tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post574096052768735912..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): ClydeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69449551354434160602011-02-18T21:24:24.907-05:002011-02-18T21:24:24.907-05:00This is almost dizzying! Very cool, Shay.This is almost dizzying! Very cool, Shay.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2444287223627272992011-02-18T15:01:09.599-05:002011-02-18T15:01:09.599-05:00That was pretty cool. :)That was pretty cool. :)Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9711794214935538002011-02-18T14:54:55.184-05:002011-02-18T14:54:55.184-05:00nice....wish i could flow back a little...nice....wish i could flow back a little...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20800888121589268262011-02-18T14:08:02.873-05:002011-02-18T14:08:02.873-05:00Shay,
Are you trying to be new age Merlin now? T...Shay, <br /><br />Are you trying to be new age Merlin now? This was great...a backwards and forward in time poem:~)<br /><br />Well done, oh wise woman poet!Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89260368374580551882011-02-18T14:04:31.372-05:002011-02-18T14:04:31.372-05:00Terrific concept piece. You rewound the scene beau...Terrific concept piece. You rewound the scene beautifully!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68585773408474021892011-02-18T13:14:04.044-05:002011-02-18T13:14:04.044-05:00Love this, very surreal which is a great way to be...Love this, very surreal which is a great way to be!!!<br /><br />Loved this as all your writing!<br />Love to youAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15127343815869529555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67734634164963745052011-02-18T13:08:40.898-05:002011-02-18T13:08:40.898-05:00Wowzers, this is wicked good! How do you think up ...Wowzers, this is wicked good! How do you think up these things? Can see the teabag, the cup, the whole re-wind, so vividly. And then the last lines: perfection. You are soooo brilliant!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75936426038245671202011-02-18T13:08:06.722-05:002011-02-18T13:08:06.722-05:00Definitely surreal......incredibly awesome.Definitely surreal......incredibly awesome.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52323818468314089872011-02-18T12:43:07.416-05:002011-02-18T12:43:07.416-05:00Oh, that last line just wrapped this up so beautif...Oh, that last line just wrapped this up so beautifully, Shay. Your imagery is superb.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25737818914562898572011-02-18T12:21:53.472-05:002011-02-18T12:21:53.472-05:00As usual I loved it. Very vivid!As usual I loved it. Very vivid!Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290572009221670011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88796866596213605932011-02-18T11:41:58.773-05:002011-02-18T11:41:58.773-05:00great vivid imaging...I wish sometimes we could hi...great vivid imaging...I wish sometimes we could hit the rewind button...Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8053686760312761712011-02-18T11:25:36.735-05:002011-02-18T11:25:36.735-05:00'unreading a story' ... what a concept! Y...'unreading a story' ... what a concept! Yankees fans in this house! Nice poem, Ms. Shay!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83562558999160323232011-02-18T10:42:13.761-05:002011-02-18T10:42:13.761-05:00he must have stumbled into Danny's Coffee Shop...he must have stumbled into Danny's Coffee Shop.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63964338783603307452011-02-18T10:40:27.845-05:002011-02-18T10:40:27.845-05:00Superb and surreal, highly effective; it's alm...Superb and surreal, highly effective; it's almost literally a visual experience, as indeed the bright flash sensation of a moment of insight often is. Fine poem, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com