tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5874554825038952961..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Wandering EyeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53507977987544853262015-01-31T13:57:59.801-05:002015-01-31T13:57:59.801-05:00oh, you evil little vixen, you!
♥oh, you evil little vixen, you!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3524023446886426152015-01-30T18:47:20.636-05:002015-01-30T18:47:20.636-05:00This is glorious. I love stanzas 2 and 5.This is glorious. I love stanzas 2 and 5.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57762499487855114932015-01-30T15:29:40.200-05:002015-01-30T15:29:40.200-05:00oooooh--this is another poem that makes me want to...oooooh--this is another poem that makes me want to find out the rest of the story. C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1508443797722709122015-01-29T14:19:56.468-05:002015-01-29T14:19:56.468-05:00Amazing how you can take a photo and make it your ...Amazing how you can take a photo and make it your own. Brilliant as always!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10931969073259457552015-01-29T00:31:28.822-05:002015-01-29T00:31:28.822-05:00Wow. That title alone...dang, you are so good.Wow. That title alone...dang, you are so good.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53813849018558244792015-01-28T16:34:21.772-05:002015-01-28T16:34:21.772-05:00Second stanza is my favorite, but I like it all.
...Second stanza is my favorite, but I like it all.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22274061872102667272015-01-28T13:06:15.442-05:002015-01-28T13:06:15.442-05:00devouring flutter I unleash from concealment?
the...devouring flutter I unleash from concealment?<br /><br />the whole poem takes me away. Someplace unreal.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61302663638263027002015-01-28T07:48:51.155-05:002015-01-28T07:48:51.155-05:00**almost falling into my tea like sugar cubes?**
...**almost falling into my tea like sugar cubes?**<br /><br />Love this image.<br />Love your words. xxmyinnerchick.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07523772091083412278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36577026299361992272015-01-27T15:28:12.507-05:002015-01-27T15:28:12.507-05:00You had me at the tea and sugar...always a treat w...You had me at the tea and sugar...always a treat when you show up...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84076084302606154912015-01-27T14:20:13.306-05:002015-01-27T14:20:13.306-05:00I remember the years when my eyes were downcast, m...I remember the years when my eyes were downcast, my mouth silent. While I plotted my escape! I too admired the cashmere sense of entitlement.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72594079638154436242015-01-27T13:12:27.212-05:002015-01-27T13:12:27.212-05:00interesting view !interesting view !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33224342747146522402015-01-27T07:55:38.119-05:002015-01-27T07:55:38.119-05:00This starts off with a strong image, understated a...This starts off with a strong image, understated and almost subtle, soft as those little fuzzy feelers on a moth's head, then it flies off into some toothy cashmere-consuming comment on the way things really are--almost two poems, really, one of self and one of the other alien world that must leave a moth rather hungry for the light and the taste of good wool. hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9309831540625048832015-01-27T00:32:00.749-05:002015-01-27T00:32:00.749-05:00Silence is never acceptance - still too many belie...Silence is never acceptance - still too many believe so,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24438116543149314732015-01-26T22:29:15.374-05:002015-01-26T22:29:15.374-05:00ahhhh that sense of entitlement!ahhhh that sense of entitlement!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23211725098295512572015-01-26T20:15:42.832-05:002015-01-26T20:15:42.832-05:00' your cashmere sense of entitlement.'
oh...' your cashmere sense of entitlement.'<br /><br />oh Yeah<br /><br /><br />[pulling for your pup<br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> <3 <br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82032321359589480662015-01-26T19:12:10.995-05:002015-01-26T19:12:10.995-05:00Sounds good. Those moths that emerge and expand b...Sounds good. Those moths that emerge and expand by wing and instinct should never be forgotten or lost.<br /><br />My wandering eye is perfectly innocent. It generally ends with a smile and generally a little wink.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25496994935026607512015-01-26T18:51:05.499-05:002015-01-26T18:51:05.499-05:00Almost falling into my tea like sugar cubes, just ...Almost falling into my tea like sugar cubes, just the first of lovely images. Beautiful.21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76722410084535450122015-01-26T18:13:12.421-05:002015-01-26T18:13:12.421-05:00I like where this one ends up--"devouring flu...I like where this one ends up--"devouring flutter." Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71930629990373235832015-01-26T17:10:59.514-05:002015-01-26T17:10:59.514-05:00loved all the textural qualities and images this c...loved all the textural qualities and images this conjured up!!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72159992106806901922015-01-26T16:57:19.773-05:002015-01-26T16:57:19.773-05:00Tex already quoted my favorite line. But, I love ...Tex already quoted my favorite line. But, I love it all.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83672732292492725302015-01-26T16:54:20.635-05:002015-01-26T16:54:20.635-05:00It's the quiet, meek looking ones that are oft...It's the quiet, meek looking ones that are often the most dangerous.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-137449180961306192015-01-26T15:19:35.222-05:002015-01-26T15:19:35.222-05:00I like the idea of silent, unblinking, unleashing....I like the idea of silent, unblinking, unleashing. Maria Mainerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12839883252262642051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5885125814243572742015-01-26T15:14:56.862-05:002015-01-26T15:14:56.862-05:00Beautifully apt response to the prompt...Beautifully apt response to the prompt...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71030752150719048542015-01-26T13:41:57.961-05:002015-01-26T13:41:57.961-05:00no one sees or suspects the devouring flutter I un...no one sees or suspects the devouring flutter I unleash from concealment<br /><br />But what a punch it packs! :-)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14976148256079047652015-01-26T13:19:42.665-05:002015-01-26T13:19:42.665-05:00Feel free to express yourself because that is when...Feel free to express yourself because that is when you are truly happy. Besides, I think it is better to let your colors shine. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.com