:002010-01-05T04:28:28.497-05:00You got me - I'll be back ;0)You got me - I'll be back ;0)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58650546733557352802010-01-05T02:14:49.715-05:002010-01-05T02:14:49.715-05:00I never remember my dreams just a strange sort of ...I never remember my dreams just a strange sort of déjà vu so now I'm wondering what that means for me.<br />Another lovely piece. Thanks for sharing,<br />Simone.The romantic query letter and the happy-ever-afterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13382165250238920938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13005035465684931702010-01-05T00:44:33.945-05:002010-01-05T00:44:33.945-05:00"being suspended in honey" - perfect ima..."being suspended in honey" - perfect imagery.<br /><br />Chloe and the Succubus - now that is some powerful chemistry.<br /><br />Wonderful writing, Fireblossom.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81343634674791411272010-01-05T00:02:08.485-05:002010-01-05T00:02:08.485-05:00I love the part about being suspended in honey.I love the part about being suspended in honey.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47189552087162473242010-01-04T20:55:23.063-05:002010-01-04T20:55:23.063-05:00Keep dreaming, Shay!
Keep Yearning!
Aloha, Sis
...Keep dreaming, Shay!<br /><br />Keep Yearning!<br /><br /><br />Aloha, Sis<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37842118421014401162010-01-04T20:00:41.211-05:002010-01-04T20:00:41.211-05:00I love Chloe and I love Succubus, both so much... ...I love Chloe and I love Succubus, both so much... each represents what the other lacks so they match so very well...<br /><br />...But I am a dreamer.Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30546620570242993212010-01-04T18:58:41.961-05:002010-01-04T18:58:41.961-05:00Incredible!
This is powerful stuff.
I can barely...Incredible!<br /><br />This is powerful stuff. <br />I can barely read it, I'm strangely distracted.<br />My mind keeps going back, I've become lost in your story, Shay<br /><br />Your Chloe is formidable indeed !<br /><br /><br />...And the photograph doesn't help much ;-)machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79877796856261634472010-01-04T17:34:27.239-05:002010-01-04T17:34:27.239-05:00Oh, the stories the Succubus could tell about Chlo...Oh, the stories the Succubus could tell about Chloe...<br /><br />Beautiful, Shay...as always.Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58634969607390386822010-01-04T17:15:38.311-05:002010-01-04T17:15:38.311-05:00The word garden is full of wonderful ripe tomatoes...The word garden is full of wonderful ripe tomatoes today, delicious words!<br /><br />SecretiaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com